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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hell she is again late and now she is going to be scolded by her friends who must be waiting for her from last 15 minutes. And she as usual is late and always made them wait, and more over today is birthday of her someone special, whom she refers everything in her life. And she is not yet reached at the mall for shopping with her other friends.

She immediately rush and starts her scooty, but ya like always she face a big bad luck. She goes out of her house and hires a cab and at last she reached the mall. She takes out her mobile and called her best friend.

"Hello! Sharon! Kahan ho?"

"Kriya... tum mujhse puch rahi ho?...abhi kahan hona chahiye mujhe?" she burst out at her angrily.

Yes she knows why Sharon is angry on her and bursting out, but she has no option she has got the habit of this late coming, shaking her head she search her friends in the mall and there she finds the girls collecting some stuffs, she rush to them.

"Hey guys" she said smiling.

"kya yaar Kriya birthday tere someone special ki hai aur tu hai ki late me ati hai" vishakha said her hugging.

"Are wo..." she is cut by Sharon.

"haan haan bolo na Kriya that tum ghar se nikli hi thi ki tumhari scooty start nahi hui aur tumhe cab me ana pada" she said taunting.

"haan... Sharon bilkul aise hi hua...par tumhe kaise pata?" she asked.

"Oh Kriya... ye sab chodo... gifts dhundo...hame taiyari bhi to karni hai" neha said dragging her to the gift corner.

Girls get busy in collecting the gifts. They are as usual having the girly talks and un known of the fact that they are been observed by some people. They were busy drooling the girls.

"yaar Rey dekhna kitni pyari lag rahi hai meri siren" swayam said looking at Sharon who was busy in finding some stuffs and angrily throws back if it's not suitable.

"haan aur dekh meri baatcutter aaj to uska muh band hi nahi ho raha" rey said, gazing her who is continuously chanting without a full stop.

"oye Romeos apni julliets ke dream se na wapas aa jao" Vicky said shaking them.

"haan warna hum sab na pakde jayenge" nil said.

Both came out of their sense and remembers that the girls have given them some tasks to complete else they are gone today.

"Guys chalo... wo kaam karte hain warna ladkiyon se maad padegi" swayam said in hyper.

All remembers and were about to go, when the girls came in front them, standing crossing their arms in chest and tapping their right legs, glaring the boys. Boys gulp and hard and look each other.

"Mar gaye Swayam...ab kya karein?" Rey, whisper in his ear.

"mujhe puch raha hai? Main bhi to tere saath phasa hua hun..." he too whispers gulping.

Boys look each other again and then at the girls but they are vanished. All of them rub their eyes and again look front but didn't find the girls, they turn and to their surprise girls are still busy in their talks and collections. They are shocked.

"Guys isse pehele ki ye sapna sach ho jaye chalo yahan se" Rey said and left followed by the others.

Girls who are busy turns and smirks then look at each other and burst in laughter.

"yaar Kriya... unka muhu dekhne layak tha" Rinni said laughing.

"aur nahi to kya...necharon ko laga hoga ke sapna dekh rahe hein" simmi said giving a hi-5 to Sharon.

"Kriya...tum na...bahut smart ho" Neha praise.

"haan...man...the intelligent..." vishaka said pating Kriya's back.

"aur sabse badi baat ye hai Kriya ka K' effect" Sharon said giving a side hug to Kriya.

"haan...sharon... becharon ki sakal dekhne layak thi...kaise gulp kar rahe the" Kriya said laughing holding her belly.

And the mall is now fully converted in to the giggles of this girls, who did lots of shopping, enjoyed each other company and then they left the mall to eat something as they are badly hungry, they need to fill up them so they can manage everything for today's party.

Kriya looks around and finds a pani puri stall, she drag Sharon with her followed by the others. She order and then they enjoyed their eating, giggling and then all rooted to Kriya's house. As soon as they entered the house, they were amazed to see the decoration in side, Kriya felt it as if she has come to some one's else house. The first word came out of their mouth is "wow".

The whole house is looking like heaven, the entire house is decorated with white roses, the ceiling of the house is covered with white roses making the home looks paradise; the candles are making the environment more lightning. And then she see him standing, stretching his arm, giving a look surprise'.

She smile wide and immediately hugs him. She hadn't thought that he can manage these all so beautifully that she will be amazed of it.

"kaisa laga?" he asked hugging her.

"Ye bahut- bahut beautiful hai...thank you so much Rey..."

"Anything for you jaan..."

Gang cough and then they looked at everyone. Kriya told them to get ready else, they may be late and that someone special will get bored, that too on her day. Boys went to get ready and the girls make themselves ready in Kriya's house. Kriya have now no tension for arrangements everything has perfectly done by her love. She just now needs to wait for her someone special whom Rey had gone to pick from the airport, she comes out of the room after getting ready and then looked around the hall, which is a perfect arrangement. She then hears the car horn and gets that Rey came. She goes and asked everyone to hide and then she switched off the lights.

Rey opened the door and finds the lights to be off. He looks back and a girl comes and stands beside him.

"Ye light kyun off hai?" She asked.

"pata nahi chutki sayad light chali gayi hai... chal pehele andar chalet hain..."

Both enter inside and then the lights turn on and everyone came in front and wishes her. She glares at Rey because he didn't tell her anything about the surprise, she then looks around but didn't find Kriya.

"Sharon...Kriya...?" she asked. But Sharon nodded in a no.

"kriya... Kriya..." she called her looking around the house but didn't get response. She looked at Rey but he too didn't tell her.

"Kriya...agar tu bahar ake mere ko wish nahi karegi na to main chali jaungi..." she said looking around hoping her to come. But as usual she didn't. Kriya always like to tease her and she gets irritate of her teasing behavior. She then smirks and holds Rey's hand.

"Kriya...main jaa rahi hun... Rey ko leke tu rehena akeli...chal Rey..." she said dragging his hand.

"Are...Ramya...ruk..." she shouts coming out from the backside of the couch.

Ramya turns and smiles, looking at Kriya, Kriya come and hug her and wished her. The cake cutting session starts, everyone feed each other. Girls takes Ramya with them for gossips, and boys went to get Champaign so that they can enjoy, but as usual the two love birds are being forgotten by them, which always make a good luck for Rey to spend some time with her.

She is about to go to the girls when he hold his wrist and pulls her as a result she bumps in to him.

"Rey..." she says but he sshh ed her keeping his finger on her lips. From today morning he didn't spend time with her. He wants some moment with her.

"Rey...koi-koi...dekh lega" she said looking here and there.

"Kiss me..." he whispered in her ear, and she saw him with open mouth. "tum nahi... to main..."

"nahi- nahi..." she said to wait. "Universe ji kahan phasa diya?" she said looking up at the ceiling.

He smiled at her cuteness and made her face to look him and signal her to do what he said. She moves her face forward and kissed him in his cheek. He gives a disgusting look.

"Kriya...tum na bahut unromantic ho..."

"sach me kya?" she asked pouting.

And the next second she feel his lips on her, he presses his lips to get the sweet fragrance of her lip. He bits her lower lip making her, she moans which made him more crazy, his kiss became passionate and she too respond and he enter in to her mouth, their tongues dances, they felt each other's nerves, she pulled back due to lack of oxygen.

"your lips are delicious to taste jaan..." he whisper and she blush

"Rey... mujhe chalna chahiye...warna Ramya dhundte hue yahan aa jayegi..."

"ane do..."

"Rey?"

"Kriya...waise agar wo aaj sach me mujhe le jati to?"

"aisa nahi karegi...waise bhi wo meri behen hai so uss hisab se wo tumhari saali hui"

"saali...hmm...matlab adhi gharwali right?"

"Rey..." she beats him on his shoulder.

"Ahem-ahem"

Both looks at find Ramya standing crossing her arms in chest. And gave a look of what's going on. They nodded nothing, and then she looks at their standing position, he had held her waist and she had her arms around his neck. She again gave a really look to them and then they saw their position and stand straight, he caressing his back hair leaves to the hall. Ramya enters and hugs Kriya and says she is very happy for her. She pulls Kriya to the hall where everyone were present, she looks at Rey and then at Kriya, she asked Kriya not to move from her standing place and goes inside, after few minutes she came and pulls Rey, who was sitting in the couch and make him stand beside her, she gave a box to him.

"ye le aur pehna de..." she said giving the box to him.

"ye kya hai?" Kriya asked her in confusion.

Rey opened it and finds a diamond ring; he looks at Ramya, she blinks, Kriya gets surprised, she hadn't thought that her sis will do this much. Rey asked Kriya for her hand, and she forward her hand and then he slid the ring in her ring finger. Everyone hooted for them, Ramya hugs her in teary eyes.

"Ramya birthday to tera hai...par surprise to tune mujhe diya...thank you" Kriya said pecking her cheek.

"chod na... Kriya..." she looks at Rey and keeps Kriya's hand on his. "meri di ko khush rakhna"

Rey nodes in a yes and peck his forehead. She smiles.

"ab na tum dono jaldi se shaadi karlo...main tab tak yahin rukne wali hun" she said sitting in the couch, smiling at them.

Kriya looks her and then at Rey who had now gone to sit with Ramya, she felt herself so lucky for having such sis and now got her love as her fianc and she has lots of friends, she didn't want anything more for her. She looked up and thanked Universe ji. Rey looked at her and smiles. She looks at him and he mouth a kiss to her and in return she kissed the ring, they were meant to be together, they are meant to be together and they will always be together. They are KRIYAANSH, inseparable from each other.

Ramya...tere liye tha..lagta hai bahut boring kar diya maine..actually it didn't came up of what I thought of. i don't know kaise reviews ayenge..but hope k tu like kare...sorry for typos..didnt proof read.

Happy Birthday Ramya...

With love

Aish

24/4/14

Edited by AishPoojaKR - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
reswa
unres...
Haayee changa OS tha!
The starting was written very nicely..Kria being in a hurry and bechare friends were waiting for her...
And finally she reached the Mall...And the girls were busy in their girly stuffs ..while their boyfriends were gawking at them nd drooling over them! Lol! 😆
And Girls ka plan ! hehehehe!!! 🤣
AWwwhHH..Rey made all the arragements...so sweet!😳
And involvement of Ramya di in the OS was great!!! 👍🏼
oye hoye KriYaansh romance and all...Nd they kissed too!☺️
It was described beautifully!
Lol Ramya di inke beech aagayi! 😆
And the ring sequence was really sweet...
Loved the ending!
It was an amazing OS teacher ji!!!
😛

P.S - Happy Birthday Ramya di! 👏


Edited by --resh_kr-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3

nice os eshh..😊

very cute & beautiful..😉
loved the way u include ramya in your OS.😛
Haww.. Rey ne ring pahna di??..😉
cute ending..❤️
& very very happy birthday to birthday girl..
God bless u.
May beauty and happiness surround you not only on your special day, but always.😉
have wonderful, happy, joyful & healthy years ahead.😃
enjoy your day & party hard..🥳
Edited by mir_mishti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!!
Dis is so sweet!!!
Kriya late!! Boys ki band baja di!!! 😆
D arrangements n all was grt!!
Ramya ne kriyansh ki unofficial engagement karva di!!!! 👏
Nycly written!!!

Happy b'day Ramya!!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aish di kya likha hai.. 👏
Such a lovely os..
Cute one..
Bichare boys.. 😃
Ekda fadu hai..
Loved it sachi mei.. 😳
Ap kitna acha likhte ho aur likho na.. Makhan maring.. 😆

PS- Happy Vala Bday Ramya Di.. 😊
Edited by PunjabiKudi_17 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haaye aishu this is sooo cute... 😳😳😳Such a lovely OS.. ❤️Maaza agaya...the whole surprise session frm start till end ws wrth reading.. 👏👏I loved ramy di's role here the most..nd the surprise of both kriyansh to ramy di and ramy di to kriyansh was absolutely awesome... 😊😊😊kya OS likkhi hai yaar..love you for this.. ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsom os
loved it
happy birthday ramya dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsom os
loved it
happy birthday ramya dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing OS
and happy birthday ramya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of ol.. haaapppyyy Birthdayyy Ramya diii... :-)

n beautiful os... loved it.. :-)

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