OS on current & future track( completed)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HI guys this is my first ever os.
appologies for my grammar mistakes..
I am a shakthi fan,also arsha+kriyaansh fan...moreover a dance fan... left watching d3 wen i heard news f shakthi leaving nw back ofcourse bcoz f shakthis return.. got an outline f show from wikipedia(strange rite) . vnt watched ny episodes after shakthis exit,,, so forgive me if my story telling about past goes in a wrong direction...so here we goes... journey with me ...

Part 1
Story begins after kriyas re-entry

Scene: Fire exit

Rey in thoughts " yy kriya yyy, yy r u back' rnt u satisfied by hurting me? r u back to show me how big u ve grown.. nd i am still at the place were u left me? no kriya ghai never .. u wont succeed this time ... i vl show u wat i am,,just wait nd see..

"rey""" he heard sharon calling him from back..
he smartly wiped off his tears nd acted as if he was busy messaging

" 'hai sharon wat happened got ny work"?

Sharon: rey y r u sitting here i searched for u everywhere thank god kriya said u vl be here

Rey : Kriya? u asked her about me?

Sharon: ya actually i wants ur help.. i vl be out of town for 2 days,, my cousins marriage, dad wants me to accompany them.. u knw my dad rite i dont ve ny option.. so i wants u to takeover the responsibility of gs or 2 days ,,

Rey: no problem u carry on i vl handle it.

Sharon: rey its not tat easy. responsibilties includes taking care of our guest too ;KRIYA;


Rey was in thoughts then: kriya i ve to work vth her impossible.. but if i wants to know her intentions i vl ve to keep an eye on her.. this is the best oppurtunity..every one would think tat i am just helping sharon..

Rey:: ya i know but ts k i vl do t, i cant run away frm my responsibilities rite?..u go without ny tension

Sharon in thoughts "what has happened to rey,, i thought it will be damn difficult o make him agree,, but he agrred all f a sudden? does he got ny plan like me?"

"sharon" "sharon" wat happened u alrite?

ya i am fine.. k den c u.. i vl email other works u need to takecare of kk iam leaving... nd rey .. urs nd swayams cold war is over rite?

ya ya everythng s cleared...


k good i feel relieved now , thanks u r the best buddy.. take care
hugs rey nd goes


so miss kriya ghai.. get ready to face reyaansh >>>>smirks

next day in practice hall it was rey who came first ,, evry one wondered to cc him der...
"hai guys"
"p;ease dont give me tat look.. i am here only to help sharon .., she had an urgent work so i had to.. nd friend should never leave his friends side rite,"

vth taht he gave kriya a nasty look... she understood wat he meant so did all f them...

kriya started to teach everyone some basics ff ball room dancing.. rey was nly helping his frnds to understand the steps never tried to do nythibharath was having gr8 difficulties in understanding the postures kriya went to help him,, wen she hold his hand s to correct the posture he retorted
" dont dare to touch me"
kriya backed oof nd showed him the posture correctly'
however t was not his style so he gain couldnt do t this time kriya tried to show him again nd the reponse was the same,, nw evrt1 started to laugh at her.. she didny reply and this continued once again.. nw kriya n thoughts

"kriya wat r u doing yy r u letting them to make fun f u she remembered her mothers word tat" u r strong girl not weak"
wen bharath was again to open his mouth she didnt reply nd gave him a stern look.. just tat look was enough for bharath to low his voice nd he let her do it .. this time all he laugh vanished as if they saw their principal

rey was amazed at this nd in mind said "impressd.. u still got tat power in u to convince ny1"

after tat none had the courage to do nything nasty and once wen nilesh fall while trying to do a step.. kriya was the first one to attend him nd all felt her concern as genuine... durin the resting time swayam was by her side giving her company talking nd laughing..rey didnt lyk this nd felt pain somewhere eventhough he believes she is no one to him. the day passed .. rey had a sleepless night ever since kriya was backk

"Kriya u made my life hell now ts my turn,i promise myself tat i vl make ur life miserable than helll"

next day during the rehearsal rey hold kriya hand as if he was trying to demonstrate steps to others,,, he hold her very tightly tat kriya yelled in pain nd wen rey left her hand, it turned red...
during another step he handled her very roughly leaving a bruise on her face l... swayam understood wat was going on nd approached rey during the interval

"rey i need to talk to u"

yy r u doing this to her,, u said dance is evythng for u f u respect dance den y r u using it as a medium to hurt kriya?

Rey didnt know wat to answer he himself knew tat wat he did was wrong but he himself couldnt stop tats it..he was angry at himself tat he s not able to control his emotions wen shes near..

"Swayam i didnt do nything purposefully it jst happened"

"rey" i knw tat wasnt an accident , as a frnd f urs i just wanted to tell tat" dont do nything tat u wont be able to forgive urself"

wat do u mean swayam"

"think on it" by saying this swayam left with kriya...

rey wasnt happy at himself nor t swayam words//

next day
"hai guys" t was sharon... swayam had a wide smile wen he saw her,, he missed her a lot.. but didnt let her see tat..

hai swayam"

hai sharon hw was the wedding

"v good' thanks for making me understand tat my family need me.. had a good time with my family after a long time...

"u r welcome.."

"so hw the practice going"

"ya ts good.."

"did u miss me"'
"ya"

"u did?"
ya u r the gs ,nd captain ,, i missed ur shouts


sharon was confused? did he really miss me r s he trying to tease me..

hai sharon.. it was simmi.. missed u yaar espesially wen v had to obey tat kriya

swayam walked off frm der,, sharon noticed t nd was sad she couldnt talk much vth him


"so guys pls show me those difficult lifts u practiced yesterday,, by saying tat she gave her hand to swayam,," ofcourse swayam couldnt resist her hand nd took t...

rey extended his hand to kriya as i to demostrate the lifts to sharon... during the lift he put her down very badly, kriya yelled vth pain... eventhough he did t purposely he was more hurt than her nd tried to attend her but b4 he could touch her swayam hold his hands and said
"not nymore rey not again "
nd he attended her.. her legs were swollen and she had difficulty in walking vth swayam help she move d to corner f th hall, all this time kriya dint even look at rey.. rey felt more nd more guilty f wat he did..nd walked out from der hitting the door wide open


this time vicky nd nilesh was planning to bunk the practice as they got some mischievous work as usual nd this time they got a plan nd went out vth rey and came back after a while..

rey in fireexit " wat happened to u ery cant u cc how hurt u r? u worship dance then hw can u misuse dance ? is hatred for her is more than ur love for dance?u must correct this mistake..also i dnt ve to practice nymre sharon s back,, i can avoid kriya now... thinking this he returned to the rehearsal hall to take his bag.


at the same ti,me vicky nd nilesh started der new drama. vicky acted as if he fall down nd nilesh throw the red paint on him tat they stole from drama club store nd yelled"
vicky r u alrite"

evy1 noticed dem now nd ran towards vicky including rey...

at this swayam stood still and looked towards kriya and saw kriya in a very bad stage...
her eyes were filled with tears it was visible tat she was not n her senses she started to mutter "ma" "ma"
swayam ran towards kriya nd hugged her shouting kriya"
now evy1 including vickys attention was drawn to kriya nd swayam .
vicky forgot tat he was acting and stood up.. nw evy 1 understood t was a prank nd all eyes were set on kriya .. kriya was continously muttering ma. nd swayam was trying to bring her back to her senses shouting her name on the top of his voice
"kriya kriya comeback its not ur ma its vicky see " nd turned back to cc vicky standing wipingt he ink.. he understood t was just a prank nd turned back to kriya who was looking at the blood ink on floor "''



Part 2,3:::::::page 4
part4::::::::;::page5
part 5:::::::::page 7
part 6:::::::::page 9(last part)


thanks for all the support guys

takecare


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sharif_lafungi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
girl this is not done...seriously not done...itne bade cliffhanger pr kese chod skti ho yar...pls second part do abhi...main comment krna chahti hu pr kr nai paungi...pls abi do nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3

Your imagination on the current track is really amazing😃👏

I would just like to correct you only on one part...

Rey kind of slaps Kria..

Its so unlike his character.

Even the arrogant Reyaansh Singhania, the dazzler wont do that becoz he respects girls😃

Yes, he might hurt her but slap such thing is doesn't suit him until n unless its out of love.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
nice second part jaldi upgrade karna
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Supab imagination
love it
plz give 2nd part
egarly want to read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hawww.. I thot u'd gv d whole update.. bt u left it at such crucial point.. not done !!

anyways,Loved d OS.. However,I agree to Snigdha(Username-Chocolate) Reyaansh wud never slap a woman chahe jo b ho.. bt it was a part of ur imagination.. so its ok.. ;)

Loved Kriyam in d whole d most n ofcourse KR.. U evn mentioned Sharon's plan.. I hope ur discloding it too,right..

waitin fr d nxt update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the chapter 1 was great and superb and fabulous...
but u stop at that time when everyone were above to know the truth...
will wait for the second part... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Great start.. Ohhh no cliffhanger! Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
awesome one... 2nd part jaldi se update kar dena...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Superb imagination
Just loved it...BT centre main kyn choda
Pls update fast...
Waiting to read next part

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