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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys...again I have wrote an OS on our dear TaaRey...well its kind of different...umm...you all better read it yourselves...


Happy Anniversary


The sun was about to set...the twilight sky...the noise of the waves hitting the shore...it was all perfect...intertwining his fingers with hers he walked...the wet sand stuck on his feet...the cold breeze hit his body through his white cotton shirt...he looked down at their feet moving in unison...their feet leaving stamps...he looked back at the beautiful art they were making...

His lips curved seeing her smiling face...she was wearing the dress he had gifted her on their first anniversary...her silky, golden brown hair were blowing in the wind...her eyes sparkling...her face glowing...she looked angelic...

It was 14th september...it had been seven years since they got married...but his love towards her was still the same...this was the place he had asked her to be his forever...this was the place she had agreed to be his forever...

His smile widened as he remembered how he had twirled her in the air as soon as she had said yes...her giggling still sound in his brain...he looked at her sideways...and looking at her he felt she was thinking of the same thing...

He was lost into her eyes...he wanted to touch her face...but something stopped him...gently he pressed her palm...and all she did was smile...her brown eyes urged him to look at them forever...he was lost...

A cold breeze made him shiver...he looked at her...but she was unmoved...not a single line on her face changed...she stood there still simply smiling...looking into his eyes...a silent moment and his smile began to fade...


------------beep -----------


Her pain was going to be relieved forever...her body would no more be punctured with needles...she would no more have to take all the lasers...she would no more have to battle with life...because her life was going to be no more...

As he cupped her face...he could see her trying hard to not close her eyes...her breathing getting uneven...her lips trembling...her hands shaking...
He knew this wasn't fair...God wasn't being fair...nothing was fair...he begged to the almighty to give her his life...to take away her pain and give it to him...to make her smile again...to make her breath again...

But even as he thought so...he could feel she was being pulled away...He looked at her face...it was pale...her eyes dry...her skin had lost all its lustre...her lips were trembling...
Suddenly she began to panic...her breathing was getting heavier...her hands shaking...she was putting all her will to stop her eyelids from shutting...but somehow she was being beaten...

He held her close to his chest...protecting her from everyone...not letting anyone go towards her...he prayed for time to stop...he prayed for her to stay...he was willing to give up everything...even himself...just to let her live...but God didn't seem to bargain...

As he gently hugged her...he could feel her heartbeat...he wished he could feel this rhythm forever...but the universe was against it...her breathing began to get calmer...she was getting calmer...he begged for things to change...he begged to let her stay...

But as time passed...he was losing her...her breathing became heavy...he could hear her sighs...her body was trembling...a few seconds...and his world was shaken...

A silent tear escaped his eyes as he felt her body stiffen...he didn't have the courage to look at her...because he knew she would never look back at him...he knew she was at peace...finally she was at peace...after battling cancer for over 10 months...her body was relieved...

But Taani was lost forever...



The sun had set...he felt the sea had gone silent, the wind had stopped blowing...he could hear nothing...nothing but a *beep* in his head...his eyes were closed...for a few seconds he just stood there unmoved...

The wind made a loud humming noise in his ears...startled he opened his eyes...
Suddenly it wasn't silent anymore...there were people around...laughing, talking, running...the water wasn't calm...the birds kept chirping...the vendors kept shouting...the calmness was just in his heart and nowhere else...

He looked besides him only to not find her there...there were no fingers intertwining his...there was no one looking at him smiling...he looked back at their footprints...and this time there were just his...

"Taani" unknowingly he whispered...as a lone tear escaped his eyes...his love...his wife...she had left him forever...
It was their seventh wedding anniversary and for the past six years...he was celebrating it just with her memories...

He pulled out the note she had left for him...
" I Love You Prince Charming...please keep living...please keep smiling...please try to move on"

He sighed as he read it for the One Lac Six Thousand Four Hundred and Twenty Fifth time...

Yes he was living...yes he was breathing...yes he had learnt to smile again...but there was one thing he knew he would never be able to do and that was...move on...

He knew he could never love again...because to fall in love...he needed his soul...and his soul was no more with him...it was trapped there in the room where she took her last breaths...and no matter how hard he tried...it wasn't willing to come back again...

Defeated he stood there...these were hundreds of people around...but he felt lonely...he looked up into the sky...and gently closed his eyes...

Her fingers intertwined his again...with eyes still closed he smiled...taking a deep breath he looked at her...looked into her deep brown eyes...she was the same...the same for the past six years...not a even a line had changed...his Taani was there with him...

Engrossed in her eyes he whispered...

" I Love You Taani...and I always will...Happy Anniversary "

'...


I am sorry guys...please don't hate me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res
--edited--
really very sorry for being so late😛...i am a bhulakkarh😆...res karke unres karna bhool gayi thi🤣🤣
finally read your OS😳
it was just awesome...your writing style is mind blowing👏👏
it was a heart touching story❤️
loved it alot
Edited by blossom1234 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg omg rupali superb os...👏
yaar its rly mindblowing... bar bar padne ko maan kar raha hain...
sooo touching...
luvd it... nicely wrritn yaar!!!
biiig hug to u...
Edited by raj-guria-kriti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rupali Hats off to you ... you're just unbeatable in terms of expressing emotions via words..👏 *Standing Ovation*

Esp wanna mention some points :---

1. The part in black before beep was so beautifully written..👏 the way you introduced Rey and Taani was just fantabulous
.. 👍🏼

2. The next part in blue literally made me cry..🥺 Its too emotional.. 🥺

3. And the last part was even more emotional for me.. where Rey was all alone in the crowd .. Missing his love Taani..


Really a Heart Touching OS.. 👏
Edited by RitikaLoveAmar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG wow it was so emotional!!!!!! awesome os👏 love your writings..they are so good


he knew he would never be able to do and that was...move on...❤️❤️aww rey cant live without his taani❤️
Edited by blue_cherub - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG U JUST KILLED ME🤢

.IT WAS TRULY EMOTIONAL 😳

.SOMETHING HARD HIT ON MY HEART☢️.

BUT U FAILED TO MAKE ME CRY😃😆

WELL I SHOULD APPRECIATE UR WRITING SKILL

GOOD WORK DEAR🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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no words to describe , u r an outstanding writer
awesome luved it
Edited by lovharshu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sreelu094

OMG U JUST KILLED ME🤢


.IT WAS TRULY EMOTIONAL 😳

.SOMETHING HARD HIT ON MY HEART☢️.

BUT U FAILED TO MAKE ME CRY😃😆

WELL I SHOULD APPRECIATE UR WRITING SKILL

GOOD WORK DEAR🤗


thanks dear🤗
I am happy you didn't cry 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it amazing

chk i unres on page 4 even🤣
Edited by Ana_Taarey - 13 years ago

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