Walk down memory lane(a swaron os)

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Another swaron os by me as a gift to deepika dii for becoming sizzler.dii padhke bataana kaisa lagaa...

The night was beautiful.The moon was playing hide and seek with the nature.It would hide behind and the clouds and then peep out as if teasing the stars.Stars were twinkling brightly as if clapping at moon's antics like little kids.Trees were moving with the wind enjoying the teasing of moon.Equally beautiful was the couple walking on the silent road hand in hand.Swayam and Sharon finally Swaron.The boy stopped suddenly.
sh:Kyaa huaa😕
sw:why now
Sh:kyaa why now😕
Sw:Hum mera matlab hai ki You said u love me lekin ab achaanak kyu i mean phle tumhaara mujhe ignore karna fir breakup and achaanak se ye i dont get it
Sh:hmmm mujhe ptaa tha tha ki u'll ask this and you deserve the answer par bohot lambi kahaani hai isliye umm
She suddenly saw a bench roadside
Sh.chalo waha chalkar baithte hai
they both went and sat
Sh:hmmm to shuroo se start karte hai
Sw:shuru se
Sh:haa shuru se remember wo first time jab tumne mujhe rehearsal hall me approach kiya thaa
Sw;haa aur tumne notice tak nhi kiya😒
Sh:wrong agar notice nhi krti to mention nhi karti.ptaa hai us din thodi der ke liye hi sahi par maine tum me phli cheez kya notice ki thi
Sw:kyaa😕
Sh:tumhaari eyes pta hai tumhaari eyes dekhkar i felt ki haise tum mujhe nhi meri soul ko stare kar rhe ho.fir hamaari second meeting
Sw:hmm hamaara first dance
Sh:ptaa hai swayam us din maine tumhaari second quality notice ki.tumhaari innocence the way tum meri sarcasm ko bhi compliment samjh rahe the i was so surprised ki koi itna innocent kaise ho sakta hai.Tum meri har sarcastic insult ko compliment ki tarah treat karte rhe and u kept smiling and when u danced i noticed one thing jo hum dono me common hai
Sw:wo kyaa
Sh:yahi ki we dance from our hearts.Iwas admiring u but the sharon Raiprakash the diva took over me and i slapped u and insulted u.sorry for that
Sw:hey dont be sorry maine phle bhi kaha hai i enjoyed it...
she blushed😳 and her cheeks turned an adrable pink in colour a colour he loved on her..
Sh:then happened rdx sir's party tumhe yaad hai
Sw:main kaise bhool sakta hoon sharon us party me i danced with u in my arms so close to my heart for the first time.mai jaanta hu ki we both were high but mujhe sab yaad hai and main aaj bhi wo har ek moment ko cherish kartaa hu.I know ki tumne mujhe kahaa tha ki you dont remember but i do aur wo moments meri life ke best moments me se ek rahenge
Sh:wrong mujhe sab yaad hai maine tumse jhooth bola tha.
Sw:par kyu sharon why did u lie😕
Sh:actually sharon ne jhooth nhi bola sharon raiprakash the diva ne jhooth bola tha because use apni reputation ki fikr this but sharon ko sab yaad hai.i remember our dance.i remember jo kuch bhi stairs par hua.i remember everything
remembering about the incident of that day her blush deepened
Sh:pta hai swayam i still thank that we got high.

Sw:wt😲 par kyu
Sh:kuki agar aisa naa hota to i could never see ur heart of gold.even though hum dono high they and i was ready but phir bhi tumne mera advantage nhi liya.pta hai swayam i loved this quality of yours and when u said kyaa hum dono hum nhi ho sakte to i wanted to say yes but again Sharon raiprakash the diva took over aur reputation bohot important ho gayi and i denied everything aur tumse bhi promise liya aur tumne kitni asaani se kh diya that my wish is ur command.I was stunned tumne mere liye mere comfort ke liye sab kuch jaane diya.Us din i realized ki u are extraordinary.
Sw:Jaane kaise nhi deta sharon if my one promise makes u comfortable than why not.
Sh:tumhe basketball match yaad hai swayam dazzling vs weakling
Sw:bilkul yaad hai tumhe stare karne ke chakkar me we lost a point aaj tak bharat mujhe chidhaata hai

he teased and she turned red again☺️ and hid behind her flicks
Sh:hmm fir to tumhe ye bhi yaad hoga ki tum gire the when nilesh pushed u
Sw:haa mujhe to yaad hai but i think ki tum rey ko cheer karne me busy ho aur mujhe notice bhi nhi kiya hoga
Sh:ofcourse kiya tha and i was tensed.main chaahti thi ki dazzlers jeetein but jab tumhein chot lagi to i didnt like it and that day i realised ki main chaahe tumhe nobody kahoon but u are somebody to me.phir started the rey vs kria fiasco
Sw:hmmm
Sh:pta hai swayam wo phase meri life me kaafi significant hai tumhe rose day yaad hai.Sharon raiprakash ko rose dene waalon ki kami nahi thi par agar sharon ko kisi ke rose ka wait tha to wo tha tumhaara.pta nhi ku and when u didn't give me my rose it irked pta nhi ku but somehow i felt that ki your rose belongs to me only and that day i got too see the naughty side of yours. i still remember the poem u said i know wo mere liye thi because everything in that poem described me and tab mujhe ye baat ptaa chali ki tum mujhe mujhse bhi acche se jaante ho and some how u see the sharon behind the diva.
Sw:us diva ke piche chupi sharon ko to mai phle din hi phchaan gayaa tha aur pyaar bhi usi se hua tha mujhe.
Sh:isliye to mai darti thi aur tumhe aur insult karti thi.par swayam u know jab mai rose queen nahi bani to i was disappointed lekin jab mujhe tumhaara rose mila to that loss didnt matter pta nhi ku but tumhaara wo rose was the most important thing and somehow mai sab bhool gayi
Sw:im sorry sharon rose day result manipulate karne ke liye.main bas kriya ka confidence waaps laana chaahta tha.
Sh:hey dont be sorry infact im glad ki u did that warna mujhe kaise pata chalta ki tum kitne loyal ho.u are the best friend anyone could have and i liked that about you.ptaa hai swayam jab bhi tum kria ko cheer karte the and defend karte the to i didnt like it😡.pta nhi ku but slowly slowly i realised that this feeling was jealousty.i was jealous
Sw:sharon the diva was jealous of kria😲
Sh:mhmmm sharon the diva nhi sirf sharon was jealous.pta nhii ku but mujhe chodkar tumhaara kisi aur ko attention dena just irritated me😡.Aur phir start hua Louisian phase
Sw:louisians i remember kitna drama hua tha.tumhe karan sir yaad hai
Sh:of course how can i forget him
Sw:yaa how can u forget him😡
swayam was super jealous he remembered sharon's fascination with karan sir and he despised it.sharon saw jealousy in his eyes and mentally smirked
Sh:mujhe karan sir isliye yaad rahenge because he brought u close to me
Sw:hmmm?😕
Sh:remember the kabbadii and salsa.
Sw:bilkul😃
Sh:pta hai swayam these too events impacted me so much.Kabbaddi made me realize how much my happiness means to you.you lost deliberately so that i could rejoice and i did.and salsa just made me realise that how gud it felt to dance with u.Beacause our hearts connected.Thanks to karan sir because unknowingly because of him i drifted close to u.then the college trip happened
sw:yaa college trip boys vs girls
sh:hmm vaise to wo boys vs girls tha lekin phir bhi i think it brought all of us together dazzling,weakling,boys and girls and umm you and me.project ke liye hi sahi but mujhe tumhaare saath akele time spend karne mila that boat ride.
sw:boat ride(laughs)yeah variety is the spice of life😆
sh:hmm i remember.waise to i was asking to question for the project par andar se i wanted to get to know u and tumne to mujhe shock hi kar dia i thought i knew u but when u said u r a casanova i was so irritated because i wanred u to be a one woman man.bacuse i though ki u belong to me u tricked me so easily.
sw:i remember everything when we felll in the pool

she again blushed and smacked his arm.
sh:fir the whole secret admirer thing.
sw:the turning point
sh:hmm pta hai swayam when i used to get the gifts from the secret admirer i loved them but somewhere in my heart i hoped and wished that u are the secret admirer sharon the diva ko chaahe gifts pasand ho but sharon ko sirf unke peeche chupi feelings pasand thi and somehow i wanted the secret admirer to be u.I really started liking the secret admirer kuki he knew how to cheer me up when i was down and i wanted to meet him.
Sw:and then u found out ki wo mai tha and u hated him too

sh:wrong jab mujhe pta chalaa ki secret admirer tum ho to i hated myself because i thought ki mai kya aisi ladki hu jise expensive gifts dekar aaram se hasil kiya jaa sakta hai am i that shallow.i though ki u loved me but the thought of u thinking me as a shallow gold digger hurt me and i lashed out.
sw:u thought ki mai tumhe shallow samjhta hu😲,no sharon those gifts were just a token of my love.
sh:pta hai swayam thts the point tum mujhe shallow nhi samajhte the but main shallow thi.sharon the diva shallow this uske liye apni reputation bohot important thi and ye baat sab jaante hai.so just cuz u deserved better i denied but in he process i hurted u too much
by now both were in tears.their eyes were moist😭.
Sh:and us din when u shut the book i was paining and i hoped ki u wont stop loving me but i pushed u away and u started ignorning me, you started behaving cold with me and i didnt like it.Mai hamesha wait karti rhti thi for ur loving eyes to look at me with that love again for ur sweet gestures but everything changed
sw:sharon mai tumse door tumhaare liye gaya thaa i didnt want u too be uncomfortable isliye i maintained my distance but trust me it killed me to behave like that with u.
sh:pta hai swayam i wanted to see ur love for me once again thats why i brought the gifts u gave me so that u can remember and i could get my old swayam back but u burned them and u burned my hope too.tum chale gaye and i revived whatever i could because they were important to me.
sw:i burned with those gifts too but i thought doing that would free u of the guilt of accepting them not knowing they were from me.
Sh:bohot emotional ho gaya
saying so she wiped her tears and he wiped his too
Sh:phir shuru hua nicole track😡
while saying nicole's name her features soured.
Sw:yaa nicole.
Sh:ha ha tumhe to yaad hi hongi na wo haina😡
she said with an irritated expression.she would deny it but she knew that she was jealous of her because of her closeness to swayam.
Sh:ptaa hai swayam when nicole came and u danced with her i hated it because somehow i believed that only we were meant to do close dances.dance was our connection and i hated seeing u share it with nicole or kria or aashi.
Swayam was so happy that she felt the same as he did it.
Sh:isliye when u danced with nicole i didn't like it.You remember the paso doble dance rehearsal.Main chaahe tumse kitnaa bhi door jaana chaahoon but dance hamesha haame paas le aata tha.You were ignoring me but the paso doble rehearsal brought u and me closer and i was glad.
Sw:phir wo shivam😕
sh:I thought u were moving on so to show you that i didn't care either i started interacting with shivam.I just wanted to make u jealous to confirm that u still care that it affects you.But it was the biggest mistake of my life.Shivam ki party me jo kuch bhi hua I know wo tumne dekha but let me clarify I didn't let him kiss me swayam.He tried to but mujhe pta ku nhi ku aisa feel ho rha tha that im cheating on u and i left.
Sw:you mean u didn't
Sh:nahi lekin jitna bhi hua wo bhi galat thaa it wasn't right.he was not supposed to get close to me aur maine apne aapko uske liye punish bhi kiya.you know new year pe jab sab mere ghar par aaye to i was so happy but when i noticed that u were not there i felt incomplete aisa lagaa jaise li something very important is missing.
Sw:Lekin phir mai aa gaya
Sh:haa tum aaye lekin mere liye nhi rey ke liye.Lekin phr bhi i was content ki at least new year pe you will be there .Jab tumne kha that you would not stay to i just kept praying in my heart ki u would stay and i guess isliye that whole fiasco happened and we got stuck.Tumhe yaad hai tumne wahaa mujhe apni arms me uthaaya tha
Sw:kaise bhool saktaa hoon sharon.To have u in my arms is a divine feeling sharon.
Sh:to be in your arms is divine swayam.Mujhe itna content or safe feel ho rha tha and i never wanted that proximity to end.lekin every good thing has to come to an end aur phir we just sat there.You remember kriya picked u for a close dance
Sw:haa mujhe usne kyu pick kiya mujhe nhi ptaa.kyunki main certainly uska favourite boy to nhi thaa.
Sh:ptaa nhi but i didn't like it when u danced with her.Uske upar se Nilesh and Vicky were saying that u guys are a couple and i was furious😡😡.Then new year happened and i wanted to wish u first and wanted u to be the one to wish me first😳 lekin fir se shivam ne sab kuch spoil kar diya.aur😡. fir we got to know that u are leaving and i was stunned😲😲 because i could not stand the thought of you never being there.Aur mujhe ptaa tha ki the reason behing you leaving was me and shivam😒.I did not want you to go lekin tumne kisi ki baat nhi maani.
Rey ko lagaa ki i can stop you aur main hi tumhe roknaa chaahti thi isliye main kriya ke ghar pe thi aur jab tum wahaan aaye to i so wanted to tell u ki dont go because i need u,i want ur presence in my life lekin once more dazzler sharon took over and i behaved rude lekin phir bhi i was glad tha you were not leaving because i cant fathom the thought of you not being there in my life..

okk guys this is the first part do let me know how it is should i continue or not...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres


yipee
me first 🥳
lets dance...
coming to the OS
lovely


wow the dialogues were really well written
really nice
i mean the way you showed their every meeting from the start
and sharon's feelings on each one of them 👏👏👏


and swayam's love for sharon is commendable 😳 ☺️
really loved the concept of the OS


it was worth reading
loved it
specially this line... "us diva ke piche chupi sharon ko to mai phle din hi phchaan gayaa tha aur pyaar bhi usi se hua tha mujhe."
fabulous job !!


really liked this OS
please do update the next part


thanks for the PM
update soon
and do PM me 😃


P.S this OS will have how many parts?


Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
unres..

Kiddo brilliant stuff 👏 👏
Sharon sharing all her feelings from day 1 with swayam awesome.. Somethin which i always wanted sharon to do dat is speak her heart out in front of swayam n here it is 😊
Superbly written 👏
D way u started from d very first time dey met each other n explained about sharon.s feelings from den it was amazing somethin which was always hidden her pov on all dat happened between them from start till now was always missing but u showed her feelings perfectly 👏 👏
Each scene u focussed on took me back to dose actual scenes it was like i went in flash back..
Well written n well thought 👏
Continue soon n pm karna 😊

Ur shilpu di 😊
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing!
of course continue it and iss baar mujhe pm karna mat bhoolna!
Edited by pooja123456 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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An awesome OS i must say...👏

each and every moment between Swaron was so well narrated... simply loved it...😳

eagerly waiting for the next part...

please do pm me after it is updated

Edited by swathi_swaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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harshita---

i liked how you paid attention to each and every nuance of swaron scenes which were so special to us---

and more importantly described swaron POVs which we missed in some of those scenes.

and you wrote it well, really well. it was so natural---and honest.

thank you.
i'm sure deepu would love this.what a gift.
and if you dont mind may i make a suggestion?

in future dont make the first part so long---half the people run away before the first half---i know from experience trust me!

anyway as you think best. love---medha
Edited by medhasarkar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg 😲u wrote an OS for me😭😭😭happy tears...

Hey Harshi🤗

Swthrt...u wrote an OS for me..really...😲...and that was so blissful..i loved it would be an understatement...i loved the way paid attention to each and every minute scene of SwaRon from their meet..their 1st dance..college trip..boat ride...secret admirer ...show down...jealousy track...


The way u penned down their feelings...pain..love..jealousy ...attraction...it was so beautifully done...

U kept the characters real...the diva & lover boy...i loved loved loved it

The flow was so lovely...and u are improving with each write up..m proud of u baby😳

It was so intriguing ...i wanted to read further ...lovely OS dear..brillaint...plz continue soon😳

Luv
Ur Deepu Di
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow u hav written it soo beautifully dear
i juz love each n every dialogue of OS
superb dear :-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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harshita awesome one...splendid job..continue...i was expecting such heartfelt convo about complicated journey of swaron..nevertheless u completed my wish😳 waiting for next part😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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veryy nic sara d3 swaron rrelated wowww...

ppzzz updaete

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