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skfirdous

@skfirdous

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

wow soo awesome os

loved it

tea part super

i loved this hitler taani

rey is clean bold after seeing tani loved it

i was 😃 soo much while reading🤣

taarey talk nice

u write soo well👏

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premlata

@Missu_TR

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow it's beautiful os

Love it

The way you fabulous...

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Pooja

@Cupcake.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Amazing OS
Flashback was superb
angry bird Taani bechara rey
And that "chilli tea"part was hillarious

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tamanna-azaan

@tamanna-azaan

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

SUPERB DEAR..
Love taarey first meet..
but i was waiting for rey's prank..
last conv was so cute..

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sonali

@Sona_loveVD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awesome nd beautiful os
loved it

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tharu01

@tharu01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Supppeeerrrbbb..OOSS... Loved it loved it... 😃 D flashback is d best... Keep writing more Os...😃 😉

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luciya

@..LuciyA..

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

how sweet update
its amazing
chilli powder wala chai hahaha
loved it

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Crucio.

@Crucio.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Reserved~
Hold your breathe. Jhanvi your sweetest boyfriend is going to U.N.R.E.S.E.R.V.E

-EDITED-
I was going to unres now but I m feeling very sleepy 🥱
I ll pakka unres tomorrow 😆

Jhanvi, after making a grand entry to this OS, is finally going to U.N.R.E.S.E.R.V.E

-edited again-

You know nah Deep, you write awesome?

This OS is not something I can describe in words. I don't know what emotions I was supposed to feel while reading this OS. Be awed, cooed, smiling, laughing, giggling..etc. This OS was a mixture of every emotion from "mujhe shaadi nahi karni" to "50th anniversary". Starting with the old TR, I cant imagine those two to be old because they totally look weird according to my imaginations😆. And then the "chilly chai" kissa, I almost fell down from the couch laughing *and now I have a flat bum because of you, deep*, and then the later part of the OS took my heart away. TAJ <3. This should be one of the best OSes ever written on TR. L.O.V.E in it was so pure and eternal. *sounds cliche' much*.

Keep writing, Deep. No wonder you're my favorite writer <3 *and my girlfriend too*

~ Your awed boyfriend, Jhanvi.

Edited by Jhanvi_TaaRey - 11 years ago

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-.QTPie.-

@-.QTPie.-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Sorry Karan Like button not working :(
waise this OS is awesomeee
Loved "Taani Promise" ;)
the chill wala chai I guess I need to try this sometimes :P

n u used ""Offo!! Mujhe baat complete to karne do!" She gets irritated."
Oie @Bold word dekh..
see how much I can drool over Arjun n Alia ab yeh mat pooch na uss Bold letter mwin kya hai :P

N loved their Sweet talks in Agra
their 50th anniversary 🤣
Loved it
surely Vrinda di padhti naa toh she would have loved it..

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dasv

@dasv

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Superb update Deepz
Directly 50th anniversary durrr ki soch hai
Just loved that update.
Taani funkiness the chai with chilly incident 😆
Rey asking sharon kitni mirchi dali thi and poor sharon kuch bol hi nahi pati
Boldness of rey kya attitude😉 paya hai puri chai pi gaya, taani ka chehra dekhne layak tha...

The Agra Taj trip
Swayam ko bhi include kiya liked the way taani blackmailed sharon (mazaa aata choti sis ya bro aise blackmail karne mein)

The reaction of rey after hearing taani rejection was really good. he was so understanding.
The care of taani and she buy him a kufi awwweee so sweet.

The last part was awesome
The way taani said that she is not ready now but will be after 3 years.

And present scenes their grand children arranging surprise and telling aap kuch der ki liye bahar jao hum surprise plan karna hai
Ye kaisa surprise hua.

Just amazing update
Keep writing OS

Is this was the idea u were having in mind to pen it down?
its a superb one