you are my birthday wish TANNU OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Friends😊...
I am back with an Oneshot on SwaRon...
Few of you have already read it on surbhi's Birthday thread...for the rest of you I am posting it here..hope you all like this...so here it goes..

please bear with the mistakes...didn't get time to proof read..

@DI - Thank u Di for ur support..love you😊

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YOU ARE MY BIRTHDAY WISH
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She switched off her lappy after drooling for so long on him...he was every girls dream...the lover boy...every laila's majnu...she sighed..Hayee tannu...kab milungi me tumse...i so wish this birthday i could meet u...i could dance wid you...she kept her lappy aside...switched off lites...tannu dreamz khushi...wished herself and drifted to sleep.

Its her daily routine...watching repeat telecast of the show...going on forum...making posts...praising his acting skills...his dance...and more over his good looks...only one question revolves around her head...how could someone be so cute yet so hot.


She was sleeping hugging her teddy...her sweet sleep disturbed by a noise coming from her window...she was lil afraid as whats going on down there...and thought to get up and check...but as noise became loud... She covered her face with her palms and closed her eyes tightly... suddenly window opened wid a jerk and a lean tall guy entered through the window...He stood their taking support of the side wall...he was mesmerized with the sight present in front of his eyes...an angel sitting on the mid of her bed ...keeping both the palms on her face ...eyes closed tightly...he smiled at her innocence...and went near her..."Hey"..khushi slowly opened her right eye...he widened his smile...and waved...she opened her eyes with a jerk "no this cant be possible...no...its just cant...she stood at her place and was trying to make herself understand that what she has just saw was not real...she was continuously repeating it cant be possible its not real...he grabs her hand and made her sit again and said..."yes it is...m here for real...u can confirm it..and forwards his hand"...her sleep vanished...her eyes were wide open...she slowly took his hand in hers..."OMGGG...Swa..swayum aappp...tummm...i mean...shannn...tum...sorry...tannu..aappp...i cant believe...i just cant believe...someone plz tell me...this all is happening for real" said khushi in excitement..with lil nervousness..."why someone else..m here to tell u na" said Shaan flashing his hypnotic smile.

Khushi just adoring him...still try to digest that all what is happening is for real..."So..." he tilt his head a little and asked smilingly...khushi looked into his eyes...those deep brown eyes...she used to dreamt every night..."I still cant believe you are here...in my bed room...she gain senses stood up and again started panicking...yesss...you are in my bed room...what are you doing here...ommmggg...ooommmggg...he went near her holds her hands..."I am here to fulfill your wish...you made a wish just before sleeping...remember!!" answered shan flashing his signature smile...with a naughty gleams in his eye...he was loving each n every change in her action reaction...her dreamy mode...excitement...nervousness...everything...the fact of him being there only for her...made her feel like out of the world.

For some time they both looked into each others eyes...the moment was magical...as if time stopped their...cool breeze made wind chime to create background music for this magical moment...with this sweet melody of wind chime...shaan went on his knees...and forwards his hands towards her..."Dance" khushi khushi in uber shock with widened eyes..."khushi...dance" shan asked again...khushi quickly got up...with a broad smile on her face..."yes" khushi replied while giving her hand in his...shan holds her firmly...and start singing

Chaahe tum kuchh na kaho maine sun liya
Ki saathi pyaar ka mujhe chun liya
Chun liya
Maine Sun liya

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

For khushi yes it was first time she was experiencing being close to someone...whom she adores a lot...the feeling was undescribable...it was indeed pehela nasha pehle khumar for her...she was lost in his eyes...his sweet voice was like bliss to her.



Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin
Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin
Ek kar doon aasmaan zameen
Kaho yaaron kya karoon kya nahin

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

Her eyes became moist...he was singing...dancing in joy...and she simply following his steps...using all the furniture as prop...jumping on bed...twisting table...and revolving around the chair...

Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

on last line of the song he went on his knee...holding her hand. Moment froze for them.


Shan slowly got up...still holding her hand...he stepped forward and leaned towards her...and kissed on her forehead...khushi blushed hard...

He moved towards her ears and said "HAPPY BIRTHDAY KUSHI BETA" she opened her eyes with confusion written on her face...his angelic face changed to her moms face who was smiling seeing her daughter blushing..."whattt?" asked khushi..."phir se shantanu tha dream me haina!!" said her mom and burst into laughter...

"maaa" said khushi embarrassed ..blushing ..and hugged her mom.

Thank you so much God...for fulfilling my Birthday Wish...she expressed her gratitude to almighty ..still in her Mom's warm embrace ...


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Swaronvrushan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hii...its difficult to read as writing is not showing properly...anyways I read it...and it is beautiful...khsushi is a lucky girl
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well please try to fix the writing
but it was an amazing OS
loved it
specially "pehla nasha pehla khumar" 😳😳
do write more...

tannu ☺️

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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Thisn is everyone's dream 😳
Nicely written..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
that was a fabulous and awesome os... great finally khushi
birthday wish got fulfill and she is so happy that she just tightly hug her mom...
in happiness of only fulfill her wishes of birthday came truth...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
awesome os
Khushi so lucky girl yaar
i wish i was in her place n actually my dream comes true n if i meet shantannu on my birthday den dat would be the worlds best gift for me
an encounter with hum n his broad magical n mesmerising smile will make my the one of the most special birhtdays
this was an amazing os
i loved it so much
[i hope even my wishes r fulfilled soon]
thanx for the pm
keep writing
Neha_KR thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Nice n lovely os
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Nice OS..
What a dream for Khushi on her birthday 😊
Edited by D3_4life - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
REALLY NICE STORY
U GRT WRITTER AMAZING
AWSOME DEAR LOVED IT...!!
THANK 4 THE PM
LOVE YOU S MUCH
UPDATE WAS AWSOME I REALLY LIKED IT
AMAZING STORY I REALLY PARTS
GIVE LIKESS TOO IT'SS AWSOME STORY
I REALLY LIKED IT
UPDATE SOON
I M EAGERLY WAITING 4 NEXT UPDATE
THANK 4 THE PM
UPDATE SOON
HUGSS LOVE YOU

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