Swaron ss : ENDING OR BEGINNING ? [ PART 2 UPDATED ] - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
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sorry for the late reply and also for not commenting on the
first part..

coming to the ss..i loved it
the first part was swayam's POV which was beautifully done..
his pain of not being with sharon..thinking that she has a boyfriend was nicely shown
part 2 just made my day..sharon's POV
she didnt have the courage to change her relationship status after the break up..that was lovely
one msg of swayam made her go back to him after 3 years
loved the patch up
great job!

love
nishi
Edited by Nishi.Kss - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Very nice
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
lovely os.just loved it & specialy the ending was superb.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
finally finish reading ur all chapter in one go... superb and fabulous ss...
the title name is perfect... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
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first of all so sorry for the late reply.
This was a really cute OS.
Swayam and sharon craving for eachother
And sharon not chaning her status. 😳
Their confession and then the kiss.. beautifully written.

Thanks for the PM. Do write more.
Love the title
Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
awesome.. loved it..

sharon's mind went blank reading his message n was thinking whether his words abt love he shared with sharon was al lie n was thinking how he moved on.. n ran to his house n d rest was magical..

loved d way swayam kiss sharon wen he understood sharon has not moved on n still loves him thats y didn't change d relationship status.. sharon's punch was much needed so loved that part..

ending to al sorrow n pain n start of a beautiful life ahead..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Firstly Thank you so much for giving us Sharon's POV 🤗
Loved the twist that you put in.. Sharon not changing her relationship status
A Damn cute story
Loved it ALOT

Keep giving us such stories to read because you are a fabulous writer
Will be waiting to read more from you 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome!!
such a cute end<3
ty for the pm.

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