swaron os: patch up scene (edited)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys nancy here ...
pissed by the current scenario of swaron
i thought of writing swaron patch
Big thank youkash di (sweet16cash/kashmi di)

WRITTEN BY SWAYAM'S POV


She started with a heavy heart


Sharon : Swa...yam(took a deep breath and continued )


While i took her soft hands in mine holding her lightly by just keeping our fingers in contant n Keeping my eyes intact with her's . But soon as she started she lowered her gaze. Trying to hide the tears which had filled her eyes n were soon going to fall down her cute checks


She continued n i just kept my eyes on her

Sharon: swayam ...i m so..rry i m ve..ry very sorry

I m really ...

N by this tym she had burst into tears i kept calm letting her continue to speak her heart out I just slightly rubbed my thumb on her fingers to soothe her


Sharon: i m... i know maine bohot mistakes ki hai... i know i have hu..rt hurt u a ..lot her voice cracked)
I placed a gentle kiss on her fingers which i was holding in mine ...

Sharon: swayam use dine college mai... woh i denied Our rela..tionship (relationship) mai dar gai thi... par trust me iss liye nhi ki i I was scared of confessing that i love u ...swayam mai nhi chate the ki Logo ko lage ki tum mere weakness ho ... par phir mujhe Realise hua ki tum mere weakness nhi mere strength ho
I realised...(hiccupping due to continues crying) mai woh
Swa..yam

She just couldnot continue ... i knew its difficult for her
Throughout the tym she spoke i held in the same position. I periodically kept placing my lips on her hands came closer to her n rubbed the tip of my nose on her cheeks n slightly kissed them but she kept continuing i never stopped her i knew these were the last set of tears flowing down her cheek i didn't need any justification of our past but i knew she would be under a burden if i don't allow her to speak out all of it
I wanted to take her in my arms n never let her go but i silently waited for her to complete



N she continued


Sharon: swayam trust me... please... i love u i love u alot

Kria... maine kria ko initially sirf or sirf tumhare paas aane kai liye kiya .. i know i was selfish i shouldn't have done that par swayam maine kabhi aisa kuch nhi kiya joh ek frnd ko nhi karna chahiyeh i knw mera ek motive tha aur isliye maine woh whole heartedly nhi kiya
Par... par i really did really my mistake n sachi mai i started liking her n hum ache dost ban gaye swayam...ru..hi


Now i knew its my turn to apologise in case of ruhi .I was at fault n Sharon need not explain or say anything On it ..so i interrupted her n spoke



Swayam: shoo... bus Sharon bus i m so...

She didnot let me continue n spoke

Sharon: abhi nhi please mujhe bolne do ... i know mai galat thi ...i donot deserve u tum ek ache ladke deserve karte ho ...mai tumhare li..fe life ki mistake hu iss liye u can leave me par swayam please please ek baat par mujh trust karo please that..that i ..really..do love u a lot trust me i love u i love trust me

All this while she had been crying tears never stopped flowing from her eyes... all this while i was quiet but the emotions in me grew stronger ... my love for her increased by every passing moment i was proud of her N proud to love her


While she kept repeating those three precious words
I moved closer to her loosened the grip on her hands which i was holding n placed them on her checks cupping her face n placed a loving tight long peck on her forehead ... she clutched my shirt tight feeling my love
She finally looked into my eyes ... her cries have turn into sobs n she stood eager infornt of me to get answer her


I smiled at her tears now flew from my eyes

I sat on my knees holdingher hand in mine again

Swayam: Sharon mai kuch explain nhi karna chata mai
Shayad kar he nhi sakta ... tuhmai endless times hurt karne kai liye... i just can say the three words that
I M SORRY

She definitely expected some different three words i could

See that from her fallen expression .. i smiled lightly


N continued


Swayam : par Sharon i prefer the other 3 words more .. i trust u Sharon i trust ur love .. I LOVE U SHARON I LOVE U ..i trust you

I continued saying so until i realised that she fell on her knees and crushed me in between her arms
We both kept chanting the 3 magical words...
We were in each others arms ...n held the other so tightly


As if never let the other person to go i buried my head in her hair n she buried her face in the crook of my neck

Finally i loosened my grip to have a look at her flushed face i love it when she blushes because it makes me feel That she is only mine ...


I kissed her eyes then her red nose n then my eyes fell on her rosy lips

Bringing my lips near hers i whispered " i love u "
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Edited by nancynnv - 11 years ago

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Autumn_Hue thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I had loved it when you had sent it to me in the afternoon and I would repeat the same thing now Namu I love it very much..
I loved how these two individuals cleared all their misunderstandings and got back together..😃.
It was a treat to read loving and caring Swayam I've missed him quite a lot in the show..😊.
Beautiful writing Namu keep writing you can surely improve by leaps and bounds with every write up I have faith..😃.
Love,
Kash Dii..🤗.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one...something like dis was needed...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
It feels so good to read a patch up when u are getting such pathetic swaron track...nice os😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u all for liking it :) 🤗

30121986, Lawrentian_214, apy_swaron, Cenjonstrand, sachi123, sonii, zk456789, pooja123456, AnanyaVruShan, swaronlove001, basket_101, -Jasmita-, sweet16cash, SanskritiS, Mihi4VruShan, unishaz, Shilpa_SwaRon, Naughtynatty, nature2,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome one nancy... 😊😊😊 keep writing re 😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was wonderful and amazing os... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
awesome os dear..keep writing more.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was cute :)
Keep writing on SwaRon, feels nice to read!
Hope we see the patchup soon in near future :/
Confession was nicely written.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A nice story. Beautifully written.
Well done

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