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Posted: 11 years ago
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HEY GUYS!!
M unisha.. M not new in this forum as i've always been commenting on stories written here.. This is my first attempt on kriyaansh.. I've been reading a lots of stories written on different characters.. My fav among them r kriyaansh.. Was always thinking of writing a story on them.. So here it is.. It start slightly maybe familiar to u as i've asked the concern writer for permission to continue it in my version.. So here i m..

PROLOGUE:
kriya made her last performance,broke
up wid rey n went back 2
dehradhun.. Somewhere he knew kria didn't use him nor ditched him but there must be a reason for it.. She didn't trust him enough to share it with him so rey ws dejected, heart
broken n had no urge 2 live..
Bt he started living 4 his frnds..swaron
came closer on rdx party n got a new grl taani in his life..taani grl enters his
life like a stalker..
Rey ws dancing in the audi on dil se
rey imagining kriya wid him everywhere.bt it ws taani grl...rey ws in
the middle of the dance just abt 2
extend his arms when he felt 4m his
inner tat its nt kriya..he opens the
blindfold n feels really bad..he leaves
4m thr angrily widout uttering even a single wrd...
he goes home n throws all his
clothes,shirt,vest,shoes around n goes in
his gym,breaks away many tiles n
bricks 2 vent out his anger.. Swayam
comes n see it n brings him a glass of water..rey clutches it so hard tat it breaks into
pieces n cut rey s hand..his hand z
bleeding badly n he z nt giving even a
damn 2 it..
sw:rey!ye tu kia kar raha e??
r:hw cud i??hw cud i do this wid her??i lived n died only 4 kriya..hw cn i
imagine any othr grl in her place??
sw:rey!kriya left n she z nt cmng
bck..man!u ve 2 move on!!
r:shouts loudly NOOO!!!y??y u did this
wid me universe jee??

Swayam turns on the news
rey hears in the news tat the bus 4m
mumbai 2 dehradhun met wid an
accident..many ov the passengers died
n sme r srsly ill..
r:oh!! Rey turns the news off Aftr 2 days
rey gets a call 4m kria's cell.. He ignores
it.. Then anothr call comes 4m sme
unknown no
r:hi! Reyansh singhaniya here.whoz
this??
He listens whatever the caller said n was rooted to the ground n the cell slipped from his hand n he thumped on the couch.. Lter the info synced in n he hurrily left for given address.. He was feeling restless.. He didn't inform anyone..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its amazing👏👏👏

Continue..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Start
Continue Soon & Plzz PM Me
unishaz thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX:
prologue : pg 1
Chap 1 - pg 3
Chap 2 - pg 7
Edited by unishaz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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continue plsss
and mujhe bhi pm karo
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Awsumm Uni...Love Kriya! ❤️❤️ Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soonz!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey unisha..
Nice story..
I think kria ka accident ho gya hai..
Chalo koi nai.. Apna hero h na..! Bacha lega usse.. Lol!!
Plz pm me wen u update..
Thnx :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept and story
Though dil dosti is unfamiliar loved your story
Do continue and update.
Loving it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcum to the forum sweetheart 🤗
i hope u'l enjoy n many good things happen to u here
coming to the story, it was awesome for the first start,u described the situation perfectly
but plz hath joding _/\_ cliffy pe update mat khatam kra kro,mrko fir aage ke barei mei soch soch ke neendh ni ati :p
plz plz pm me,wen u update
n sorry in advance if my comments will be late or super late due to exams,keep sending me pms
-Riya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc start dear...
love to read more...
update soon...
do pm me whenever u update..

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