Sharon OS: I love you , Daddy.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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--ok.so basically this OS is a dairy entry of Sharon who is a 6 year old girl writing about her father . Since she is 6 , the language is awfully simple. Hope you like it. --

It's been a year , daddy. I really really miss you . Mommy says you're safe now . In a beautiful place called heaven. We had you're favourite dinner tonight . I ate it all up . Even though i don't like beans and carrots. Can't you see me? I have started first grade this year. I carry a picture of us in my tom and jerry lunch box . You are the greatest daddy...I try not to cry.Mommy says it is ok. But I know you don't like it when i cry. I try daddy , but it hurts.

Is it true you are not coming home anymore? Then , maybe someday i am going to visit you in heaven okay? It's time for me to go to bed now . I sleep with my light on.Just in case you come home.And kiss me goodnight. I love you so much . Goodnight , Daddy.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ya it was amazing and very touchy os I loved da last part of u r os
Is it true you are not coming home anymore? Then , maybe someday i am going to visit you in heaven okay? It's time for me to go to bed now . I sleep with my light on.Just in case you come home.And kiss me goodnight. I love you so much . Goodnight , Daddy. it's very heart wrenching one
Please write more on Swaron also
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhanumathitanha

Ya it was amazing and very touchy os I loved da last part of u r os
Is it true you are not coming home anymore? Then , maybe someday i am going to visit you in heaven okay? It's time for me to go to bed now . I sleep with my light on.Just in case you come home.And kiss me goodnight. I love you so much . Goodnight , Daddy. it's very heart wrenching one
Please write more on Swaron also

thank you. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Made an impact in just 8 lines. Masterful.
And yes, heart wrenching. Truly Sharon.

You have to write more! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: D3fication

Made an impact in just 8 lines. Masterful.

And yes, heart wrenching. Truly Sharon.

You have to write more! :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was amazing and a heart touching story.
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

It was amazing and a heart touching story.
Loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazingly written :)
Plz write more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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God, i read it lots of times and i cried a little after that!! That was the beauty of this one! 👏

Please you really should write on SwaRon, but of course not sad and not this short!! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ya its nice nd simple bt also very cute os
u nicely depicts 6 year old sharon emotions for her dad
love d end

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