[Neutral OS] Oh, It's Magic.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh, It's Magic.

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Feel free to imagine your favorites. There are no names included. I will tell this, the one I had in mind while I wrote this is not a couple in D3. 😳

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He took pride in his powers. He felt only he had the ability to command the waters as per his will. He would often play around, bring about floods merely for the fun of it; wanting to see another suffer. Yes, others belonging to the same clan had powers just like him. The only difference? They were all normal. They possessed normal magic. This particular power was rare and it was only often passed down from one generation to next; it only made his pride grow and misuse it - failing to understand the importance of it.

That particular day, He sat by the shore, watching the waters stretch in front till the horizon. His father once again scolding him for his pranks did upset him a bit. He would, as always, put up a pretense to be not bothered by it; but whom was he kidding? Sighing, he raised his hand and made shapes with his index finger in the air. The water started closing the distance towards the shore as it swallowed the earth beneath and just like that, he had the water rise in a spiral around him and dance about as if a spring, not the ocean, leaving him completely dry.

The liquid floated and gloated about as the whales danced out and dipped its head back in to the depth of the oceans. Agitated, remembering his fathers spiteful words, he dropped his hand to his side, resulting in a long drone of song, the splashing, as if the water itself laughed at his misery, betraying her master. The wind howled around him. Help! A voice screamed through the waters, capturing his attention. Curious, he stood up and walked in the water. He was sure he hadn't 'heard' the sound and that it was just his conscious playing tricks on him.

Using his powers, he had the water lift him from the ground, giving him a clear, far view of the ocean. At a distance, he spotted a person, a young girl to be specific, struggling to kick up the water and save herself from drowning. You are useless! His fathers words rang back in his head. For a split second, he considered proving his father right and not bother with the cry for help.

He was frustrated with conflict. As norm had it, he wanted to do what was expected of him: turn his back and walk away. But a corner of his heart told him to help the needy - that is what his powers were meant for in real sense. He himself knew and accepted he wasn't as heartless as he wanted others to see him as. He could tell the high tide was on its way, just eager to dive another alive human and take it with her. Sighing, he steadied the water, giving it all his might and began walking on the water.

As he neared the person, in the dark night, he made out the features of the girl and could tell she was frightened beyond limit seeing him walk on the water. He rolled his eyes. Why does everyone get scared? As if they don't know! He grabbed her hand for support and spotted her hesitation. "Just stand up. You'll be fine.' He convinced her. The mark on her neck was proof enough for him that she was a mind-reader, reason how he had heard her cry: she hadn't actually spoken the words but had simply called out to him in his head. She looked scared, unsure of whether to respond to his help. She had called out for help mentally, hoping someone nearby would pick up on it. But. He wasn't whom she had expected. Alas, she let him pull her up and surprised herself seeing she too could stand on water without slicing through it. She was aware of his reputation and for a split second, wondered if he was consumed by a spilt personality - for he actually helped her, the one person he despised.

He could see millions of questions flooding in and out of her head before they even stayed long enough for her to formulate a complete thought. Fragments. Word-questions. He could see it all. In that moment, both of them were beyond surprised experiencing something they had never before. It wasn't attraction. It wasn't a play. It was Magic. Oh, It's Magic - nothing more or less. But, Magic.


-.The End.-


So, here's an OS I had written time ago and sharing right now as I cannot give an update on one of my FF's. There's always an update of something or other every weekend so.. 😃 😆 This OS isn't much about romance or anything. Just a plain lesson of how no one is perfect and people may act as if they don't care but they do.


@The underlined part - can anyone tell me why I've focused on that? 😳

Love,

-Khushi.

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-Araina- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Everyone knows to add --silvermist-- to get PMs on FF and OS updates related to D3 (=

Ps: No PMs this weekend for this OS.. A bit busy + sick too. If anyone would be kind enough to spread the word? 🤗

-Love.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserved...


Once I get back tomorrow will unress..

ABhi padna hai m ujhe
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Araina-

Everyone knows to add --silvermist-- to get PMs on FF and OS updates related to D3 (=

Ps: No PMs this weekend for this OS.. A bit busy + sick too. If anyone would be kind enough to spread the word? 🤗

-Love.



Kal once I return back PMs shall be sent

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Khushi🤗

That was something very unusual ,different from what we read in general...there was a strange soothing kind of feeling to it...you kept your reader engaged in the happenings and left things for them to imagine...the magic thing was well-defined ...individual is not special because he has the power/magic... he can be special through using it for right reasons...

I liked the way you portrayed the magic thing...i would like to perceive it as any quality in normal human being...it becomes great with our moves...how and why we use it...

Many people have power...the difference is how you use it..the conflicting thoughts in their minds about each other...he is surprised to see her scared of his power..she is shocked to see him helping her whom he dislikes...

I liked the message..how no one is perfect and many times we act that we dont care about certain thing or incident or person..but we do care...

About the underlined part...i guess...he was as confused about his actions as her...he could read her mind even before she could formulate a complete question ...the confusion ..that momentary connection of similar thought...that was magic...(i dont know wat was ur reason of highlighting..this was my perception :P )

I am not into supernatural stuff..but i loved the way you kept it real by showing their thought processes ...loved the soothing effect in your writing ..

Love
Deepika
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

okat sacchi muchi maine aaj tak koi nuetral OS nahi paa..
this was my first one.. and trust me it was amazing.. 👏👏
loved it ❤️

this was too good..
all the migc thing..
the tricks and stuff so well written 👏👏👏

superb araina 😉😉
please PM karo na. 😆😆
awesome [:Y:}
killer !!



Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pehle toh...
Neutral OS???? 🤣

i mean sacchi mucchi neutral??? 😛

no coming to the update..

i really liked it..

u know nah how much i like this... the power.. tthe magic and everything..

similarly badi maza aayi padhne mein..

and i really liked how you showed the conflicting thoughts..

amazing...

awesome OS..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Vaish-

pehle toh...

Neutral OS???? 🤣

i mean sacchi mucchi neutral??? 😛

no coming to the update..

i really liked it..

u know nah how much i like this... the power.. tthe magic and everything..

similarly badi maza aayi padhne mein..

and i really liked how you showed the conflicting thoughts..

amazing...

awesome OS..


Aur nai toh kya. 🤣 I like it when no names are mentioned 😎

Yes, I know. Isiliye I scrapped the link so to make sure you read it 😆
I didn't go much in depth (length wise in explaining) but glad you love it, Casper! 🤗
Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Araina-


Aur nai toh kya. 🤣 I like it when no names are mentioned 😎

Yes, I know. Isiliye I scrapped the link so to make sure you read it 😆
I didn't go much in depth (length wise in explaining) but glad you love it, Casper! 🤗


see if u include a detective element..

or you include fantasy/magic/supernatural...

it is kind of mandatory i will love it... ;)

like it is mandatory i don't like writing tragic... ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res... will edit later for sure... unres...
this was simple fabulous and marvelous os... loved it
Edited by sweetydiyafrien - 12 years ago

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