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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

This was more than brilliant. A wonderful emotional roller coaster ride which touched the heart in right places. Totally enjoyed reading it. ANd the last line was simply beautiful. Loved it.

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

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after reading this os only one word coes in my mind..."brilliant"...

loved this os to the core dear...

it was so so beautiful...

thank you so much for making us read such a beautiful thing..

the poem was awesome...

loved it...

Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

That was a really beautiful OS and the song fit in perfectly !! I can totally understand why Swayam lied to Sharon but I'm happy that Sharon trusted him the whole time and when she found out the truth, she was still by his side, giving him another reason to fight for their life together !!

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rija

@gunurlove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Very nice Os...song was really gud..

thanks for the pm

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swaron_tanha4

@swaron_tanha4

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Wow...such a brilliant peace of work...lalita di...
Nd d sng is jst perfct..

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/71064109

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__anonymous__

@__anonymous__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

First , Sorry for being late to put down my feedback here in this Profoundly Penned write up . . . hope u consider my misdeed in a lighter way . . . .

Well, the concept of this OS itself is SO immersed and sensuously Beautiful . . . I'm drenched in the gravity of the ambiance . . the purity of the feelings and the inmost suffering of the characters . . . . Lalita , u sufficed the bits of the OS with grandeur . . . .👏

The song coordination with the flowing story is always a hiccup stuff . . . but , u performed it Amazingly . . . and I LOVED it . . .👏

And If I forget about the poem portion, if would turn into a grim sin . . . Lalita, I'm sure u already aware of the poetry prowess of urself . . . let me recall u again , U are an OUTSTANDING poet . . . . INDEED . . .👍🏼

Overall, it was a emotional asperity sans flow of the ETERNAL love birds SwaRon . . . I'm thoroughly touched by this piece as it awakens me with the gust of immaculateness of SwaRon Love . . . . Lalita , thanks a LOT sweet heart for coming up with such a brilliant story . . . .Stunning Job, Keep it up . . . . .👏

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

WOW!!

I'm completely speechless...It was just mind blowing!!👏

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tejal kor

@tejukor

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Hey dear nice attempt I must say.u almost had me in tears really very nice.
N I never listen this song before but after ur os m definitely gonna listen this song...
N plz pm me next time if possible...