**fourth part updated(pg 8)**taarey story : i cant rey - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
nice start
why she was sad?
update soon
pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
hey..
welcum to IF ..
its really nyc to get another writer in here.. :)
the strt is srsly very very nyc..
the plot seems interesting with the mystery ..!!
continue soon n pm me for ur further updates.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
great start...
continue asap and pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Awesome concept
Great start
What is taani hidding from rey n gabg
Update soon n pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Sorry for the late but due to some personal issues I could not... Thanku for ur appreciation

Here I am with the second part...

After attending the classes all frnds went to canteen but someone was missing ... And rey was the one to notice it ... He was very much disturbed and he went to the locker room...

Rey: guys excuse me...

And he went away to the locker room.. swayam also went after him to check the reason for his sadness .

****IN THE LOCKER ROOM****

SWAYAM: hey dude why do sad???

Rey: kuch nahi swayam vo taa... ta... chal chod..

Swayam: are kya tu apne dost se share nahi karega??? Agar mein ek bhai hoon to ek dost bhi hoon feel free to share...

Rey: yaar vo taani ka silence mujhse abs aha nahi jaa raha... jab bhi use dekhta hoon sochta hoon kahin mein uski is sadness ka reason to nahi...

Swayam: reason to mein bhi nahi jaanta ... Par just hope ki vo sahi ho jaaye aur tu ye khud ko blame karna band kar... ok then bye vp sir ka call hai I need to go...

Rey: I too hope so ... bye

Swayam went but rey was still thinking the reason of taani's sadness...

He could not stop thinking about her

"Kyun taani kyun tum itni sad ho..." he said and left the locker room entering the rehersal hall

***********REHERSAL HALL***************

He was alone there as everyone had left due to the work given to them by vp sir..

He was shirtless...

He thought of all the moments he spent with taani and was crying like a child ... The pain was clearly visible in his eyes...

Just then taani who was finding the files vp sir asked her came to rehersal room thinking she left it there...

As she entered the rehersal hall she found the file

she was about to leave but rey stopped her holding her wrist...

And the next moment rey was in shocked by taani's reaction...

He could not believe that taani had slapped him and that for what ,... Just holding her hand ...

And the expressions on taani's face made him worry more...

She was very much shivering and fear was clearly visible in her eyes...

And the words she screamed were going on his head again and again

"SHIVAM PLEASE DON'T TOUCH ME, JUST STAY AWAY"

She was also stunned after realizing what she spoke just now...

But rey broke the silence and said " ab mein tumhen shivam lagne laga, kya mujhme aur shivam mein koi farak nahi?? Aur taani ye shivam itne dino baad tumhe kaise yaad aaya?? Kya ab bhi tum usse...

He showered her with so many questions in one go...

Taani was still silent and fear and pain in her eyes has not been gone...

Her silence raised rey's anger..

She tried to leave from there but rey pushed her to the wall saying :"answer me dammid"...

Taani tried to go but she could not as he was holding her hand very tightly ...

Rey was mad with anger and his eyes showed that he was not ready to leave taani without answering..

Next : rey shattered after listening taani's answer...(her reason for sadness)

*note: I will update the next part only if u all like this so please tell me if u like...

Sorry for mistakes... sandels sade tamatars are fully welcomed if u don't like...

Eagerly waiting for ur response...😛😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
awsm update
wow taani called rey shivam
did not expect this
just too fab
quickly update soon
wanna know the reason for this
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
wow amazing update
taani is so shattered
she called rey shivam and slapped him😕
wat did that guy (shivam) do know?

waiting to know the real reason for her sadness

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
superb update...
What did that Shivam do?🤬

Taani slapped Rey

update asap...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Amazing...
Waiting 4 nxt part...

Plzz update soon!!

Thnx 4 pm!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Awesome :)
Taani slapped Rey thinking he was Shivam !!!!!
Aisa kya kiya Shivam ne Taani ke saath ????
Update sooon :)
Thanx for the PM :)

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