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MY DEAR FRDS ON 6 TH NOV I MADE A POST

Taarey new attempt (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/channel-v-dil-dosti-dance/3801852/taarey-new-attempt)



WHERE I HAVE SAID THAT FOR THE FIRST TIME IN MY LIFE I AM GOING TO WRITE SOMETHING

at the request 0f all my sisters n frends like (disismennu4u,shivani,chinudolly,debu,ankita,nithi-newlife,mimi) im writing an ff on taarey (raasiya celebration) which will end on 17th december 2013.

TODAY I WILL WRITE THE FIRST CHAPTER...AND I AM DAM AFRAID TENSED COZ I HAVE THE EXPERIENCE OF WRITING COMPOSITIONS WHEN I WAS IN CLASS 10 AFTER THAT WRITING LITERATURE THAT TOO A STORY ON MY FAVOURITE COUPLE TAAREY ...SERIOUSLY FRDS I AM REALLY TENSED DURING THE COURSE OF MY PLUS 2 GRADUATION AND MASTERS I WAS HARD CORE STUDENT OF BIOTECHNOLOGY SO HAVE REALLY POOR IDEA OF LITERATURE.
BUT I WAS A ALL TIME READER OF STORIES ROMANTIC NOVELS AND ALL TAAREY RELATED OS-SS-FF OF THE FORUM.
BUT MY FRD NITHI YESTERDAY SAID THAT ONLY A GOOD READER CAN BECOME WRITER AND MY SIS SHIVANI SAID ' didi we all were first readers and then we became writers' ...so actually i have kept my fingers crossed really dont know how many will like it.

thankks to the frds, sis ,and bros for liking and commenting the previous post and encouraging me, thanks a lot , it really means a lot to me... a sp thank to karan coz the cute bros comment encouraged me alot.



Here goes the 1st chapter------------------------------- ( i am not giving any character sketch coz i feel it destroys essence of the story like we have in text books -learn definations at the begining or end of chapters.but i will introduce to the new characters as it goes on...)





A EDIT FROM MY LIL SIS MIMI - KOLKATA




A WALK DOWN MEMORY LANE (Chapter 1)

It was a cloudy morning. It was drizzling lightly. Taani was standing in the veranda of her flat in Jhilsa a small hillstation town of Arunachal Pradesh. Taani is very depressed the rain and the weather reminded her of the time she spent with her friends of St. Louis college on a rainy day, and especially of her beloved Rey. Her eyes shined with unshed tears and glowing smiles as she remembers the way Rey danced with her. The rain water making her white dress cling to every niche of her body. The way Rey looked at her, his eyes full of love and desire. The way he slowly caressed her as he cradeled her by her waist and she remembered his touch as she softly kissed her cheeks, her neck, and her ears. His touch would send a shiver down her spine and make her feel so wanton...Oh she missed him so much. It has almost been four months since she had seen her beloved, since she left St. Louis, since she left her brother Swayam and ran away to this distant place. So far away from Mumbai... so far away from all her loved ones... and her Tauji... her Tauji was...

"Memsahab aj aap offcice nahi jayege ?" Taani was shaken out of her reveries by her maid Sanjhi, "aaj mann nhi kar rha hai maine Malhotraji se kehe dia hai k aaj chutti le rhi hu. Tum chawal aur sabji bana dena. Aaj ghar pe hi khaungi."

The reason forTaani's staying at home is not only her nostalgia about her past. She is also facing a serious nuisance at office. A man - Shivam, working in the H.R. department is constantly making passes at her. He has already asked her to go for a date thrice in the last week alone. She doesn't know what to do. She is not ready for anything new at the moment. She didn't know how to tackle him.

In the evening as Taani was having coffee out in the veranda she once again remembered her "coffee" experience with Rey... he didn't even let her make the coffee that day. Who would have thought making coffee would be so romantic. The way Rey caught her by her waist from the back and kissed her neck and shoulders it was difficult to concentrate on anything at the moment. His touch the way his lips and tongue touched and carressed her bare skin it made her feel as if it was melting her bones with the heat of his touch. Her skin, her bones, her entire body seemed to be on fire. Rey's lips and his tongue seemed to be no less than hot branding iron melting her insinerating her body wherever they touched her. She felt like clinging on to him and let herself get carried away by the tidal wave of his passion that seemed only too eager to swipe her away. It was only the presence of her brother Swayam in the same house that stopped her from being swept away by Rey, and it was also the only thing that stopped Rey from seeing the passion she tried so hard to hide around him. His words still ring in her ears "Tumhara future mere saath hai, and trust me on that, kitchen me to bilkul bhi nhi!"




frds chapter will be short but a single chapter will depict a particular condition may be present or past of a particular character's life.

Do comment frds I am really worried...

INDEX

ch-1----------------------- pg-1

CH2------------------------PG -9








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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres

SORRY SORRY MONI TU AUR SHIVANI KI PRESSURE MAI MAI PAAK GAYI HU AB TU SHIVII SE FIGHT KAR MAI BEECH MAI NAHI AUNGI ...I AM GOING TATA. BHAGWAN MAI KYA KARU????????????? HI KRISHNA JI MUJHE YEA DONO BEHENO SAI BACHAOOO...



FIRST OF ALL MONI I WON... I TOLD PRIYA DI TO RESERVE THE FIRST POST 4 ME😆😆

AND THEN PRIYA DIDU
I LOVE U
U WROTE...FINALLY😉
first of all the very name of ur ff...
its just awesome di...it reflects the taarey intensity

It was a cloudy morning. It was drizzling lightly. Taani was standing in the veranda of her flat in Jhilsa a small hillstation town of Arunachal Pradesh. Taani is very depressed the rain and the weather reminded her of the time she spent with her friends of St. Louis college on a rainy day, and especially of her beloved Rey. Her eyes shined with unshed tears and glowing smiles as she remembers the way Rey danced with her. The rain water making her white dress cling to every niche of her body. The way Rey looked at her, his eyes full of love and desire. The way he slowly caressed her as he cradeled her by her waist and she remembered his touch as she softly kissed her cheeks, her neck, and her ears. His touch would send a shiver down her spine and make her feel so wanton...Oh she missed him so much. It has almost been four months since she had seen her beloved, since she left St. Louis, since she left her brother Swayam and ran away to this distant place. So far away from Mumbai... so far away from all her loved ones... and her Tauji... her Tauji was...

THE FIRST PARA...FIRST OF OL BANG ON DESCRIPTION DIDU.
THEN THE PHRASES LIKE unshed tears,glowing smiles prove that I HAVE TO LEARN A LOT FROM U
then beautiful flash back didu
THEN
ROMANCE...oh didu😳😳😳😳😳
I loved it didu and now I want to as y the hell did u not write earlier
seriously I m not saying ol thi as ur sister but as a CRITIC
😆😆😆😆

In the evening as Taani was having coffee out in the veranda she once again remembered her "coffee" experience with Rey... he didn't even let her make the coffee that day. Who would have thought making coffee would be so romantic. The way Rey caught her by her waist from the back and kissed her neck and shoulders it was difficult to concentrate on anything at the moment. His touch the way his lips and tongue touched and carressed her bare skin it made her feel as if it was melting her bones with the heat of his touch. Her skin, her bones, her entire body seemed to be on fire. Rey's lips and his tongue seemed to be no less than hot branding iron melting her insinerating her body wherever they touched her. She felt like clinging on to him and let herself get carried away by the tidal wave of his passion that seemed only too eager to swipe her away. It was only the presence of her brother Swayam in the same house that stopped her from being swept away by Rey, and it was also the only thing that stopped Rey from seeing the passion she tried so hard to hide around him. His words still ring in her ears "Tumhara future mere saath hai, and trust me on that, kitchen me to bilkul bhi nhi!"


Edited by taani.priya1997 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start
taani thinking about her days in st.luise
Taani remembering her time with rey
lovely
plz continue and update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update ...
Taani thinking old days ...wow
taarey part soo romantic ...

update soon
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amazing start 👏👏👏👏👏
update soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u really write good dr
awesome
continue soon
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res😳😳😳/ unres
love u a meri pyaari pyaari didu 🤗
i didnt know that my didu is so good at writing , 😉
u wrote so beautifully 😳😳😳
i really loved ur story so so s o much , 😳😳😳
taani remembering their memories was so beautiful yet emotional 😛 but i really loved it a lot ,
😲😲 shivam was asking taani 4 going with him 2 a date 😆😆😆 ... aree
princess taani to sirf apne prince charming se pyaar karti hai ,sacha pyaar 😳😳😳
pls update very soon didu ,
i want 2 see what will happen next
🤗
Edited by chinudolly - 11 years ago
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This was amazing dii!!
The way you described everything was perfect!
Keep up the good work dii!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start...do continue
loved this update
keep writing...
thanks for pm
update soon N PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing start di
Taani remebering old days n
thinking abt rey was written beautifully
Cont soon

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