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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello everyone, i'm here with an os. 16 October wasn't a good day for swaronions . it was extremely bad for me, so this os expresses my plight.

hope you like it.

A Bad Day

- written by nidhi

"Why is this day so bad Swayam? Why today?" cried Sharon burying herself in her boyfriend's chest.

"Happens Sharon, it happens with good people only, god probably wants to test you" said her irritated boyfriend Swayam without losing any patience.

"Why me god, why do you make me go through this" thought Swayam looking at Sharon who still did not stop crying.

She had been crying since an hour and he could not figure out the reason.

She had asked him to come to her house immediately. Clueless of the matter he rushed towards her house on his cycle. He entered through the window only to see his lady crying bitterly. Above and all she was wearing a salwar kameez. She wore a veil with the dupatta which made sure that her face remains hidden. Only her eyes were seen. This scared him to the core. He did not expect anything like this. He walked close to her. She was sitting on her bed. As soon as she registered his presence, she went and hugged him tight.

She had been crying since then and he still does not know the reason. They were standing at first, now they are on Sharon's bed. Swayam is resting his back on the bed rest and Sharon is still hugging him and crying. His shirt is fully wet now. She occasionally also used to hit his chest, it used to hurt him; he wanted to scream at her for hitting him like that but couldn't. He wanted to remind her that he was Swayam, her boyfriend, a human. Not her teddy bear. But he did not want to be rude. Unable to take more torture he again asks

"Sharon please tell me what happened, I cannot see you like this."

This statement made her cry even more. He once again asked

"What happened jaan, why are you covering yourself like this that too from me?"

She still did not answer, neither did she stop crying. He lost his patience and removed the veil in a swift motion. He had seen her face before she had the time to react. What he saw kept him stunned for a while, he wanted to go and bang his head somewhere. He now understood why anger management was so important. The removal of the veil made him understand a part of her agony.

He starred at her for a while and noticed her face. it was fair as usual but had three pink spots called pimples, Two on the left cheek and one on the right.

He took a deep breath and said "is that it."

"No" she replied and brought two boxes out of her cupboard and placed it in front of him, sobbing lightly.

He opened the boxes out of curiosity without uttering a word, he feared if he said anything, she might start crying again and that's an unbearable sight.

He opened the first box and took out a pair of spectacles and gave her a questioning look. She explained,

"The doctor said that my power is -2 and that I have to wear them everywhere. They are so big and ugly; they make me look like a nerd"

"I'm sure they won't, you will look more beautiful with them."

He says and makes her wear it. She cries again and says

"Check the second box"

He checks it and finally understands her plight. He removes a pair of temporary braces. She says

"I have to wear this for a year more. I went to the dentist for a normal check up; he said I had terrible positioning of my teeth so I have to wear these to position them."

"That's all?" he asked again

"Yes, now don't say that this is nothing, I know I will look ugly. Even a geek might look better than me."

"No, you're wrong; who are you comparing yourself to? Even with these specs, braces and pimples you will look out of this world for me."

"Why are you doing this Swayam? You won't get anything by being with me, you deserve a lot better."

"Are you done; you know Sharon some time back, I wanted to bang my head somewhere, now I want to bang yours. Are you insane by any chance? I loved you and will always love you. After two years of trying hard we are in a relationship, and you say I do not deserve you. Don't start again. I love you and only you however you look, get that thing straight into your head."

Saying so, he takes her in front of the mirror, makes the wear her specs and braces and hugs her from behind.

"Don't we look perfect" he asks

"We do" is her reply.

"Is there any other reason to call it a bad day?"

"Yes, the stupid network operator disconnected my Wifi. When I called he said that I won't have it for a week, how will I listen to one direction's songs now" she said hugging him and sobbing. He could never understand her obsession for one direction; he hated them as much as she loved them. According to her they were the epitome of being handsome and wonderful singers, according to him they were a bunch of lame guys trying to sing. He sure did not want one more outburst, so he said

"Sharon I promise I will get a CD of both their albums, you can listen to it whenever you want, does that solve your problem?"

"It does but what about tonight, how I will get sleep tonight?" she innocently asked

"Shall I help?" he asked giving a seductive smile.

Sharon noticed the naughty glint in his eyes and sensed trouble. She said

"I'll manage, you should go now, and it's late."

"No, I want to stay."

"Swayam go now, please." She pleaded

"Okay fine I'll pick you up in the morning."

"Bye" she said and pecked his cheek.

"Bye" he said and hopped of her window.

They both peacefully retired to bed and ended the day thinking about each other. After all, it is not how the day began or how bad it was, it is about how it ended.

jhootah, chappal, tomatoes, chocolates, lemon, hajmola, anything that you want to throw is welcome. i hope i did not put you all to sleep. please comment and hit the like button.

Nidhi

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Awww that was one cute update
Sharon is such a lil baby
Baat baat pe rona lol
Loved the mention of 1D in ur update
As i love those guys alo too
Its was nyc update
U write really well
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was good
nicely written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx for the pm nidhi something light to read was a delight at the moment coz I'm tired thinking about today's precap and the constant butchering of sharon's character and swayam's insults so this is like fresh air for me totally welcomed..😊.
And I like the os it was good the typical girl worries regarding pimples and glasses and braces all of it came and swayam patiently handled it..
Show main aisi light cheezein kyun nahi swayam and sharon ko why do they have to always deal with heavy duty stuff phew..
All in all I like it achha tha cute and simple..👍🏼 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it is so nice that you have come up with this OS...
we really needed it..
it was really simple and definitely lighten the mood
loved the way it was written

swayam and sharon were cute ❤️
simple and soothing OS
thanks for the PM
do write more
and do PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww thats a cute OS..loved the hyper and dramatic sharon and caring yet frustrated swayam😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hehehe this one is awesomeee.
Very very cute.😆
Loved it.❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was such cute OS.
Swayam getting angry bt when he see actual reason for her crying, he want to bang his nd her head
love d os
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
1D swaron ke story mein <3___<3 I luv u so much for this :D
I luv Niall as much as I luv tannu or swaron or vrushan or tanha :D <3 coming to the Os...it was s cute :)
Pehle mein dar gayi...coz Sharon crying and Swayam consoling and all...but after that towards the end I was beaming :D it was a cute Os :)
I can sympathize with Sharon...pimples! A girl's worst nightmare!! :O nerdy glasses are in trend so it's ok...braces :/ I hate em too...i was so sorry for Sharon and I was happy that Swayam consoled her, his style.
Cute and sweet :) do keep writing :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cute and great os... loved it

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