KRIYAANSH TS-kaho na pyar hai

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Posted: 11 years ago
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(First time I am writing KR os

So sorry in advance if you don't like it)

Flashback

Rey and kriya were in the party

And a girl was flirting with rey which made kriya very angry and she got drunk

Rey notices kriya and goes there

Rey-kriya r u okk?

Kriya-no reply and just stands and starts going from there

Rey-kriya baat toh sunno listen

Kriya still walking and she is drunk and in a lot of anger

Rey catches her holda her hand and pushe her towards him

Rey-kya hua

Kriya-tumhe uss se kya tum toh busy thee naa ppni unn girlfriends k saath

Now rey comes to know that kriya is drunk and seeing her like that

He starts laughing

Rey-tumne drink kiya hai,really and laughs more

Kriya more angrily -so tumhe use kya main kuch bhi karun aur usme itna hass ne ki kya baat hai

Rey still laughing

Rey-mjhe believe nahi ho raha kriya kriya ghai ne drink kiya ,tum toh kabhi drink nahi karti naa and tum itni cute lag rahi ho na aise k I cnt stop

Kriya cuts her inbetween and feels very bad that rey is laughing on her

Kriya-bahut hassi aa rahi hai mjhpe,aur why not main tumhari lagti kya hun kuch bhi toh nahi ,I don't mean anything for you and gets emotional

Rey-kriya tum ais KYUN BOL RAHhi hoo u know na you are my bestfriend aur min tum par nahi hass raha tha sachi mjhe tumhari cuteness dekhke hassi aa rahi thi I am sorry

Kriya -no I am not ur bestfrined kuch bhi nahi hun main tumhari tum toh sirf unn chipku ladkiyo k friend ho,I am nothing ,main hi pagal hunn ,tumhare liye toh main kuch bhi mean nahi karti,tum humesha unn sab ladkiyo k saaath hote hai than also main pagal hun k itna kuch hone k baad bhi I love you

Rey was shocked

Rey -kriya what tumne kya kaha

And kriya falls asleep

Rey takes her to her home

Next day

Kriya didn't talk to rey ,not even receive his phone call

Flashback ends

Kriya seating in her room with rey' picture

Kriya-kyun kyun maine kal I love you bol diya rey ko pata nahi mjhe itn gussa kyun aata hai ,main khudko rokk nahi sakti thi I judt hatemyself ,abb main rey k samne kaise joun ,kya bolung main use,kya soch raha hoga who mere bare main but galti rey ki bhi hai agar who ladki uske close aa rahi thi toh who durr nahi jaa sakta tha ,kaha se jayega mr. shirtless wonder the bigget lincutter har baat pe lines cross karne ka shokh hai ,par abb main kya karun

And than she looks at rey's picture ans smiles and get lost in his picture

Kria-pata nahi kiase mjhe iss linecutter se pyar ho gaya but ,I love him a lot aur pata nahi kyun mere dil ye sochta hai ki he loves me ,uski har baat pe lagat hai uska mjhe manana ,meri har jidd puri karna ,mera khayal rakhna and all par agar rey nahi karta mjhse pyar toh toh mera kya hoga universeji

Please main pichle 3 years se wait kar rahi hun k rey ekk baar aake mjhe bole k he loves me

Mjhe uski eyes main pyar dikhta hai bass use akal nahi hai k he loves me and only me please rey ekk baar kehdo kehdona pyar pleas ekk baar kaho na pyar hai

And rey was iin kria's room at that time and hears it all

Kria goes out of the room

Rey-toh ye baat hai aur baatcutter jab jaanti ho k I love you toh fir sunna kyun chati hoo and tum bhi toh aake puch sakti hoo,ekk toh u r so sure k I love you only and on second note tumhe kissi aur k saath tumhe itna gussa aata hai ,baatcutter pyar toh main tumse tab se karta hunn jab maine tumhe pehli baar smile karte hue dekha tha and you know na ye linecutter bina apni linecross kiye I love you nahi bolega

So just wait and watch miss kriya ghai I will make you mine forever

Hope ,itna bura nahi tha hope u all like it

Precap-rey's plan kriya gets hurt

Rey-I love you my baatcutter

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dilkriyarey thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
reali cute start...
do continue...
n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
So cute !!!! waiting for next part 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Supab update
love it
kria getting jealose
n got drunk n say i love u to rey
that was so awsome
n than rey heard kria ki baate in her room n was making plan to confess his love to her
amazing
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
cute and sweet start..
do continue
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
hey

loved it

upd\ate the second part soon...

~Anu~

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Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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quite nice..
i really lked it a lot..
please do conitnue and do PM me
wanna read the second part 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was a good and great start... liked it...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gud 1
continue & update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Cute update
continue soon
will luv to read more

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