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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

REs for hot updateee😆 Done

6 month kk intzaar khatm 😉

Awosm update 👏👏

Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago

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kateyes

@kateyes

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

beautiful nd hotone❤️it

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Beautiful OS :) A perfect match for the valentines :)

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Lovely OS pooja ...

loved the way u weaved the story of SWARON as a couple married and staying alone for 6 months due to career interest ...that made the ground for craving for each other...lovely idea and execution of the concept...loved the romantic sequence...beautifully and elegantly written...perfect for Valentines day ..keep them coming dear...

Luv
Deep

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awesome OS...loved it ❤️

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Pooja-J

@Pooja-J

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv
Firstly, behno aur unke bhaiyon safdhan yeh OS 18+ se neeche ke liye nahi hai!! As literally i had goosebumps aur jan Tanya ko goosebumps aa sakhten hain yaani 18+ hai!! 🤣

I think main bohat ziada bak - bak nahi karungi abhi!! Warna i know main sexy emotions main bheh jaungi!! 😳

God, poo tu kaha thi ab tak aur mujhe mili kyun nahi?? Answer me kitni aisa OS pehle likh chuki hai tu!! 😆
Abbey aise baat kar rahi hai , as if I am pro at this. Tune mujhe challenge kiya tha, yaad hai na🥱

God, i needed to open my AC in this season and i swear i did switched on it!! 😳

Firstly, Swaron are married and i love married swaron!! 🤗

I was going crazy while waiting for the post to be posted finally like silly nut case and i am sure now that the wait was worth it all!! Ahem Ahem! ☺️

Chalo you fanned multiple times I think🤣

If i say you have very much of potential to writer murder 4 tu kesa lagega tujhe?? 😆 HUH? 🤔
Mera ultimate insult😡

Malika Sherawat ke paseenai chouth jatai agr woh yeh OS parh leti!! 🤣
I wanna cry after hearing that😭

End amazed me like how they made love again!! Naught Swaron!! ☺️

Bus baba bus agar aur socha iss OS ke barai main tu needh nahi ayegi!! 😉

Awesome OS!! 🤗

Thanks for writing for me 😃and you WON the challenge without a doubt!! 😉
Challenge kiya isliye tonh likha, but aage nahi likhungi, murder4 se comparision🤢

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Pooja-J

@Pooja-J

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

@ Sadiya , @1D_D3-Crazy , @ sweet_sanju , @kritzzz_ArSha , @bhanumathitanha @MaaNeeTLuV , @sanstina , @lovely222 , @swaron_pk @ lassipriya , @ nature2 , @arjuhiswaron007 , @kateyes , @Nehal92 @sweetsimi123 , @pooja123456 , @freya123

Thank you guys for commenting

@tejukor Itna hot tha, I dint know that, mera aim sweet romance pe zyada tha😆 Haan I will write more, but hot update sochna padega🥱

@ Suni1986 🤗Yes you correctly guessed, it was pure love, I am you happy that you pointed out😳

@deep_Tanha Thanks for the wonderful comment Deepika di, I am so glad you commented on my OS and liked it too😃

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

No matter main tere OS ko mruder for se compare karun ya kisi aur se, it was pure like a deep sea!!! And their love was beautiful!!! 😳

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Pooja-J

@Pooja-J

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv
No matter main tere OS ko mruder for se compare karun ya kisi aur se, it was pure like a deep sea!!! And their love was beautiful!!! 😳

Phew, ab accha laga mujhe, because our SwaRon's love is pure and intense and like you said like deep ocean😳