SwaRon OS-Baby,I screwed up the vows

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swaronehad3

@swaronehad3

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

nice 1 dear 👏

thanx 4 d pm 😊

w8n eagerly 4 d nxt part 😃

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

This is such a sweet and funny OS !! I love all the notes that Swayam wrote to Sharon but my fav is the one Sharon wrote to him !! DEAR GOD OF HAIR ?? LOL and ALWAYS MISS CORRECT is so like Sharon !!

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swaronilicious

@swaronilicious

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Pls pm me when you update I LUVD the concept nd sharon addressing swayam as god of hair Omg that was HILARIOUS

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Now this is seriously a different and interesting piece of work. Loved the narration style and the humour in it. Quite a novel approach towards both of them. And what to say about the notes. Whether it was of Swayam or of Sharon each note was awesome with its own charm and uniqueness. Looking forward to the next update :)

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Smiley1279

@Smiley1279

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

loved sharon;s note...can totally imagine Sharon writing it

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

When i saw your pm I was literally jumping but yaar FF be update karo plzzz.

Amazing!!! Sravani I dont have to tell that na becoz you can write only amazing and mindblowing updates. Hahaha swaron and love notes, so cool, swayam addressing shaon in different ways especially Angry bird was funny. The comfort level is just splendidly written.

Yaar you are an absolutely fantastic writer and plz plz jaldi FF update karna, I know you are buzy but cant control yaar.

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

RES

And i ll take time😳

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Sravani you are back with an awesome OS and even though the concept of marriage may be same the way you have handled is different and cool. The comfort Sharon and Swayam share with each other was nicely shown. The notes super cool and the various apt names you choose were amusing..like angry bird, mortal angel and the God of hairs was the best. The ending with Sharon's note and the subtle changes in her was nicely put.

A pleasure read and i loved it.

P.S - i loved the idea of Church wedding for SwaRon 😳

Edited by Sudha-SK - 13 years ago

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

ya it was awesome to read .i loved all da notes .i loved it

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

It was purely so amazingg! 👏
Haha Angry Bird!! it cracked me up! 😆
Swayam has a humour for real here! 😆
You did an amazing job sravani!
i am waiting for the next update!

p.s.--loved the title of the OS! 😳

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