TAAREY-shining like a star part 2 updtd at page 2

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rimpa

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey guys i wrote this ago a few weeks back...hope you will like it...

so this ss continues from the scene when shivam misbehaves with taani in the dance camp...

ok no more bakbak..so here it is......

Taani was walking along the path.shivam's words were playing in her mind...

taani:(maine shivam ko samajh ne me bahat bari galti kardi-ab main kya karoon.agar kisiko batane gayi to rey ki reputation ko khatra hain-hey krishna ji aap hi bataiye main kya karoon...)

tabhipiche se rey akar use daraneki koshish karta hai.taani turns back-saw rey and ran from there.Rey notices that she was crying so he ran behind her...

rey:taani...taani ruko kya hua?

but taani didn't stop...

rey:taani ruko tumhe meri kasm hain ruk jaon.

and suddenly taani just freezes.rey go near her,and cupped her faceand gently sweep away her tears...

rey:{very softly}kya hua taani?

taani:kuch nahin hua...main to bas dar gayi thi.{looking at the ground}

rey made her to look in his eyes.

rey:mujhe pata hain tum jhoot bol rahi hon...kya bat hain pls sach batao taani..main tumhe aise dukhi nahin dekh sakta..kyatum mujhe itna vi trust nahin karti ki sach bata sako...

sooo guys how was it>???????????? boring ,,okok,,pls share your views...

precap:taarey confession...

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rimpa

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Posted: 12 years ago

is my ss sooo bad that no 💔one wants to comment😭

pls kuch comment to karo ...

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Natasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

It's was good plz continue soon. I like how gentle Rey was being with Taani and no your SS is beautiful rimpa

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Zobia

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Posted: 12 years ago

Rimpa it was aswum... Plzzz update ... Cnt waiit 4 cofession xx

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desigirl_VD

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Posted: 12 years ago

unres

its awesome rimpa pls continue soon!

Edited by desigirl_taarey - 12 years ago

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PreciousHeart

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Posted: 12 years ago

It is not at all boring rimpa!! It is awesome n really excited to read the nest do continue!!

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christy

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice one,.plsss cont soon,.,.,and pm pls

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raddhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was good actually vry good i just luv it keep doing dis nxt prt plzzz

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rimpa

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Posted: 12 years ago

PART----2

taani:nahi rey mai appe bahat trust karti hoon par mai ye baat-------

{and she broke down crying}

rey:{just hugs her}

taani: {while sobbing say everything to rey} par please aap ye baat kisiko mat bataiye ga..shivam ko pata nahi chalna chahie ki maine aapko sab kuch bata dia hain...main nahin chahti ki aap meri bajay se kisivi musibat me fans jaye..wo rumors se fail jaye aur aapko aur takleef ho.

rey:{in a serious tone} rumors failte hain to failne do akhir jo sach hai o sabko pata hona chahiye😉...

taani: {breaks the hug} ye aap kya keh rehe hain? sach hain kya sach hain?

{ suddenly realize what rey said & blushes}

rey: sach ye hain ki mr. reyansh singhania aapni cutely weird ms. taani shikawat se bahat pyar karta hain...{in fake anger}

aise agar us shirritating tumhara b.f

nahin tha to tumne use tumhe kiss kyun karne diya?

taani:ab mujhe thori na pata tha ki iha koi jalke vaji ban raha hain...😉

rey:acha???????

taani: haa nahi toh.

rey:don't you want to say something?

taani: nahi toh...

rey: sach me...{and pulls her towards himself} but i want to hear those 3 magical word.