SwaRon OS - Pitch Black Silence - Page 4

I must say this is a brilliant start. Please continue.

Originally posted by: TanHa911

Thank you Ananya ... well its the details that ensure the story has the right feel no ? :)

But like you said ... its the FEEL and even the most detailed writers dont get the feel right at times ...

So if you FELT my story ... I guess I have succeeded to some extent :)

Thank you for taking out time to read.. I hope you keep reading and like the next bit as well.

And well ... Like SHalini pointed out , the story isn't really about Rinni / SImmi and at this point Swayam was not in a state of mind to discern or care which one out of the two Nilesh managed to get the better of. And in any case, if one of the two starts screaming , the other will most likely follow suit without knowing what the crisis is really about and thats Simmi / RInni for u 😆

As for the lone figure on the shore ... well if you FELT the story by now you should have an idea who she might be ... haina ? :)

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Rafi,sometimes some people convey the deepest of all meanings in just a line or two rather than stretching it for long while some people manage every minute detail but miss out the main content.😆 i have come across many like this,you just couldn't guess what they all are upto.[it is not meant to offend anyone.] i hope you could understand what i am trying to say. People are so busy doing their researches regarding the background that they forget about the foreground. after reading such an update,i would like to quote what my mother says for the most of the time,"Saari raat Ramayan sunate rahe aur subah udh kar puchte ho Ram kaun hai..?😆" i felt as such reading after some works on IF [obviously not you].

and i do know whom you are talking about on the shore,i have a clear mind set regarding that,what i asked was,"P.S:i have this doubt in my mind, if the form appearing on the shore is familiar to him or stranger."

i hope you get me right now. :)

Originally posted by: Tanuka_TanHa

when are u updating rafi di ??