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Posted: 11 years ago
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THIS OS IS NOT WRITTEN BY ME. I AM POSTING THIS ON BEHALF OF DHWANI.






Rey & Ela sitting in a restaurant having candle light dinner with a slow romatic music and romantic ambience around. They were waiting for their food to be served after waiter went away taking their order. As waiter went away Rey stood up from his chair and tries to take out something from his blazer's pocket. Looking at Ela got excited and said
Wow Rey !!!! you brought a gift for me how sweet of you.
Plz show me na kya hai plz plz jaldi.

Rey was silently listening and was enjoying her child like behaviour.
Ela continued speaking & Rey was lost in her.
He came to senses nd went near Ela & put his finger on Ela's lips nd spoke ssshhh chup ekdam chup !!!
Ela was silent now she was staring at Rey's finger nd slowly looked into his eyes.

Rey-Ela apna hath aage karo
Ela totally lost
Rey holds her hand gently and puts the bracelet which he brought for her
Ela watches it and starts blushing.
Rey notices it and teases her.
Ela hits him on the chest and says Rey stop it ... Tum bhi na
Then moves his hand towards her ahead asks can i have a dance with you?

Ela smiles and nodded a yes
Rey holds her hand and then holds her from waist and pulls her near and they started dancing
All of sudden someone knocks at the door hard and was shouting
Utho Ela Bitiya utho aj collage nahi jana hai kya
With this wakes up and gets shock when she saw at clock
Oh My God it N-I-N-E i m late
She got up from bed and thinks
wow kitna beautiful dream tha ye
but kya sach me meri aur Rey ki 1st date itni romantic hogi ??
No 1st time hi itna expect nahi karna chahye
Ela apne dream world se bahar aa jao
11 baje Rey se bhi milna hai
With this she went out from room nd says
Kaka aj mera breakfast mat bana na me collage me hi kha lungi nd goesfor bath.
Now Scene at Rey's house
Rey was all set for his set for his 1st date with Ela
He calls someone and asks sab kuch ready hai na ?
Mein 1 hour mein pahoch raha hoon aur mujhe sab kuch perfect chahye.
Saying this he cuts the call.
Then he looks at Ela's photo in his mobile and says
Ela I Love You nd tum dekhna mein kaise ye humari 1st date tumhari sabse special nd memorable date banata hu. He leaves from house.

Dhwani.
Part-2 will be out soon.
Please give your feedback.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guyzz do give ur feedback...plzzz

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