swaon OS: Swaron rain dance with breakfast date

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vaishali

@vaishali_mhaske

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
It was really a nice,sweet and beautifull os.
Loved it

Thank you so much😊😊...it really mean a lot to me as it is my first work...so Thanks for liking it.

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vaishali

@vaishali_mhaske

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -spongy-
that was a really beautiful OS
superb 👍🏼
loved it a lot...
please do write more and do PM me

you will be continuing it na..
please do continue it

Thank dear...thanks for appreciating my first work it means a lot to me...Actually i have written one more SwaRon OS that is on Swaron confession but due to busy schedule i didnt got time to upload it and by that time Confession episode was on air...so this time i hve written this Rain Dance OS before and becos of that only i havent write the full version of it but if possible i will definitely continue it and yeah i'll sure PM u next time...pakka...I knw i have made many mistake in this OS...bt then too u appreciated it...Thanks for that...😊😊😊

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vaishali

@vaishali_mhaske

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sakshiswaron
Superb os dear..!! 😳
loved it 👏

Thank you so much for liking my work...and thanks for the comment😊😊

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vaishali

@vaishali_mhaske

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
Such a cute n adorable OS...loved the way u took care of Swayam's wishlist...be it raindance...or sharon's wish..break fast date...the indian attire n sweet romance during night was blissful...amazing os dear..do write more😊

THANK YOU Deepika...😊😊You appreciated my work it means lot to me...😃I mean what should i say...You r my inspiration...I hve read each OS of ur's and u r one of the brilliant writer present over here...in this forum.Thank for the compliment.😊😊

As i m a biggg Fan of swaron so i always used to read all the OS of SwaRon so this time i just want to give it a try and thought to penned it down...Thanks for loving my work...It was my first work so i knw it is not up to the mark and i hve done many mistake also in it..but next time i will tke care of it,,,nd try to improve my work.

With Chai Date CV show us Cycle ride also...it was like one on one free...they fulfill two wish of their fan simultaneously...so i thought that what will go with Rain Dance wish...so i remember abt the Sharon's breakfast wish so i try to make it go in one shot only..

Once again thank you so much...😊

Edited by vaishali_mhaske - 12 years ago

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vaishali

@vaishali_mhaske

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sunvad278
I wanna seee this!!!! 😆
CVs plz show us something of this sort :D this is sooo swaron!! :D

Btw thank you sooo much for making my suckish day awesome with this OS 😊 tys.👏 :D:D:D <3<3

Thank you dear for liking this OS...and as you said that i hve made ur day AWSM...this mean a lot to me...and thanks that u feel that this sort of stuff u want to see in the show...😊😊

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vaishali

@vaishali_mhaske

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: swaronlove001
wao veryy nic os loved it...

p.s:- plzz add me nd send me all ur works

Thank you so much😊😊...and yeah definitely i will add you nd PM u my work...as it was my first work...but yeah if i will write something in future...then i will PM u..

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vaishali

@vaishali_mhaske

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: juili_p
mast😃 write more..thanks for pm..😊

Thank you julli for ur comment😊😊

Ur welcome dear...😊😊

And yeah one more idea is going in my mind...i will penned it down very soon and also PM u...😊

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Namratha

@nami2811

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Awww dis was so cuute n close to reality!
I loved d way u wrote n keep writing! :)

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@Death_Memories

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Awieee this was a super adorable OS.
Loved how sharon was in romantic mood and was constantly trying to divert swayam's attention.
Loved how you fulfilled swayam's wish in a fun yet romantic way.The cute romantic moments at night were aborable.Loved how you rememberd sharon's wish too and fulfilled it so amazingly.Loved the whole OS it was awesome.The way you penned it down I could clearly imagine swaron there .Nothing was overboard and thus it was truly believable.
brilliant OS just loved it.You should write more and pls pm me when you do
reading this was complete bliss to me