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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

first i should dance... for taking the first position...

...dhinka chika.. dhinka chika..

yooo... first one to comment..

superb concept dear...simply awsome..

⭐️⭐️u have described everything beautifully right from the toddler to old age..

i loved their fights...

fights bhi itna cute ho sakta .. i nvr knew it

fight karte karte romance bhi kiya..

simply wow..loved it to the core...👏

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

res

unres

amazing...

that's all i can say..

the way this OS was conceptualized and the way it was written is simply outstanding 👏

from the very start till the very end.. it was all in a flow..

this OS reminded me of a poem by William Shakespeare : The 7 Stages Of Life "

you showed all the important phases of life...

and it was beautiful..

your OS was complimenting the TITLE

well done 👏👏

PM this to me soon

i am waiting

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow awesome update i loved it

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

OMMGGG. . . . . .
Aditi. .i cnt belive dis.
U r a writter?
And mujhe aaj pata chala. . .
Damm. .u r realy n awsm writter yaar. .
Nw i want all the links of ur work. .samjhi?? . .
And nw cuming to the os. .
Wowww. . .
Awsm os yaar. .
I realy lovd the characters Rey n kria here. . .
Both always fyting bt stil love eachothr. .
Love in all 7 stages of life. .
Realy superb yaar. .
I realy lovd d concept. . . .
Amazing n super awsm os. .
It was realy a treat to read. .
Keep writting such superb os n do pm me. . .
P.s hehehe i thnk 9th ki eng literature book ne bahut inspire kiya hai tujhe. .🤣

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

that was a superb and fabulous os of seven ... well wonderful written... liked it

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

😊

unres

aditi this was fabulous❤️

d way u described each and every stage of their life and love was amazinggg👏

it was funny and at d same time cute and romantic

brilliant-write-up👍🏼

loveedd ittt😊

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Aditi This is fantastic...
7 stages of Love/Life protrayed in the best way...

Love can be among friends and so among anyone around.
I loved the way you described the nature...Sea Shore is one of mmy fav spots when I think of hanging out...
With School going girl and by All I can says is Kriya sounded like Mom
College students that they were ha ha Fida hua ladka ladki pai...
The proposal was the most idiotic proposal that Rey did among the fights but again since its them it makes it worth..Kriya's reaction to it justified..Anygirl would say that
Growing up of child with Rey still not grown up..OMG Kriya has to handle two children now...
And the old age love one thing that keeps it special that they still are the same love birds AS we term them...

Dek comment kar diya maine 😆

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Love it
it was amazing
love tge way u start the story
from childhood,school,coll,marrage,n old age
totelly love it

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

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What was all this? I mean seriously. You have written a biography on their lives..

Starting from toddlers.. God! Seriously. Did I really read such a thing? For heaven's sake. They were toddlers. And fighting for a bottle of milk. Hadh hai.. inki moms kahan gayi thi.

And then schooling kids. Yaar tu mujhe ek baat bata de.. Iss Rey ko school mein admission kisne diya. Aur diya toh diya.. disciplinary committee nahi thi kya.. Hadh hai.. how can one be such.. upar se apni best friend.. apni hi saviour ko baatcutter bulaya..

Going to the Farewell party ka description was good. Ghur ke mann nahi bharta re..

Ab toh bataa hi de iss jaisa character tune banaya toh kya soch kar banaya.. peoposal koi aise deta hai.. Kya hoga ladkiyon ka..

Fight.. argument.. well yeh mujhe nahi samjha.. so directly moving on to the next..

Shaadi hogayi.. aur bachhi bhi.. Rey bigaadna chahta hai aur Kria usse track pe rakhna chahti hai.. aur kar lo fight..

oldies.. well Yeh question toh mere dimaag mein bhi hai.. how did she land up with him..

But all in all description was good.