Hanging by a thread A swayam os

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sneha singh

@swaron9113

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Wow amaging os harshi.
U beautyfully describd swayam's feeling.
Whole os is brilliantly written.
Bt it's also too heart touching. 😭

ye le mai tere bumb se darr gye.
Islia lyk aur cment bhe kr dia.
Ab mere upr bumb mt fodna. 😛

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tanharockks

@tanharockks

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Nice os

you have portrayed swayams pov in a brilliant manner

but i would like you to continue this os

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

awesome os harshi

loved the way u described swyams emotions

it was so beautifully penned down

really loved this os

plz can u continue if possible i wanna read more of it as in u can write more in continuation of this os n it will be a treat to read more of it

thanx for the pm

keep writing

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

This OS brought me into tears... Wonderful writing

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Really emotional one harshu :) u have described swayam's feelings so well loved it😊😊

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Sorry for the late reply!!

this was an amazing OS!!

you did an accurate job of what im pretty sure swayam felt...

great work!!

and you left me speechless with your writing...

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: devlishswaron77
Kya baat hain Harshu wat a faadu update but at the same time very sad as well 😭 But but but the way u elaborated swayam's pain his dilemma his hurt was just commendable!!!!I loved the update freaking awesome!!!!!!

thanks Maani dii