THE ETERNAL LOVESTORY TAAREY: 4th THREAD[updated on 17th april] - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: pan02

hey congrats 4 d new thread 👏

yaar seriously bahut wait karwa liya ab tumne..

ab bas jaldi se update chahiye hume..


thank u 😳
i ll update today
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: aparabosecarmel

di this is the first ff i started to read
what a lovely ff
i just love it
aap jaldi se post keejiyey
aur jaldi se pm bhejiye
i m waiting😛

love u sweetheart
i ll update today😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Maine comment nahi kiya kya? :o chal chood..koi ni..abhi kar deti hu :P
Congo for d 4th thread 🥳 bhagwaan karre ye story aise hi chalte rahe 😛 u write really gud..I had a holiday yesterday n trust me I spent whole of my holiday reading ur ff...it was beautiful. ...m eagerly waiting fr more!
Update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Update na next part
Kab se wait kar rahe h plz jaldi

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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: chinudolly



aise baat karoge ab aap apni choti behan se 😡,
uaan😭😭, not done didu , m angry 😭😭and by d way aapne comment dekha but read nahi kiya hmm , ye nahi padha ur little sis smiled after days 😭😭😭and didu mujhe sachi nahi pata tha ki aapko first place chahiye tha varna main nahi karti comment 😭
sorry didu aapka first post lene ke liye
and shivani u should have told me 😭 m sorry i didnt know ,😭😭



meri dono behene kitni sentiii hai
i love u both so so much
aur dono ko payaar karne haq daatne ka haq sirf aur sirf meri birth right hai
samjhe ???????

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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
hello peeps !😃
watsup ! aisa na dekho kha jao gaye kya !😆
priya di, raddhi, premlata di,natasha di,prajakta aap log toh bilkul mar hi dalte mujhe...😆
but see i am here with an update😉

NOTE : THIS CHAPTER IS A REALLY IMPORTANT AS TAKES THE STORY TO ANOTHER LEVEL


Chapter 32

Taani , viaan and tahira went to the cafeteria.

The gang reached the rehersal hall and started with the stretching exercises.

Everyone was enjoying being together and relishing their

"VETERAN JUNOON (passion)" of dance.

But for Rey it was tough. His body was being stiff and moreover it was a tough job because of his health.

His pain and frustration was evidential on his face...

Swayam judged the situation of the rehearsal hall and understood that Rey was feeling out of place because of the stiffness of his body. So suddenly he came up with an idea to relieve rey from his pain.

Swayam: hey guys, today is the first day of our rehersal so let's have some fun.

Everyone was a bit confused as all this was not the part of the plan that had soughted for Rey's memory gain but all of them have also noticed rey's uncomfort so they nodded and agreed to Swayam.

Nil: hey dude what fun, are we going to bunk the rehearsals and go to the club (gave a naughty smirk )?

All of them looked at him with a look that clearly pronounced "NIL, MAN YOU ARE INSANE" !

Swayam : shut up yar !

Hey guys as we have to plan a great routine for viaan's event so, why not start with our strengths?

Amar : tu tya bol taha hai ?

And everyone looked at him confused and clueless.

Rinni : he means tu kya bol raha hai...and after this even the girls could not resist and everyone coordinated "CHEMISTRY" and smirked at the duo.

Swayam: I mean that lets start with everyone's solo performance from our fortey and then we can use the best steps in the routine.

What say ?

Rey: it's a great idea dude !

Count me in.

Everyone was happy to see Rey's enlighted face and they too gave their nod.

Swayam: so, lets start with the girls. Sharon why don't you start, waise bhi tumhe dance karte huye dekhunga to mera performance to best hi hoga (smirked) !

This caused a redness to accumulate on sharon's cheek as she began to blush.

Vicky : phir start ho gaye yeh "LAILA MAJNU" !

And everyone laughed hard.

Neha : chup babu tum toh meri tareef karte nahi atleast Swayam ko to karne do na Sharon ko praise !

Vicky walked to Neha and putting his hand on her shoulder he said...

Vicky : kaku tum bolo to main subah dopahar(afternoon) shyam teeno time tumhari tareef karun.

And they both locked their eyes and were lost in the hawa hawa look...

Rey: acha to ab tum sab shuru ho jaye! meri Juliet mere pass nahi hai to iska bahut fayda utha rahe ho !

Hero ko side hero bana dala !

As Rey finished, a voice trailed from the entrance of the rehearsal hall.

"Kisne kaha aapki Juliet yahan nahi hai Romeo" !

Everyone looked to the direction of the sound and found Taani standing at the door.

Taani walked to Rey and continued smirking "I am here only."

Rey: (with a winky expression) maine kab kaha ki tum meri Juliet ho ?

Taani :har cheez kahna zarur nahi Rey !

Aapki Juliet main hi banugi aur kisi ne try bhi kia to... (made a chubby face pronouncing O')

Rey: To ????

Taani : to Juliet ko to main chodungi nahi aur Romeo ka bhi who haal karungi jo who kabhi na bhule

ga !

(Smiled naughtily)

Rey: (shamelessly walked to Taani) To karo na roka kisne hai !

This made taani define a new shade of red colour on her face.

She could no longer answer and just smiled at Rey.

Gang : arey "TAAREY " control !!!!!! 😆

And they were absorbed in the moment of fun and pyar ishq and mohabbat !

Swayam : acha guys too much of lovy dovy talks ab lets start !

And han Taani tum yahan ?

Koi kam tha ?

Taani : actually bhai Viaan and Tahira event ke preparations mein kafi busy ho gaye hain to main bore ho rahi thi so I came here.

And also events ki date bhi finalise ho gayi hai !

Listening this Rey jumped in excitement.

He hugged taani hard and even did a few salsa moves with her.

Rey: really taani ?

I am sooo happy Taani.

Guys, humne itne events kiye hai but I dnt know why but this event is very special to me !

Mera accident, hone ke baad dance ki bina meri life mein ek kami thi jisko ab main pura kar sakta hun.

Mera pyar mere sath hai, dost mere sath hai and ab event bhi !

He turned to the other side and continued...

Rey : pata nahi kyun par aisa lag raha hai jaise yeh event meri life se sari darkness ko dure kar dega and I will have everything in front of me crystal clear.

" AISA LAG RAHA HAI KI I LL BE BORN AGAIN AFTER THIS EVENT"

Taani's eyes turned red and her body's temperature drop to minimal level.

She could feel her hands trembling.

Taani (to herself) : KAHIN DARKNESS KE SAATH MAIN BHI AAPSE DURE TO NAHI HO JAYUNGI NA REY!

Tears began to fall endlessly...

Even the gang was numb, no one had powers to speak.

But Sharon somehow managed to move.

Sharon : Don't worry best friend all will be very good.

Rey smiled at her and without speaking anything and hugged her to show his gratitude.

Swayam : chalo guys a lot of talks lets start !

And then high music flowed in the environment as Sharon began with her solo.

The song was " Race saanson ki ".

She was as usual the best with her moves.

Starting from the tip of her hair to her nails all were at power with the music.

Her energy could be the source of electricity to many areas of the country. Her power pact performance made the gang howl and cheer her even harder.

Then it was Neha's turn. She brilliantly incorporated the bollywood latkas and jhatkas in her dance again making her babu fall in the pool for her ...( I hope you all remember this J )

Simi's belly dancing again made her a star performer and so was the case with vishakha and rinni who won applaud for their forteys.

Next it was the boys turn. Swayam started with his act that even made the girls passing the rehearsal hall droll over him.

His magnetic property attracted a lot of iron nails , that is the, girls, with great strength.

Twice Sharon had to move to the door of the rehearsal hall and give angry glares to the girls staring his secret husband (Rey does not know na...ssshhh... ;) ).

All the boys too succeded in their attempts of giving the best they have got.

Finally it was Rey's turn to perform. The gang started to howl even harder. Even viaan and tahira came in to see the superstar perform.

The song being poured in the ears was " ABHI MUJH MEIN KAHIN BAKI THODI TOH HAI ZINDAGI "...

It was Sonu Nigam's melodious voice doing wonders to the surroundings.

Rey started with a few contemporary steps.

His body had been hard and stiff after the accident yet he was as smooth as the ripples of water.

Taani would not help and chant the name of her Krishanji so that Rey would pull it off well.

Abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi
Jagi dhadkan nayi
Jaana zinda hoon main toh abhi
Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo'n :'( zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa

Rey was smooth with the hand stretch and continued with beautiful and seepless movements.

His face showed his happiness at being able to dance. Though, his uneasiness too was evident because of the sweat traces on his forehead.

Though he was too strong a soul too give up.




Ho o.. abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi

Ho.. dhoop mein jalte huey tann ko
Chhaya perh ki mill gayee
Roothe bachche ki hansi jaise
Phuslaane se phir khill gayee
Kuchh aisa hi abb mehsoos dil ko ho rahaa hai
Barso'n ke purane zakhm pe marham laga sa hai
Kuch aisa rahem, iss lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zara
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zara
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo'n zaraa
Mar jaaoo'n yaa jee loon zaraa

He then continued with his fab splits. But suddenly his enthusiasm was destroyed with a flash where he was dancing with a figure whose identity he could not guess.

[ everyone noticed his discomfort and stood up with a jerk]

Yet rey didn't stop and he continued with his flawless movements. But the flashes too were there to defeat him.

It grew painful for him with his head being too heavy and his heart beat being really unnatural.

He was being pulled towards a darkness that would engulf him any minute.

He lost balance and went wrong with his pyravids. He saw a girl too close to him and he could not take it as it was Taani.

An accident visual made his face red.

Dor se tooti patang jaisi, thi ye zindagani meri
Aaj ho kal ho mera naa ho
Har din thi kahani meri
Ik bandhan naya peechhe se abb mujhko bulaaye
Aane waley kal ki kyun fikar mujhko sata jaaye
Ik aisi chubhan iss lamhe me hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera aa
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zara
Mar jaaoo'n ya jee loon zara
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo'n zaraa
Mar jaaoo'n ya jee loon zara

High rise buildings , unknown environment were the next sight that made it difficult for him to breath.

He began weeping hard as the pain had won over him.

Taani could not take at anymore and reached to help him.

But Rey was so disturbed that he threw away her hand and ran from the place as if he wanted to pleed for serenity in his life.

Taani too followed him.

Everyone was about to move to Rey when Sharon stopped everyone.

Sharon : guys don't !

Rey needs only Taani...after having seen our performances he must have felt bad at not being able to perform and also as the doctor told us that he must have seen some past memories.

Swayam: ya guys she is right.

Rey is in a very frantic situation as he is not able to link as to what is going on in his life.

Rey moved to the garden and sat on the bench staring at a fountain in his sight.

Taani reached him and sat very close to him. She was about to say something when Rey just hugged her tightly and began weeping as hard as he could.

Rey (still crying) : I am a looser Taani, I am a looser.

I can not perform like my friends did. Please taani iski wajah se tum mujhe mat chodna.

I will die Taani...I will die without you.

Taani could not keep her compose and she too began to cry while caressing his back.

But soon she broke the hug and held Rey's face her hands.

Taani: meri tarah dekho Rey...look at me !

(her voice was trailing but still her eyes pronounced that she was there for rey and that too forever.)

Aapko lagta hai ki aap looser hai ?

Ek aise accident se aap ne fight kiya jo aapko puri life ke liye handicap bana sakta tha ?

Aapke pass aise dost hai jo aapke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai ?

Aur rey sabse important baat ek ladki aapse itna pyar karti hai ki aapki ek problem uski life ki struggle ban jati hai ?

But still you feel you are looser !

Aur aapne kya kaha main aapko chod dungi !

Rey meri ek baat humesha yaad rakhna ki taani na to kabhi rey ke bina complete thi aur na kabhi hogi.

I love you rey ...i really do. I know ki aap utna acha dance nahi kar paye lekin hum sab aapke saath hai aapki har problem ka solution hum nikalen gaye !

We will figure out everything and that too very soon.

Rey : but taani I think tumhe gang ko bolna chahiye ki they should perform without me !

May be I will let Viaan and his clients down.

Taani : hum sab ek group hai kisi bhi ek ke bina we are incomplete Rey. Don't worry sab bilkul theek ho jayega.

Rey held taani's hands.

Rey: taani you know mujhe mere flashes mein kisika chehra dikha jo tum nahi thi Taani...how is that possible taani ?

Kya maine tumhe cheat kia hai ?

Have I betrayed you taani ?

He was feeling weak to go and he stopped suddenly.

Again tears descended his eyes.

Taani : rey who sab jo bhi hai aapko jaldi hi pata chal jayega. Doctor ne kaha hai na ki you will be fine soon. Aapko job hi flashes pareshan karte hai unke answer aapko hi dhoodhne hai lekin patient reh ke.

And one more thing you can never betray me rey so please don't think all this.

Rey caressed taani's face and they both were lost in each others eyes.

The intensity in their eyes was a proof that nothing in the world has the power to separate them.

Their hearts were connected and so were their souls.

Rey was so lost that he forgot about everything he witnessed. And soon taani proceeded and kissed rey.

She knew she was the only one who could relieve rey's pain. Rey was too weak to respond but she continued and after a few seconds the beauty of the moment pulled rey towards taani.

He kissed her back with passion. He continued to bite her lips and taste her saliva. She too forgot it all and was ready to surrender. The beautiful moment ended after a few minutes and then again they were lost in a tight hug.

PRECAP :

Swayam : its has been two weekd that we are working on rey's weakness.

Now he is fine physically but those flashes...

Taani : aaj event hai bhai main sirf yeh pray karti hun ki Rey ko sab yaad aa jaye.

REY WAS ON THE STAGE TO PERFORM HIS SOLO.

HE WAS NERVOUS ABOUT WHAT WAS GONNA HAPPEN...



NOTE :

hey guys one of new buddies Anusha praised my way to ask you all to comment and like so continuing the parampara😆

i order u all to like and comment warna taarey ki shaadi late plan karungi 😆





Edited by shivi77 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Wow :)
Awesome update :)
Really loved it :)
Beautifully written :)
Taarey part was amazing :)
Update soon :)
PM me :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
awesome update dear
wow how taani expressed her love loved that part
waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Haha! 😆 I love dat note!
Osum update...
M scared now. ..rey is asking taani again n again if he had cheated upon her..I hope he accepts the truth n also supports taani...
the way taani tried to console him was very touchy and affectionate. ...wid every word her love for him reflected!
I love d way u portray emotions! 👏
Hats off!
Superb work!
keep it up!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
arey,dhamki and all ha...
taarey ki shadi mat delay karo yr...
4 thread tak intezar kya kam hai...
congo for new thread...
and finally u updt it...
loved taarey's romeo juliet wala scene...
taani ki daar bhi natural hai...
rey asked her that did he cheated upon her...love it...
taani ne calmly rey ko console kya...
hope rey ki memory taarey ki relationship me koi problem na laye...
plzzz updt ASAP and pm me...

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