KriYaansh OS - Seduction Times Two

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Fida

@aTTiTude_dIvA

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

This was juz too good..

Rey.. Uff.. You described him just the way I have always imagined him to be from within..

His possessiveness for Kriya.. And the way u bought about everything was just perfect..

I have always expected such a behaviour after they become official some day...

His insecurities to see Kriya with any other guy in the past is a proof of what itz gonna be like.

The emotions..especially that of Rey.. I reached heaven while feeling the intensity of his feelings.. Especially of how he could never get enough of her..inspite of her being his wife..

And how the mere thought of her being close to someone else burns him from within...

Then how can I forget.. His pov of how she should feel his lips on hers the moment she smiles at anybody else...

I don't have enough words to express.. This is so my type, which I would prefer reading any day..any time..

I'm appaled by it all.. Do write more of such intense stuff.. Really head over heels in love with this Rey!

Your an amazing writer :)

-fida

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Babe...u r mindblowing...i've read all the 3 works by u...the letter nd the 2 OS...nd evrytym i hv 2 think a lot wat to comment...u left me speechless again...u r an awesome writer.., abt dis OS..it was passionate lyk hell., no communication yet evrything was conveyed so amazingly...brilliant work.., srsly m in luv wid u coz of ur wrks

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

awesome hot os..

loved d way u showed d emotions..

rey angry on kria for letting some1 else hold her n b close to him..

he pulled her n d seduction game n d way u showed emotions were brilliantly penned..

awesome mind-blowing..

kria knew rey was there n d guy was her cousin n rey was played by his wife.. loved d end.. rey seducing kria n kria seducing rey nice... n hawt os..

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k.sweet

@k.sweet

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

amazing one

n different loved it

thanks for the pm

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

ohhh gosh i just louved it insanely...

it was beautifully written...

and the way you showed all the emotions and feelings of them..

just beautifully...

you are a blessed writer...

i really love this kind of works...

you know possessiveness aggression passion romance emotions all in one...

i'll try to read your other works also now...

keep writing dear... (:

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nifty-nia

@nifty-nia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

It was really awesome. You really give life to the feelings and emotions of your characters. it was oozing intensity and possessiveness. Just brilliant.
Esp loved the last part ;)

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

OMG CP.. 😲

*Faints*

Firstly I loveddd ur song choice...

trust me this is a song i have been LONGING to see on Kriyaansh since..god knows how long...

And when the song started.. i was like SHIT... This is definatly gonna be paisa wasool...

and it was..haha..

i loved ur usage of words...

how Rey was all fiercy ... and all that teasing her..marking her his...

it was sooo..hell intense.. uff...

every situation completly went with the situation... every bloody situation...

and end mei..he was fooled..bwahahahaaa... Babaji Ka Thullu.. xD

but i really loved ur word usage mann...

everything was perfectly written...

amazing...