swaon OS: Swaron rain dance with breakfast date

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vaishali

@vaishali_mhaske

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: cenation123
Awieee this was a super adorable OS.
Loved how sharon was in romantic mood and was constantly trying to divert swayam's attention.
Loved how you fulfilled swayam's wish in a fun yet romantic way.The cute romantic moments at night were aborable.Loved how you rememberd sharon's wish too and fulfilled it so amazingly.Loved the whole OS it was awesome.The way you penned it down I could clearly imagine swaron there .Nothing was overboard and thus it was truly believable.
brilliant OS just loved it.You should write more and pls pm me when you do
reading this was complete bliss to me

Oh god...you describe the beauty of full OS in jst few sentence...THANKS alot for loving My first OS and really it means alot to me...and also thanks for commenting...😊

Thanks for encouraging me to write more😊😊 and in next week if possible i will post another OS on SwaRon

And yes i will definitely PM you my next OS😊😊

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

awesome OS dear...simply loved it...keep writing more...would love to read more frm u.. 😃

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vaishali

@vaishali_mhaske

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sweetdivya
awesome OS dear...simply loved it...keep writing more...would love to read more frm u.. 😃

Thanks for appreciating my work😊😊

Thanks alot dear...😊😊

Yeah i will definitely write more

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

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Truly,its a wonderfull work..Such a adorable one shot..i know it is u'r first work but it was perfectly written in the way of emotions and theme behind u'r OS..I just loved the way u build u'r OS story theme from D3 SwaRon current track..All the swayam wishlist and sharon want to fulfill them..Loved the idea of Rain dance as well as breakfast date..it was romentically described..Each event was beautifully potrayed..Loved the all romantic moment of night..Loved the way u remembered swayam and sharon wishes and fulfilled it so beautifully..Yes,it was long one shot..But i enjoyed a great and most interesting read..Pour blissfull work..Keep it up dear..!!
I request,Do write more..
Thanx for PM
And Sorry for being late..

Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago

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vaishali

@vaishali_mhaske

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: prateekdave7
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Truly,its a wonderfull work..Such a adorable one shot..i know it is u'r first work but it was perfectly written in the way of emotions and theme behind u'r OS..I just loved the way u build u'r OS story theme from D3 SwaRon current track..All the swayam wishlist and sharon want to fulfill them..Loved the idea of Rain dance as well as breakfast date..it was romentically described..Each event was beautifully potrayed..Loved the all romantic moment of night..Loved the way u remembered swayam and sharon wishes and fulfilled it so beautifully..Yes,it was long one shot..But i enjoyed a great and most interesting read..Pour blissfull work..Keep it up dear..!!
I request,Do write more..
Thanx for PM
And Sorry for being late..

Prateek

Thanks alot for ur appreciation to my work.U dont knw how glad i m feeling after seeing 40+likes and such an awsm comments...i didnt expected this much.

Thanks for noticing and liking each of the scene and appreciating it.

nd dnt be sorry i knw u were offline...

Please dont expect to much from me...as it was just a random thought so i penned it down...but yeah i will definitely continue writing more as everyone appreciated this OS so much so i will try to work more...infact i m on my way...soon i will post one more OS.

Once again thank you so much for liking my work😊😊😊

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

oh my god dis was such a long os... but it was just mesmerizing...
amazing os yaar...
i was blushing n blushing while reading it..
d way u have written it hats off..
very cute..I loved everything..
sharon romantic mode der dance routine in rh..
der walk in college der rain dance finally der breakfast date..
oh gosh dis was just a complete os..
from start till end it was just superb...
i loved it totally..
i cant believe yeh tumhara first os hai...
ur brilliant.. u must write more dear..

keep writing..

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago

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vaishali

@vaishali_mhaske

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon
oh my god dis was such a long os... but it was just mesmerizing...
amazing os yaar...
i was blushing n blushing while reading it..
d way u have written it hats off..
very cute..I loved everything..
sharon romantic mode der dance routine in rh..
der walk in college der rain dance finally der breakfast date..
oh gosh dis was just a complete os..
from start till end it was just superb...
i loved it totally..
i cant believe yeh tumhara first os hai...
ur brilliant.. u must write more dear..
keep writing..

Thanks dear..Thanks alot😊😊😊

ur comment means alot to me...thanks for the appreciation...and bearing it and noticing each scene...i cant believe i m getting such an awsm feedback...actaually it is jst a random thought and yeah its too long as it i hve to fulfill both swayam and sharon wish simultaneously that's why it become too long...

And yeah i m thinking to continue my work in future and may be possible soon i will post one more SwaRon OS

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fanista

@fanista

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Imagining...
My Vrushi ...lol
i meant swayam's sharon in red ...waow ...
so beautiful ...
i prefer calling her barbie doll ...
rain dance was sooo amazing
loved the scquence !
So amazing it was ...😊
our Vrushaan and Swaron are amazing to imagine ! ...
you did a very good job ! ...