When she left me...all alone![ADDED SOMETHING MORE-CHECK.]

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It was going good, she was with me , we decided not to fight, not to argue, we decided to be good with each other. A mutual decision. BUT as they say , destiny never agrees with us.

She left me all alone that night , that night when she went away without a word. But who's fault was it? Hers? Can't be. She was not at all guilty. It was one man's fault and that was me- Reyaansh Singhania.

My anger, my anxiety, it was all my fault. I am to be blamed. But what did I do? Saved her from the goons. From those who were misbehaving with my girl, Kriya Ghai.


I don't know what I feel for her, she is special to me and that is all I know. I didn't want her to go. I wanted to save her, talk to her, hug her and be with her, but why didn't destiny allow me that? Each and every moment of that night was stabbing me,when the officer said that she was to be deported, it felt as if the world stopped for me, it was a moment which was all numb for me. I didn't know what to do, what to say. I just looked at her, and kept doing that.


She hugged all her friends but couldn't hug me, once again destiny challenged her and me, challenged us? She did turn back but not with a smile and a ray of hope that everything will be fine but with tears running down her cheeks, she was sad, hurt and all that was because of me!
I wanted to cry aloud at that moment. All the moments spent with her were running right infront of my eyes, I wanted her, I needed her, maybe I loved her, once again?! But she left me, all alone...


All those moments spent with her, those dance performances, those beautiful moments which I didn't value much at one point of time,meant everything to me at that time. She was everything that I wanted at that moment.






Come back once and I'll mend everything. Just come back once and please don't leave me ... all alone!

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Idea Courtesy - Deetha 😳

Written by- Rishita 😳


This was Rey's POV on Kriya's abrupt departure. Thanks Dee for letting me use your edits :* Please do comment guys. Honest criticism is most welcomed 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Blind.Dance-

First of all thanks a lot Rish for making this post!! 🤗

Man with every passing second I am missing them more!!

This single scene I say.. That shook the hell out of me!!

Her helpless look confused on whom to blame , him her or as always her fate. That tear!! 😭

And the way he sinks down when reality hits him that she is gone!!

I have always been a Rey supported more than Kriya's . I love her too but I kinda support and understand Rey more wantedly!!

He remembering those memories with her and those unshed tears of helplessness , guilt and pain.

The way he blankly stares no where not sure of whom to shout and beg to stop her, of how to bring her back!! Man I can't take this more!!😭

I want my Kriya back, I want my Reyaansh back, I want my KriYaansh back!!

The way he looks up and his face hardens!! with no emoticon !!

Bye aur nahi likh sakti mai !!😭😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
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woah...give me a break...girls...dis was amazingly beautiful...totally fantabulous...dee...those edits were awesome...just too lovely...nd rish...love u sweeyheart...such beautiful lines...esa laga like sb kuch wapis replay hua...wo bi live...dat was the power in ur lines nd the edits were cherry on cake...
marvellous post...i dont know what to say
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow... Tat was simply... One word- AMAZING !!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rula diya yaar tum dono ne... 😭

Dee is already a sad person...usko toh waise he maza aata hai is sab mei...

par...Rish tu bhi...😭 😭


anywayz... m kinda speechless... it was...Beautiful...

Rey's pov described sooo beautifullyyy... Goshhh... just speechless... 😭


This is really making me miss them even more!!! 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow beautiful post gals...really heart-touching
Deetha ur idea is simply amazing yaar and Rish those feelings are so beautifully described...u ought to become a poet ⭐️
Missing KriYaansh all over again 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing
Well described rey emmotion
And deetha ur edit mast hai ekdum as always
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's simply a big WOW! Whtever i cmment for ths wrtng will be very less..it's fabulous, great,awesme,mindblowng,spectacular nd loads mre..great idea as well as great executn.. I mst thank both of u fr gvng such a wndrfl gft..it was a treat fr all of us i blve..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

woah...give me a break...girls...dis was amazingly beautiful...totally fantabulous...dee...those edits were awesome...just too lovely...nd rish...love u sweeyheart...such beautiful lines...esa laga like sb kuch wapis replay hua...wo bi live...dat was the power in ur lines nd the edits were cherry on cake...
marvellous post...i dont know what to say

OMG , Akan !!! 😲😲😲 Itna accha hai?! 😲😆 Thank you so much re, these words made my day... 🤗Its all KR effect ! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks!! 😳

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