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Swaron os :LOVE (current track)

Hey guys dis z ma first ever os rather for d first time m trying ma hand on writing something like dis dono hw it vl end up u guys vl like it or not hope u do..

I am nt soo happy wid d current track of d3 full of tension n to add to it all mrs. Raiprakash so this idea popped into ma head n thought of penning it down.. enough of ma blabbering here you go... hope u all vl njoy..

Here it goes

It starts from d day sharon had returned from her cousins wedding after saying everything about her and swayam to her mom n she s very happy.

Here on the other hand mr.raiprakash z too tensed and wanna separate sharon from swayam and wanna get her daughter to b engaged n settel down wid dis intension she vl come to mumbai.

As her daughters wish she vl b ready to meet swayam(d meet s d same as shown in d show I wont write it again)n insults swayam.dis wont go unnoticed by sharon firstly she thinks its jus a misunderstanding but mrs.raiprakash wud go on wid her plan of seperating swayam n sharon.

Finally sharon understands her moms intentions wen she try to trick her wid NYDA contract.and also realise dat her mom wants to separate her not only from swayam bt also from her frndz. Sharon nw decides to confront her mom for tricking her...sharon goes to her moms room

Shar(angry):hw cud you do dis to me mom

Mrp:what happened darling y r u soo hyper?

Shar:your asking me this after tricking me..

Mrp:I dint trick u sharon watever I did ws for your bettrment n for your future and for that you need to get out of here..

Shar:wat do u mean by for my betterment n my future?

Mrp(angry):sharon let me make it very clear I came here to convince u for the engagement of yours wid our business partners son n a very good frnd of your father n even to make u realise that, that guy swayam z not fit for u..

Shar(shocked):wat????????? (Tears rolling from her eyes n her voice trembling) finally she spoke how can you even think dat I wud get engaged to anyone other than swayam, he z ma life, ma sole reason to live and I cant even think of my life without him..

You know wat mom he ws der by my side all d tym..he gave me strenth to fight back asthama.. to bring back ma lost confidence.. its only because of him n ma frndz dat m alive...

(sharon ws completely shattered n fell on d ground crying soo badly because of this she got an asthama attack n she fainted mrp was completely shocked and scared to d core n in a hurry took sharon to the hospital)

In the hospital

Doctor took sharon inside for the check up n in d mean time mrp informed rey about sharon... rey informed whole gang n nw all were in d hospital waiting for d doctor.. on the other hand swayam ws completely numb the fear of loosing sharon once again made him feel worse he just prayed dat sharon wud b fyn soon..

Doctor came out of d room all rushed to him mrp asked hws sharon

Dr:she s bettr now still unconcious n thank god u bought her here soon it ws d major attack n nything cud happen bt nw no need to worry she z fyn..

(gang z fully shocked to knw abt sharons asthama except for simmi swayam and rey)

Rey:can v meet her doctor

Dr:yeah sure but don't give her any stress

Rey:ok dr thank u (gang s still shocked)

Swayam ws releaved dat sharon ws fyn tears trembling to fall out of his eyes any moment.. he ws happy that his sharon ws fyn n a smile crept on his lips inspite of tears

Mrp n all gang rushed to meet sharon bt rey started to search swayam n found him standing in d corner concerned.. rey knew wat swayam ws going through so without saying anything he jus hugged him n took swayam along wid him inorder o meet his sharon

Sharon ws still unconcious lying on d bed pale her eyes were swallon due to crying.. she ws looking lifeless and seeing this sight swayams heart ached.. sharon nw ws regaining her conciousness n d first name she took was SWAYAM

Swayam rushed to her held her hand.. sharon felt soo complete by his mere touch before anyone could say anything sharon jus hugged swayam tightly as if she z afraid that nyone could take her swayam away from her...

Kriya informed the dr. abt sharons state n dr. came n did her check up n gave a green signal saying that she s completely fine n can even take to home but she have to take proper rest n should not take any stress

Before mrp could say anything swayam spoke "I will take complete care that she rests properly n doesn't take any stress"

Simmi: wen swayam s wid sharon she can never have any tension because swayam z d only solution for all her problems m medicine for her illness

Sharon blushed at simmis comment n told her to shut up

Rey tried asking sharon hw all of a sudden she got an attack but sharon dint reply to his question but only stared at her mom (gang n rey thought not to question her n stress n juslet it go)

Sharon completely ignored her mom n went back home never leaving swayams hand for moment..

In the evening sharons place

The gang ws ready to leave wishing sharon good health (hugging her)

After d gang left ofcourse xcept for swayam..swayam ws instructing kaka abt sharons diet d food which she shud eat n which she shouldn't n many more things dis ws witnessed by both sharon n mrp..

A small smile crept on sharons face seeing her majnu soo concerned for her... n mrp ws amused to c dis.. somewhere also happy dat her daughter s wid such a guy who understands loves and care for her soo much..

After loads of instruction to kaka swayam came to sharon and asked her to take rest properly n also not to take any stress n also take medicines on tym after having dinner and no excuses for anything (swayam told all this on a serious tone) sharon kept smiling at him seeing his concern n love... after such a long lecture to sharon he started to leave..

Sharon (puppy dog face):thodi deir aur ruk jao

Swayam(smiling seeing his sharon):nahi sharon tumhe rest karneki zarurath hain tum rest karo muje abhi jaana hai kuch zaroori kaam hai

Sharon(angry):mujse bhi zaroori

Swayam:nahi baba tum mere liye sabse zaroori ho.. wo actually papa ka call aya tha wo kal aa rahe hain tho mujhe kuch tayari karni hai

Sharon(excited):papa a rahe hain... (realising wt she said)I mean uncle a rahe wo tho achi baath hai tho tum jao par kal a jana I vl miss u byee gud nyt..(hugging swayam)

Swayam(feeling ackward coz of mrp presence)gud nyt byee take care (hugging back)

Swayam to mrp: byee aunty gud nyt

Mrp(still confused wid wt just she saw):gud nyt

Swayam leaves from sharons place n goes to his home.. feeling relaxed and also happy dat his papa would be home..

Back to sharons place (raiprakash mansion)

Sharon widout even looking at her mom goes to her room her mom follows her..

Mrp:I knw sharon your angry on me and wont even wanna talk to me bt m sorry for hurting you jus bcause of me u got an attack I wud never be able to forgive myself for this m sorry beta plzz forgive me(no response from sharon)I miss judged swayam I thought ua jus attracted towards him n nothing else but now I realised how much you both love each other.. I tried to take you away from your love I ws soo wrong..plz forgive me beta plz I ws never wid u weneva u needed me for all those tyms m asking forgiveness plzz plzz sharon forgive your mom(crying)

Sharon(in tears):its okay mom.. its jus dat I cant afford to loose him he z everythng to me wen u or dad werent der wid me it ws him n ma frndz who stood by ma side as ma suppport system i cant loose anyone of them so plzzz don't take me away from dem plzz I cant think of any other guy than swayam in ma lyf mom so plz don't force me to get engaged to any other guy plz

Mrp:m sorry beta for wateva I did but nw I vll mend everything up no1 vl take u away from ur swayam or ua frndz..

Sharon(hugged her mom tight)thank u mom thank u soo much

Mrp (bit tensed) par sharon ek problem hai kal tumhare dad ke dost aur wo ladka tumhe milna aa rahe hain

Sharon(shocked):wat??????

Mrp:relax beta mein unhe jaanthi hoon bahuth acche log hain agar hum tumhare aur swayam ka bare mein unhe kahenge tho wo zaroor samaj jayenge.. mein sab kuch sambhal loongi tum tansion mat lo

Sharon: ok mom

Both sharon and her mom have their dinner sharon take her meds n both go to sleep

Next morning...

Swayam wakes up early as he have loads of work to do..

Swayam gets ready take his cycle and goes to sharons house to make sure she z fyn.. swayam rings d door bell n to his surprise mrp opens d door n wish him "good morning" swayam s totally shocked bt manages to wish her back..

Mrp:sharon abhi uti hain athi hi hogi

Swa(still shocked):hmm ok

Mrp goes to d kitchen to bring water for swayam..at d mean tym Sharon enters d dining area n z very happy to c swayam she comes n hugs him n says good mrng n he greets her back n ask abt her health

Mrp enters swaron break their hug..

Swayam:mein nikaltha hoon mein sirf sharon ko dekne aya tha(and starts to leave)

Mrp:swyam beta ruko hamare saath breakfast karke jao sharon se milne ke chakkar mein tumne breakfast bhi nahi kiya hoga (smiles)

Swayam:jee aunty(still confused)

Mrp,sharon n swayam have their breakfast n wen swayam starts to leave mrp stops him n says she wanna spk something very imp with him

Swayam(tensed):ji aunty boliye

Mrp:sorry swayam beta jo kuch bhi meine kiya uske liye tumhari insult karne ke liye etc etc n evn she says him y she actually did dis n apologise for everything n even says abt d meeting wid d boy who ws selected for sharon n also promise dat she vl solve all d probs

Swayam(first place he vl b very shocked to all dis n even gets angry hw can she do dis bt being a calm he understands her concern towards her daughter):its ok aunty apne jo kuch bhi kiya sharon ki balayi ko sochthe huye kiya aur koyi bhi maa apne bachon ka bura nahi chahegi na.. I totally understand n thank u for accepting me..

Mrp thanks him for undrstanding swayam leaves from der as he has to receive his dad...n goes to airport..

Swayam waiting for his dad in d airport n his dad walks out of d door towads swayam.swyam goes n hugs him n he reciprocates both father n son are very happy.. both of them reach home the "shekhawath mansion" mr.rishi(rishi) ask swayam to get ready as dey r going out for lunch..n dey ve to meet some imp. Ppl der...

Swayam(confused):ok papa

Sharons place (raiprakash mansion)

Both mrp and sharon get ready n leave inorder meet or convince sharons dads frnd and his son

Swayams place (shekhawath mansion)

Both father and son leave for their lunch cum meeting

In XYZ 5 star hotel

Swayam and rishi entered and sat on d table which ws already reseaved for them...

Rishi:beta mujhe tumse kuch kehana hai par kaise kahoon ye samaj nahi aa raha hai

Swayam:kya hua papa aap itna tensed kyo lag rahe hain jo kahena hai aap mujse keh sakthe hain

Rishi:beta wo.. ok mera ek business partner hain jo mere bohoth accha dost hain aur wo chahatha tha ki tumhari aur uski beti u knw wt I mean..

Swayam(shocked): wat??? Papa app jaanthe hain na mein sharon se pyar krtha hoon aur

Swayams talk ws cut by rishi:mein jantha hoon beta.. mein tumhe force nahi kar raha hoon aur mein isiliye yahan aya hoon thaki tum aur mein us ladkise aur uski maa se mile aur unhe samjane ki koshish kare n I hope dey ll understand.. mein khud hi mere dost se baath kar letha magar wo out of town gaya hai tho mein kuch nahi kar saka m sry beta

Swayam: papa(before he cud continue he heard a voice from behind)

Lady:hello mr.shekhawath

Both swayam n rishi turned to c who ws it...

It ws none other than mrp yeah u guessed it ryt sharon z d gal who ws supposed to b engaged to swayam according to their parents wish...but both were unaware of it

Both swayam and sharon in chorus TUM.. AUR YAHAN

Everyone ws shocked plus confused...

Mrp:swayam apka beta hai iska matlab gautham(sharons dad) swayam se sahron ki engagement karna chahthehte

Rishi:bhabhiji app jithna shocked hain uthnahi hum bhi hain

Sharon n swayam smiling wide...

Mrp:hum tho yahan yeh rishtha khatham karne aye the tho ab abhii...

Both sharon and swayam shouting NAHIII...

Rishi and mrp laughing at their kids...

Rishi:hamari tarafse rishta pakka hua

Mrp:hamari taraf se bhi...

All r haapy n swayam n sharon hug each other n finally they r getting engaged

END

Love

SHINI

Hope you guys liked it.. if u did plz press the like button n also do comment... criticisms are also most welcomed.. wud b waiting for your response... thank u...

special thanks to Farheen 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is what I want... thanks... swaron..
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U dint hav 2 mention my name specially...bt still thanq fr it nd glad i cud help u🤗
Well the os is really good...
Loved hw sharon mom understood swayam's worth...
Nd the ending was too sweet...swayam nd sharon parents are frnds nd swaron are engaged...loved it😳
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Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

this is what I want... thanks... swaron..

evn i wanted dis to happen bt our beloved cvs wud neva giv us wat v want so jus wrote an os
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Originally posted by: Farheen_vrushan

U dint hav 2 mention my name specially...bt still thanq fr it nd glad i cud help u🤗

Well the os is really good...
Loved hw sharon mom understood swayam's worth...
Nd the ending was too sweet...swayam nd sharon parents are frnds nd swaron are engaged...loved it😳

than u soo much🤗 if u dint encourage me to post it i wud ve neva posted it on IF
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey dear first of all congratulation u did a fab work I like d story n concept I so went so.thing like this happen in d3 finally mrp knows d value of sway am n swaron love keep it up dear do more work like this n thanks for pm n ha how could u say ignore it its on swaron n u r first work so its imp to read
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Originally posted by: shalomshini


evn i wanted dis to happen bt our beloved cvs wud neva giv us wat v want so jus wrote an os


yup shining u r write I also went this happen in d3 but CVS god knows what they do next still a big thanx finally this is is a lil relif
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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

hey dear first of all congratulation u did a fab work I like d story n concept I so went so.thing like this happen in d3 finally mrp knows d value of sway am n swaron love keep it up dear do more work like this n thanks for pm n ha how could u say ignore it its on swaron n u r first work so its imp to read

thak u prachi means a lot..🤗
yeah sure if i get tym ill continue writing..

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Hey there...

I dont know you but i read that you were writing this for first time...for someone who is writing for first time this was perfect start for you and i really liked the way you described everything...I am not really that good in english so i cannot say anything about gramar or technicality...

But as a reader i was really happy to read what you wrote...it gave me good feeling and i enjoyed reading it... i am not aware of current track that much but i just had fun reading your interpretation here...

One thing i liked most about this os was you really were able express your vision about current track or i should say you told us very nicely how you wanted the SwaRon story to move... i could relate to your situation and i really liked your vision...

One thing to complement you is that you are a very nice writer and continue writing because you will just learn new things with every story you write and you will enjoy yourself learning that...

you were very good with your first OS...continue writing more and Thank you for proving us with a nice read and Thank you for pm...

Pratik...

P.S. hey i know this is wrong place to thank you but i dont get chance to communicate to people that much so, thank you so much for reading my stories and providing me with some of the wonderful comments i received on them...it really made me feel good on myself...and you are really wonderful writer continue writing i am sure you will write some marvelous stories...
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I wish something like this happened in the show
So cute, very good
Loved Swayam's concern and mollycoddling and MRP confused 😆
Glad you showed papa shekhawat and the arranged marriage 😛
I wish this is how they would end the SwaRon love story on a happy and forever note

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