Few Hours on Cruise ' A Swaron OS'

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i dedicate this new os to my nautankians, megha dido and tanya

tanya : lady dinosour i hope isey padhke tere fever kam hojaye

Few Hours on Cruise


The St.Louisians are on the cruise ship. It is a 7 days exclusive holiday plan to be with your other half. Swayam and Sharon are single with hidden emotions for each other. The cruise take off with everyone excited of being together.

Two days went by like that with both admiring each other secretly. Sharon is standing by the reeling of the ship admiring the navy blue color sea adorned with the moon light. Swayam come and stood beside her placing his hand close to her hands

" isnt the beauty of sea enchanting ?? " he asked

"its magical with spell bound beauty"she replied keeping her gaze fixed on the sea

"but its not as beautiful as your eyes,your eyes are more magical" he said flirting

"are you trying to flirt" she asked looking at him

"Naa! I am just praising your beautiful greenish blue orbs" he said looking in her orbs

"Ohh! I see thankyou for your praise Mr Shekhawat" she said chuckling

" so Miss raiprakash all alone on the cruise?? " he question

"yeah because my friends are busy with their better halfs" she answered looking at the sea

"ahem ahem same is the case with me " he said flashing big smile

They both stood there for sometime admiring the glittery water, with moon showering its love on the vast sea. The love of moon is so deep that it has taken the vast sea in his embrace, flaunting his love to the souls around, shamelessly looking at them. The soft romantic music painted the background of the two souls standing besides each other.

" will you like to have a dance with me " he asked forwarding his hand

" yes I will as I am tempted to dance because of the song" she replied placing hand in his hand

they both walked to the dance floor. Swayam hold her waist firmly and she wrapped her palms around his neck. The both swayed along with limelight on them, looking as a couple of God

" may I know your first name Miss Raiprakash" he asked this question delibrately

"Sharon Raiprakash" she replied in her diva avatar

" sharon what a beautiful name" he commented

" what about you Mr Shekhawat" she played the same card

"Swayam shekhawat " he said

"Swayam , I don't like to comment on it" she said laughing a bit

"so Sharon" he stressed on her name" what are your likes and dislikes" he asked generally

" my likes, well I cant tell you that and dislikes,umm..i dislike fake people" she replied

They dance and talked for some time.they were swaying and swaying with increasing closness each passing minute.

" as we don't have much company , lets have dinner together" he said or rather asked her

" I think yes, lets have it together" she agreed

They had dinner together and chatted on various topics , enjoying each others presence. Suddenly swayam held her hand , came to her and whisper

" as we both are single , will you be my girlfriend???" he asked smirking

" what if I say no " she said with cunning smile

" I think you wont, I can clearly see that you are trying hard to play " he said smiling

' uhh , you are smart swayam , well yeah I'll be your girlfriend" she said sort of blushing and wink at him

" actually I need to confess something" he said with intense gaze

" speakup lad " she replied

He bend to her ears and softly whisper in her ears again " I Love You"

He looked at her with high expectation anticipating a yes. She rose to his height and whispered in his ear

" well I didn't told you about my like, umm ,its you Mr shekhawat, I Love You too" she said blushing

"ahh this evident red colour on my sharon's cheek " he said with utter happiness

" make you feel out of this world,urghh what a cheesy line" she said chuckling

He took her in his embrace , making the moon jealous as his love is more divine, outrageous and beautiful that the moon and sea could not compete with them


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regards

ARUBA

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sweetcherry95 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arubs 🤗
Firstly Arubs Thnkx for dedicating this OS to nautankians aswell….dat includes me ryt…hehe :P now coming to the OS…your one of the amazing writer I have ever met…. your work just rocks
WOW dats wat I call a Perfect romantic OS.. I have no words to describe how good it was..just brilliant….It was beautifully written down….it was indeed very romantic…..Kya baath hai aajkal humari Arubs toh badi romantic mood hai jii 😳 Loved the part wer dey introduced themselves as strangers...and also loved wer u compared them with moon and sea
He took her in his embrace , making the moon jealous as his love is more divine, outrageous and beautiful that the moon and sea could not compete with them
This were the best lines…very romantic…loved this OS to the core….Simply fab
Luv u ❤️


Edited by sweetcherry95 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW This was a super sweet OS! Loved it! 👍🏼
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Hey aru...🤗
Firstly, thank u sooo much for dedicating such a lovely os to all the nautankians....❤️

So Miss.Raiprakash and Mr. Shekhwat are strangers yet had unknown feelings hidden for each other...grand starting...:)
Swayam flirting with her was really cute and their dance...hayye...is always heavenly...
And sharon's like is swayam...ofcourse it will be as she always admired him and moreover who will be her better half other than him...:) and i feel swayam purposely asked her this question...:p
Their confession...was really out of this world...and unlike sharon, i like cheesy stuffs...😉
and my favorite was the one where u described how jealous the moon was of swayam's love...
ofcourse its much more pure and ethical than any other love...and even the nature knew that his love had no bounds...😊

What a beautiful thought with a great ending...afterall anything related to swaron is magical and ur words added more charm to it...😊

Edited by sweetcherry95 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful OS swthrt...

Loved the cheesy oneliners...

The whole idea of being strangers...

Loved the last line ..where u compared them with moon and sea..lovely work😊

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amagin os dear.

Bt wht abt ur upd8
i ws waiting 😭 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hayeee this is called a BEAUTIFUL os:-):-) Loved it:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing short OS Aruba! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was really a cute and adorable os
Loved the part where they introduced themselves as a stranger , spend time n enjoyed each other company
I love u part was cute
"He took her in his embrace ,
making the moon jealous as his
love is more divine, outrageous
and beautiful that the moon and
sea could not compete with them"
My fav. lines
Loved it
Ps. aajkal madam bahut romantic ho rahi hai kya baat hai..:p
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS...wow !!! Luv it...

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