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Posted: 12 years ago
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Swaron OS
Guys am writin sumthin for the frst time . bear with ma mistakes and do give me feed back...
part 2-page2


Back to him

:Sharon was pacin in her room. Sayin she was tensd wud b an undrstatemnt. She was in ful panic mode. She had to go fr d checkup 2mrw. Sharo

n-' kya karu me agr test pe mera health or bigad gaya tho? Kahin doct

r ne mujhe fir se dance se mana kar diya toh? Swayam fir se sad hojay

enge. Humara pyar... Nehi sharon wat r u sayin? We r jst frnds nw. Au

r mein hamara frndship ki soch rahi thi... Uff! God y am i thinkin so

much?.. Agar mein is tarah sochengi toh breatin troubl hojayenga.. I

ts true i havnt got breathin problm 4 a lng time bt i use inhalr bfor

e i dance... Mujhe calm down karna chaiye'... She closd her eyes '

breath in breath out.. Dats nt workin.. Wat cud calm me? Swayam!' he

r heart answrd instantly... Den der ws a whethr to cal him or nt... A

tlast i decided to cal him..

sw- helo sharon.. sh-(thinkin) its t

rue ki nly he can calm me down. Jst listnin to his voice al panic ws one..sw- sharon r u der? Can u hear me? sh- haan swayam.sw-ky hua ? Tum theek ho na?

sh-mein bilkul teek :hu.sw- kya hua sharn?

sh- kuch nahi mein toh bas ese cal kiya tha

. sw- sharn tum mujhe is time pe cal kiya kuch toh he. Bolo kya hua?

sh-(god he knws me so much) woh woh bola na kuch nahi mujhe abhi jana he bye..nd she cuts d cal

on d othr side

sw- somethin was of in her voice. Bahut tensd lag rahe the. Is it abt her health ? ANd knwin sharn she wil hide it frm me to reduce my tension..

Uff! Ye ladki! I think i shud check on her nw..In sharns room...

Sharn ws stil pacin to nd fro dat she dint hear swayam comin trough d

window. Now swayam was leanin on d windowsil watchin her.

finaly swayam said hi .

Sh- hi

she lukd at him nd stil cntinued her pace!den she froze n her path nd lukd at him who ws amusd by her behavior.

sh-swayam!..

she shoutd.

sh- wat d hel swayam ? Itni raat ko.i tld u na i am fine. Kya zarorat dhi

Swayam held her by d shoulder and made her sit on d bed

sw- agar tum mujhe nahi bataonge toh me yahan se nahi jaongi. Not even tomorow.

lukin at him she knew he was serious nd his eyes wer ful of concern nd luv for her.how cud she deny dem anythn..

sh-(wisperd) i hav to see doctr tomrw. now it was swayams turn to panic.

sw- tumhara health kaise he? R u fine? Forgot ur medicne? Sharn tum apna khyal bilkul nehi rahta ...

sh-(thinkin)mere liye kitna concern he!.

sh- Its jst a regulr checkup. And am fine...

Sw-pakka?

sh-haan pakka.

Sw-den y r u so tensd?

sh-woh..woh.. Agar usne dance karne se mana kar diya toh?

sw- no sharon trust me! Nothin like dat wil hapen.

U r healthy nd fine nw.. Mein hoo na.. U trust me r8?

she lookd in to his eyes. She thought Was dat even a questn she trust

d him blindly even wen she had no trust on herslf it ws him who gave

her cnfidence.she knew dat he wud always b wid her no matr wat.

he undrstood dat she had calmd down.

sw-by d way sharn . Wen r we goin 2mrw?

sh- oh 10.30. Wat we?

sw- yes we. U thot i wil let u gone.

sw- no buts no ifs.. I'l b here at 9.30. Nd

luk at d time. U shud sleep now.

she knew der ws no point in arguin

.so she bid him gudn8




i knw its super lame... ders one part to it ... pls tell me if i shud post it or nt????...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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LOVELY OS dear ...it completely showed the confused sharon ..majnu boy😳

continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Off courseu shld post it...nd remind u ny work on swaron s never lame
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its lovely 😊

sharon knows her comfort lies in swayam 😛

& swayam is always ready for his sharon 🤗

so concerned... so loving 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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great start and fabulous... continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely os
plz do continue
also plz pm me wen u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's really nice, just the Loverboy, we know!
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I cant thank you enough for all the support... nd pract

ically i cant blive u all liked ma os...

i hope dis part is bettr dan frst one... and i wud really appreciate if u tell me hw to improve nd all...



PART 2


sh-Gud n8 swayam..nd thanks .he just smiled. sw-anythin fr u sharn.. sharon jst turnd to d othr side to hide her smile nd d blush creepin

up her cheeks.she heard d window close .

She stayd in d same positn for sometime and tried to wipe off d stupid smile of her face. Bt his words were echoyin in her ears. Nt nly dis bt evrythn he had tld her so far. Sh-y am i actin like a luv struck teen. OMG.. Am i in luv wid him.she thot abt al her moments wid him. Ofcorse ye pyar nehi toh kya.. (stil closd eyes)She pickd up d teddy nd hugd it .den as if talkin to it. Sh-tumhe pata he i love swayam... I jst luv him. Kyun nehi karenga ? Woh hein itna cute aur adorable bilkul tumhari tarah.. Nahi nahi tumse zyada cute he.. Meri intense loverboy meri majnu is d cutest in d world. So cutee ki i wish to pull his cheeks,mess up his

hair, kiss dose cheeks nd to hug him for etrnity (she ws pulin teddys

cheeks, patin its head nd kissin it) nd huged it tightly.meanwile sum1 outside d windw ws hearin dis.

He jst wantd to catch aglimpse of his angel bfore goin. Nd he ws shockd hapy emotinal al togethr. He wantd to shout in joy nd dance. Sharn raiprakash luvd him nd wantd to hug him ?.. Kiss him?.. God! My head is turnin.. Ab se ders no frndship nd al. Siren b prepaird to meet ur lovrboy.i wil shwr u wid my luv so much dat tum ye sab mujhse kahengi.

he wiped of d enormous smile of his face nd knockd at window..

sh lukd at window nd ws horified he heard it?

Sh- u dint go?

sw-i went al d way out of d gate bt saw d light in ur room. So i came back nw. Hearhn dis she relaxd .Nw he came close to her.

Sw-abhi tak kyon

nehi soyi. Sh-woh..han bas sone wali di.. Ja rahi di.. Woh..

swayam placd his finger on her lips nd pickd her up nd placed her on her bed nd coverd her wid d quilt. Der ws LLHH sesion troughout . Swayam ws finding his angel very adorable.. Weras sharn had lost d ability to

think. He undrstood it. So he wisperd gudn8 princess nd went out . Here sharon ws blushin furiously nd ws

:Confusd of his behaviour. She thot evry1 describes love as beautiful

nd al no one said it ws dis confusin. Nd she slept. =0ANext mornin...

sharn ws hapy,nervous nd late. Bt she manage to b ready by d time d doorbel rang. She expectd swayam but she saw a big bunch of orchids

nd swayam hidin bnhind it. Gud mornin angel he said nd gave it to her. Sh-(if he becmes sweetr dan dis i wil get cavities )

sw-toh chale ? Sh-ah yes.

durin d way nd durin d tests he manage to keep sharn from tension.finaly aftr d tests

doc-sharn am impresd by d test results .ur fine nw. Ur asthma ws a minor one it ws agravaitd due to

ur strain. Bt nw its fine.yes u r cured.

sw-can she dance?

Doc-yes

she can do nythn she want.

he got a cal nd excusd himself. Swayam l

ukd at sharn nd saw dat she ws stil in a state f shock. he made her

stand and shook her. Sudnly he hugd him nd was mutterin am fine ovr nd ovr again. Swayam ws shockd bt hugd her back.nd sharon kissd him.

Swayam ws shockd . Poor sharn was d most shockd By her own actions. She turned nd ran to d door.but swayam caught her

nd puled her to him. She bumped in to his chest.

Sw-tumhari wishes abhi baki he. Dnt u want to touch ma hair, pul my cheeks. Hw can i leave ur wishes unfulfild. Aftr al ur wish is my command.

sayin dis he

placd her hands on his cheeks.

sharn stared at him.

Sw-han sharn i had heard it all.

sharn just hid herself in his arms. Swayam ws luvin d shy side of his siren.

sh-luv u swayam.

swayam ws so hapy .

Sw-luv u too nd kissd her hair.

people may think asthma ws an interuption in her story she too thot like dat at frst. Bt nw she knew it alowd dem to see a new side of each othr nd seald der love further.

Nw she knew wat d matter ws she wil always find her way back to him

guys criticisms nd feedbacks are most welcome

Edited by aneed3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow... its awesome dear 😊

sharon realized it ... now she is female majnu--- & less laila 😆

& swayam heard that... chup chup ke 😲

lol... he is very chalu 😉

nyce... wish they also give confession next week 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww it was really a cute and adorable update
Lol swayam heard everything😆.Loved the way sharon hugged n kissed swayam in excitement
Loved it

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