SwaRon VMs// The New, Likable Ones//PAGE3 - Page 4

Originally posted by: blithe

Hey, my guess is correct! And Yes! this song is from Sharon's point of view. 😃 Yes! Yes! I know, it was pretty much easy to guess this small point from the promo. 😛 😆 It was pretty obvious, from where I see it. But sure, you guessed right. 😛

Okay now, back to the VM. Yeah. 😳

Theme : Well, I already guessed that this one is from Sharon's prespective and that was not a surprise for me but Yes! the Aasthama point of view? Now, this is really GOOD. The way, it covered Sharon's feelings for Swayam, it indirectly told me that she is living a solitary life by not sharing her feelings with him but still, she is never going share those feelings to him and will always keep loving him. Now, that is EXCELLENT! Good work there! 👍🏼 Thank you very much. I was suggested to add dialogues so one thing led to another and I found Swayum's dialogue really far-reaching. Maheshwari was a m a z i n g in that scene, wasn't he? As for Sharon's love, I will be honest and say that I don't find this Sharon very inspiring. I depicted whatever I made out of her earlier situation, like during the asthma track. She ceases to reach me now. 😳

The song started with Swayam questions and ended with Sharon's answers. Rather, I would say, it ended with only ONE answer, to all those questions which were questioned by Swayam. This is what I can say. And I really LOVED that. 😳 The timing of Sharon's words "I need you " was just PERFECT and then, followed by those lyrics is really SUPERB! Well, that's a good way to interpret it, man. The ending was like it was simply because I call that almost-kiss position 'sleaze with a little meaning' but I am obsessed with it nonetheless. And well, I had to match the song's lyrics.

Actually, for me, the first 30 min of this VM gives us the whole picture. Thumps UP! 👏 Well, thank you! Although I could be taking a break from D3 videos and making some character studies now. Speaking of... I could still make Swayum and Sharon from 2011-12's character study. 😳

Song selection: This is the PERFECT song for this concept. I really really loved it. The scenes, the dialogues were synchronising perfectly with the lyrics and the music. Now, this is really an AWESOME one! 😳 I happen to LOVE this song. It's my cell phone's ringtone and it's a song I have been humming all day lately. It's the love anthem for cynics and women who consider themselves bitches, here and there. 😆

Editing : As usual, the editing is just PERFECT! Thank you, although it's far from perfect, you know it and I know it. 😳

Colouring : Well, I personally love soft colouring but here, I would like to go with the concept. So, I think, the colouring could have been little better for this type of concept. Specially, when the ending is not a defined one. Nonetheless, I liked it. 😊 I was just too tired by the time I was to adjust the overlay, man. So I let it be a 100%, knowing it'd be too cloudy. That was a sorry, sorry error. 😳 Well, never mind now. 😃

Overall, its AMAZING. Would like to see more from you. :) Yeah, me too. Thank you! 🤗

-Sahasra