remembering you- a taarey poem

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi guys this is a new year gift to all of u from me, i know its not a big gift but i am poet so i wanted to gift this poem to u all. its taani's POV. and its on the current MUs.


REMEMBERING YOU


I don't know I am feeling happy or sad

I don't know its good or bad


you are near me but away

you told me you will come one day


I can feel you are remembering me

and the old memories together shared we


I am happy you didn't forgot me

but also sad that you are missing me


I am staring at the moon in the sky

asking myself you are angry but why


you didn't let me know my fault

and you shouted on me sprinkling the salt


I was confused why did the hatred was there

before it there was a great bond we shared


how did we lose it all

it was our fault or destiny I call


I don't know where to go and ask

here in this world all are wearing a mask


you were here I had no problem

because you were there to save me from them


where are you i need you badly

I am calling you very sadly


I know you are feeling the same

so how on you I can put the blame


just remain the same and keep remembering

forever for you I will keep waiting


ok guys this was my poem how was it. i will feel glad if u people will comment and like because this will encourage me to write more on taarey.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow man it fab
beautiful it touch my hrt
u made it beautiful
i luv it ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Are aur ek poem.aur vo bhi itni pyaari...i loved it...aisa lagta hai ki.kisi mahan poet ki.poem padh rahe hai...it ws really good...pehle frndship waali.aur aab ye...good wrk
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow u write such lovely poems I love it and it so suit the current Taarey track. Plz write more poems
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it dear!! nice.. Thanx fr pm.. n keep writing on Taarey!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! amazing dr!!!!!!!! awsum one adi❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veereyi

Are aur ek poem.aur vo bhi itni pyaari...i loved it...aisa lagta hai ki.kisi mahan poet ki.poem padh rahe hai...it ws really good...pehle frndship waali.aur aab ye...good wrk

hey thanks dear waise maine taarey par aur ek poem likhi thi- i love u par pms nahi bheje the if u want then check it or ask me i will send the pm. waise again thanks i just love to write poems and your sweet comments are encouraging me to write me.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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waao thanks it was amazing i loved it i must say u r very good poet keep it up and thanks once again andya happy new year
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveukunwaramar

waao thanks it was amazing i loved it i must say u r very good poet keep it up and thanks once again andya happy new year

thanks for such a lovely comment n ya happy new year to u too😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww!!!!!!! Loved it dear...nice poem...

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