Dream and reality : swaron os - Page 2

Originally posted by: additive_monaya

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awesome os 👏

so touchy 😭

why did u have to show her dead?😡

thanx for pm

thank u.. so much i am glad you liked it...
aww.. you are sad that sharon was dead... ok.. in next os sharon wont be dead pakka...
but i am not sure about swayam...😉 😆

Originally posted by: spongy

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yay!!!! me second.. 👏👏👏

love the os

lovely written

nice story

nice idea...

great job

thank you for the pm 😊😊😊

congrats for being second today...
thank u so much i am so glad you liked the os...

Originally posted by: sanstina

Beautifully penned 😊

Well described emotions

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thank you so much

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey Aditi...🤗

A tight hug to u girl...that was just SO BEAUTIFUL...

I am a sucker for tragedies...i love the love of souls...

I love the love after life...it makes the love..endless...unconditional...divine..

From her pain...her sacrifices...her reasons...those last moments of love..moments of life...

His pain..his emptiness..his incomplete life...u showed their love...so beautifully...

Lover Gautam Rai prakash playing his angel...her last letter made me spell bound...

AMAZING PIECE OF WORK DEAR👏👏👏

Keep writing...thank for d pm..

Luv
Deep

hey deep..
a tightest hug from my side too...🤗... for posting such a beautiful comment...
and a high five too... i dont know i too love tragedies... although in books only... 😆..
in series and movies.. i am sucker for happy ending... 😃
thank u so much... for analysing each and every emotion carefully.. luv you for that...
and i dont think except sharon's father who could be sharon's communicator... and hence angel...
lots of luv...
aditi

Originally posted by: tanharockks

hey aditi
it was a wonderful os
very emotional

thank you so much...😊

Originally posted by: Lawrentian_214

I have always been a strong person throughout my life and never cried in front of everyone, but your OS has touched my heart to the core.Sharon Rai Prakash, a rich brat, had did so much for her friends and specially the "love" of her life.An awestruckly splendid job done by you! You won't believe but I have joined india-forums 2 years back and this is my first ever post on any OS, FF or SS. So three cheers for you who made me write something or I should say appreciate your marvellous job.👏

first of all i am sorry for making you cry... but then again i am very happy atleast you replied... and i am very thankful to you for commenting... it just makes us to write more and more... hope i could write some other piece of work for which you can comment... and yes finally welcome to the forum

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

It was such a beautifull os
I don't like the fact that sharon is dead but still I loved this os
Hope we get a happy wala os from u soon

thank u so much...
haha you didn't like sharon is dead... i am so sorry...
the thing is when i start writing i pledge to write a happy ending and as i proceed i always tend to give an emotional or loose ending... so all i can say that this was also meant to be a happy os.. but it turned out to be tragic... but still i tried to give it a smiling ending...😃

Originally posted by: pooja123456

cute

thank u... well i think you are the only one who found it cute...😃

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

superb and fabulous os... loved it touch my heart os...

thank you so much..😊

Originally posted by: lovely222

Wow just beautiful no words to describe this os I mean its just awesome it cud not hv got the better ending then this

thank god atleast someone liked the ending except deep... so thank you so much dear😃