Swaron OS: 'He hates me'

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

just too good tanvish.

creatives should read this

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uhs313

@uhs313

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Beautiful OS 👏 👏 👏...wish it would happen in d3... 😳 😉 😊

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Hafsa94

@Hafsa94

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

OMG OMG OMG, That was really awesome.

I so wish this actually happens.

I loved the way its written

Thanks for the PM

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

okay first things first

di main apke precap based OS's ki fan ban gayi hun.. 😃

truly..

i just love them.

i just wish ki please precap is super interesting. Di koi OS likh de...

main bhaag ke sabse pehla apka PM padhti hun..

now the OS

it was fabulous

as always.. mujhse kehne ki zarurat nahi hain 😆😆

so well thought.

so well written

simply outstanding

bus now i can't say anything... AWESOME !!! 😳

thanks for the PM

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Vadhana

@Vaddy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

👏👏👏

Amazing Os...really good :) you've actually captured the essence of swaron which was amazing and beautiful. Swaronish 😊 typical majnu and diva were potrayed :)

One last word...

Kaash.😉

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rainbow0498

@rainbow0498

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Hi,

I have read all of your work the OS, FF, SS...all, and they were all the best!!!

The best part of your writing is

that you are very close to reality...

you do not add situations that are just imaginary and not convincing

you do not exaggerate any situation

the plot, the characters, the happenings are all logical

when one starts reading your work, he/she gets captured in it

the readers connect with you

Great work...you really have a very good writing ability!!!

Reading your latest OS (He hates me), I really feel that the best thing that should happen today in the episode is that Swayam keeps quite and Rinni (or any one from gang) just says that since he is quite that means he hates you!!! It is so convincingly written that I really feel that this is what is going to happen in todays episode...and this is what should happen...

One feedback about the FF - "The best journey ever", the whole story was very patiently and thoughtfully penned down, but somewhere I feel after Sangeet...the marriage part was a bit hurried one...the feeling was like you were not interested in writing it and just for the sake of completing you finished it!!! Just a feedback!!! I hope you take it positive!!!

Waiting eagerly for the other 2 FF (Destiny and it's funny games , End of Love) to move forward...

Thanks for all your work!! Keep it up!!!

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

beautiful and heart touching os!!

such a wonderful patch up!!

ty for the pm,

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Rishabh Narula

@swaron1107

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Another wonderful work by you.

It was awesome, amazing ,emotional like all your work. Really want Cvs to show an emotional patchup like the one you portrayed in this OS.

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

My My awesome is an understatement for what I would want to describe about this OS tannu.. This one stole my heart..❤️.
Sharon's reaction when rini says swayam does hate her that subtle smile I liked it I din't want a crying sharon in front of the gang..
The pain you depicted be it sharon's or be it swayam's it was done beautifully.. Their emotions the mood everything was perfect bang on..👍🏼.
Last but not the least the emotional and beautiful patch up I look forward to such a patch up in the show intense and emotional just how our couple is..
Beautiful mhan you're a gem girl..🤗.