|The Confession|-Kriyaansh Os

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Friends!This is one of my os written in Kriyaansh Aniversary Os contest:)

"Aap mere..."
She couldnt say it further she was going through mixed emotions such as tense,Fear,Excitement,Happiness etc.
She knew him very well and she also knew that he wont let her go without until she tells what he wanted to listen.
She thought that she should do it ,its TIME! now even God cant stop him nor God can save her from his question.
She closed her eyes tight ,Breath hard and chanted few "Universe ji" in mind ,Took a deep breath and opened her eyes
ready to face him.As soon as she opened she said "Aap mere..." But was stopped by his intense gaze on her.He was looking straight
at her ,this made her shiver a bit.By his face expressions its clear that he was so eager to know the truth.He signalled her to continue
with his eyes.Finally she gathered courage and said it "Aap mere ache dosth se kuch zyadha ho".
This is it !she said it finally!His face lit up like a 1000 watts bulb or more than that.He had a wide smile plastered on his face ,actually we call it
as a grin.She can find the relief ,Happiness on his face.They shared an intense eye lock.
He gave his Million Dollar smile..Now she wanted to hide herself somewer,her cheeks became coz of blushing.
He moved forward to hug her but she ran away blushy blushy and stood outside the fire escape leaning to the wall.He here was jumping like a maniac in the fir escape
and thanking universe ji and giving him a lot of flying kisses.After coming to his sense he came out and found her standing leaning to the wall.He came towards her
without breaking his gaze for a second.She was blushing and shivering under his gaze ,she was about to escape when he caught her and crushed her between him and the wall.
Now she couldnt escape from him and after saying that he would surely make sure that she wont escape.He inched forward to kiss her,He wanted to make it Official.
While he was about to kiss her something stuck his mind.
He doesnt wanted to make his confession so simple just by a kiss that too in the college ?NAH i dont think so!He wanted to make it special for her,she deserves it.
He jerked back and folded his arms across his chest and was staring at her..Here she was having butterflies in her stomach,she expected a kiss from him as his part of
confession so she had closed her eyes to feel his love..but wait she couldnt feel anything..Soon she opened her eyes and found him staring at her..This made her face flush.
She ran away from him smiling all the way long..he followed her..Soon he was distracted by going into a dance battle with opposite team .After winning the battle he tried
to find her everywhere in the college but there was no sign of her.He tried calling her but she wasnt picking the phone..He tried asking her friends but nobody have any
clue about her.He thought that she would have reached her home to follow some instructions of his sasuma the great Rani laxmi bhai.
As expected when kria was at the college she got a call from her mom and was ordered to come home as soon as possible.As it was emergency she had to rush
and didnt have time to inform Rey neither her friends..She thought of informing rey but he was too busy giving deathly glares to the opposite team.So she rushed without informing.
After reaching she found that her mom called her as she was leaving to dehradhun for somework,so she wanted kria to be present at the house to take care of it.Kria was busy giving
send off to her mom,she was so involved that she dint check her mobile.At night she thought of resting and had checked her mobile and found 50 missed calls from rey.
She was shocked seeing that.soon she called him back and he had lifted in the ring itself.Now he has turned into baatuctter.
"Kria kaha ho?Arey you okay?kaise ho?why are you not picking up my calls?anything wrong?if i did anything wrong then am extremely sorry .Please dont ignore me.
Kria are you alrite?any problem?"He was going on asking...
She just could utter "Rey...Meri...Mer...Meri...Baath toh suno".But he was not in a mood listening to her.

She shouted "REY!".

"Haan!haan baatcuter bolo"

"Rey meri baath tho suno pehle..actually jab mei college mei thi thab muje mom ka call aya aur.." she explains him everything what had happend.When he heard her saying
that her mom is not at home.Soon millions of ideas stuck his mind.He however cutted the call saying he was busy and was thinking of a romantic plan to surprise her with his
grand confession.Soon a brilliant idea stuck his mind.He took his miblie called someone... Here she was going restless he suddenly cutted the call and was not lifting her call nor replying to her messages.

He had a perfect plan set in his mind...He rushed towards her house without delaying anymore.he thought of climbing the pipe which leads to her window but he again thought it would be better taking the stairs.
He knocked on the door twice ,as soon as she opened she was shocked seeing him standing with a grin on his face.

"AAp????" she shouted which could be hear by all the people in the apartment.he closed her mouth tight with his hand and pushed her in locking the door behind.

"Ssshhh!!dhere se" he said still his hand on her mouth..

She was signalling him to remove his hand but he couldnt understand her sign language he was continuously asking her whats the problem.finally he removed his hand when she bit it

"aah!!" he was about to shout in pain when she placed her finger on his lips saying "ssshhh"..He was lost in her ...they shared an eye lock..They were brought back by ringing of rey's cell phone

He picked the call

"Swayam?" he answered ,it was more likely a question

She instantly looked upto him in shock as if swayam was standing at the door.

"swayam can i call you later?" not wanting to waste his time with his baatcutter..it was precious for him.every single second

He cutted the call and saw her

"woh swayam kya keh raha tha?aur aap yaha kya kar rahe ho?" she asking raising her eyebrows

"Swayam kyun call kiya woh muje pata nahin..I came here to discuss about the matter which just happend few hours ago..actually mei yeh kehne aya tha ki..."by saying every word he inched forward snd she backwards
at last sentence..he was soo close to her that his breath was hitting her lips,she was shivering .

"actually mei kehne nahin ,puchne aya tha ki do u hav terece?" he smirked

"Kya?" she asked confused..

"haan do u have terece for ur buiilding?"

"Haan.par kyun?" she asked confused.

"kuch nahin tumhare terece pe daily ek ladki aathi hai meine suna ki woh khubsurath hai.aur meine yeh bhi suna ki woh raath ke 11 baje athi hai.so its 11 now so i thought of meeting her"
he said trying very hard to control his laughter..

"Uss ladki se hi milna hai tho directly terece par jaoo na mere pass kyun aye ho?" she shouted..She was red with jealousy

"Not a bad idea" he said and left ,leaving a shocked kria behind.

He was waiting on the terece,actually he was hiding behind the pillar and waiting for arrival...

first she thought of ignoring but she couldnt belive how he could do this to her..she went to the terece to check out on the so calle B***h for whom he went up that at this time.

When she went she dint find anyone..she was casually looking here and there when there were firworks in the sky when she saw she was hell shocked,her heart beat stopped for a minute

"I LOVE YOU BAATCUTTER" it was written in the sky with fireworks..

As soon as she saw that he grinned and signlled swayam a thumbs up who had a hand in this plan.swayam smiled back and left away..

She was just staring at the sky she dint have words to say..he hugged her from behind and whispered "I Love u baatcutter"

Soon there was rain!Perfect timing!

She was about to run but he pulled her back and she came crashing straight into his chest.a few mms of gap was present between them

"Will you marry me?" he said holding a ring and waiting for her approval..

She was stunned

"Rey but marrige...?" she stammered not understanding what to say..

"Ssshhh!" he placed his finger on her lips..

"I just want to make you mine forever ..i just couldnt stop myself from asking this..We wont get married rite now but i just wanted to make it this way..So will you stay with me forever?" he said looking deep into her
eyes.

"Yes" was her only reply.HE smiled wide and placed the ring onto her finger and kissed her hand..she blushed..

"Can i finish my pending work which i left it in the middle at college?" he said like an innocent kid..

First she was confused but she understood what he was talking about.He was talking about the kiss which he was supposed to give outside the fire exit.

she blushed giving him green signal...He slowly moved forwards and took her lips into his and both shared a passionte kiss.

He expressed his love through the kiss and she responded equally...

"I LOVE YOU TOO" she said in between the kiss to which he smiled and deepend the kiss..:)

The End


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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os
hayyeee kriyansh <3
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc one
hayee kriyansh...luv dem forever

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fabulous & lovely os luv it...thanx for d pm
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luvd the os..amazing
thnx 4 the pm
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Amazing Os
Kriyansh forever <3
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely . . . . . Their confession
I can relive this scene again n again . . . . 🤗
lol . . . . He did'nt kissed 😆
poor kriya . . . . . Free main jealous karva diya isse toh 🤪
sho shweet . . . . . . Universal celebration 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome os...
sweet one...
thankx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome...it was fabulous...
loved it...
thnx for pm...
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Awsome. . . . . . .
Lovd it. . . . . . . .
Fabulos. . . . . . . . . .
Kriyaansh. . . .
Haiyeee. . . . .
Just love them. . .

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