KriYansh OS - Beyond The Barricades - Page 3

Originally posted by: geeth_amar

Superb os dea...! Luved it
d way u potrayed deir feel of love for eachother was awesome. Atlast dey wr contended wid deir luv... I really loved dat
rey's concern for kriya... Made him leav her. But stil destiny brought dem bak together...! Keep writin more..!

Originally posted by: anjali22

amazing os

well written

loved it

Thank uu yaar ^____^
Glad u loved it and found it well written.:D

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

mahi u r amazing yar...u sure this ur 1st attempt...??? coz i dont think so...ur terminology is superb...though m on leave from IF nd wasnt going to comment anywhere...bt cudnt stop myself...the concept was fab...princess and soldier...the way u've penned it down is amazingly stunning...

That is a super huge compliment...thank u so very much 🤗
I feel overwhelmed at ur comment
Sachi ? I am so glad I didn'tsound like a first timer ...I was hell nervous ...turned 18 a few months back.so got the liberty to write this lol
Thank uuu ^__^

This is just... I don't know what to say
Divine? Breathtaking? Fabulous? Take your pick
Right from the word go, you seemed to build a trance with your writing, making me devour each word and begging for more.
The first line reminded me of arsha dance on bheege bheege from did, and I knew I was gonna love this there and then
The ballad you started with, is that your own or is it a quote? Cuz it really made me hitch on my breath
I love the way you've played with the element of nostalgia and of undying love, of passion and fulfilment. You seemed to have created that feeling of intimacy and want even before the mature stuff started so kudos to you for that.
I'm particularly in love with the monarch line and the I'm not that brave line. They sent a trail of goosebumps up my arm
Definitely not first timer material, you're a pro girl
Way to go mahi!!!

Originally posted by: Cookielicious

Beautifully Written !!!

You described it absolutely well.

It did'nt seen you were writing for the first time.

The concept was good.👏

Their Love for each other did not even decrease a bit. :')

And Finally they were one. :D

Loved it ❤️

Thanks a lot buddy 🤗
I am thoroughly pleased to know that u liked the description ^_^
And Iam absolutely glad u liked it ^_ ^

Originally posted by: -Vaish-

That was just so amazing...

beautifully written...

I really loved how you added the angle to it...

and the refuge taking was amazing.. .^_^

just loved the way how you showe veerything out,,,

Awesome and amazing...

and beautifully and cunningly written... ^_^

Thanks a lot yaar vaish 🤗
Sach bata u love the word amazing nai ? 😆
Super glad u loved it ^_^
Hahaha cunningly kyu ?

Sneha and chetna - thanks you girls ^__^
Glad u enjoyed reading

Sweetieswagata and mounmita - thanks alot fellas 🤗
Feels good to know u guys loved iit :D

Originally posted by: medha_is_me

This is just... I don't know what to say
Divine? Breathtaking? Fabulous? Take your pick
Right from the word go, you seemed to build a trance with your writing, making me devour each word and begging for more.
The first line reminded me of arsha dance on bheege bheege from did, and I knew I was gonna love this there and then
The ballad you started with, is that your own or is it a quote? Cuz it really made me hitch on my breath
I love the way you've played with the element of nostalgia and of undying love, of passion and fulfilment. You seemed to have created that feeling of intimacy and want even before the mature stuff started so kudos to you for that.
I'm particularly in love with the monarch line and the I'm not that brave line. They sent a trail of goosebumps up my arm
Definitely not first timer material, you're a pro girl
Way to go mahi!!!

Thank you so very much ... God Ifeel so overwhelmed by reading your comment
Your review left a big smile on my face that is not going to disappear anytime soon
I am glad u could relate to it ...that performance was blissful ...totally <3
I wrote it on my own 😆
I kinda love writing poems and wanted to give a fresh , breezy start to the os =D
I didnt ?
It feels so good to hear that ...I was hell nervous before posting it ,
😆
Medha thank u srsly for ur amazing appreciation ...I felt relived at once after reading it 🤗