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Posted: 12 years ago
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taarey ss:love triangle

chapter 1

morning--taani's house
a beautiful girl is sleeping peacefully on her bed...her innocent face reflects the purity of her heart...seeing her face no one can say that this is d same girl who cries a lot at nights but everyday gets up wid new hopes n strengths...she was just smiling in her sleep but suddenly sun rays starts disturbing her...she gets up frm her sleep n starts smiling remembering her sweet dream...she just lukd at sun n smiles...n thn starts her talk wid her krishna ji.(ya thats ur taani)...
TAANI:gud mrng krishna ji...thanks a lot for another day of my life...plz give me enough strength to face evrything ...

thn she gets ready n moves down her room...goes in her kitchen...makes coffee n sits in her balcony having newspaper in her hand ..
LONDON TIMES -- headlines
tanusha shekhawat -the beauty wid brains won the best bussinesswomen of the year award...

seeing this her smile fades n some old memories starts striking her mind

TAANI:no ways ...main aur bussiness...no ways...main chahe poore din ghar pe baithke aapka wait kar loongi but aapka family bussiness kabhi join nahi karoongi.

a lone tear falls frm her eyes...but soon she wipes it n throws the newspaper aside n starts drinking her coffee

(ya guys she is in london now...n now she is one of the most suffessful bussinesswomen..)


here on the same time a guy sleeping on his bed...his alarm clock strikes at 6...he wakes up n goes to bathroom...take bath n his hot muscular body is now attracting evrything towards him...birds starts chirping ...wind starts blewing through his window...he gets to his window n says

GUY :GOOD MORNING my angel...i dnt knw where n who u r ...but i m sure god have written a perfect love story for me n hez just waiting for the perfect time whn i'll meet my life's perfect girl...my dream girl...

KAKA:arjun baba aapko sahab naashte ke liye neeche bula rahe h. ( sry guys thats not our rey )

ARJUN:aap jaiye kaka...dad ko bol dijiye main 5 mins mein aata hu.

he gets ready n leaves...

Character sketch :

ARJUN :hot,smart,handsome,heartthrob,all girls dies to be with him but he is still waiting for his dream girl,the successfull bussinessman n vry caring n sweet...( imagine rithvik dhanjani at arjun's place ) also lives in london...

scene shifts to mumbai

a guy sitting in rehersal hall...his back wid wall n crying badly ( ya dats our rey )

REY : why taani ? why did u left me?? i knw it was my mistake but i never wanted this ...i always wanted to be with u...plz taani vapas aa jao...phir chahe mujhse baat mat karna...mujhpe jitna gussa karna ho kar lena...tum jo kahogi main vo hi karonga but plz taani just once...bas ek baar vapas aa jao...plz taani...tumhe gaye hue 2 saal ho gaye h taani...ek baar mujhe call hi kar do ki tum thik ho ya nahi.😭😭...plz taani ke krishna ji uska khayal rakhna...i knw maine hi aapse kaha tha ki aap taani ki chinta karna chod do ab main hu uske liye par aapne mujhse vo haq bhi cheen liya...plz krishna ji meri taani mujhe vapis kar do...😭

outside RH-
SHARON : taani ko gaye hue 2 saal ho gaye h par aaj bhi rey sirf usse hi pyaar karta h..
SWAYAM: haan sharon...hum sab taani se bahut pyaar karte h par kahi na kahi hum hi is sabka reason hai...hum to phir bhi apni apni life mein move on kar chuke h par rey..uske liye to jaise time vahi 2 saal pehle hi ruk gaya h...

chapter 1 ends ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

yeah guys ...aaj taani ko gaye hue 2 saal ho gaye h ...abhi vo london mein ek suffessfull bussinesswmn h n rey aaj bhi uska intezaar karta h...swaron r now in a relationship...they all r still together...famous dance group D3...


precap :arjun will find her dream girl
biggest twist in nt chap..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its interesting do continue it soon n pm me... n ya y double posting in wch u will continue? 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome amazing story dear ... I can feel Rey's pain Plz continue it soon sweety :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please continue its an amazing start 😳 please pm me when u update

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