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@Black_Stone

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Posted: 13 years ago

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rdx : app bilkul chinta mat kijiye main uska khyal rkhooga ... main use kabhi dookhi nahi honey dooga ... aj sey wo meri jimedari hey she is my sis now ... app ko chinta karney ki jroorat nahi hey

flashback ends

nicole : ravi ... ravi ...

rdx : huh ...

nicole : kya hua tum phir sey whi sab jaad kar rhey ho

rdx : nahi bas asey hi . aaj b lagta hey jesey kal ki baat ho lekin ab us baat ko teen saal ho gye or waqt to ret ki trha nikal rha hey sab bdal chuka hey or wo b or main khush ho usey dekh kar main apna wada poora kar pya jo maney us din kiya tha

nicole : tum sahi bol rhey ho waqt to kitni jaldi beet jata hey lekin wo hamari zindagi ban chuki hey us k bina to zindagi ab adhoori lagti hey or wo hamari angel ban k ayi hey usi ki wja sey hamey itni bari khushi mil rhi hey ...

rdx : per wo hey kha usey pta hey na hmey wapis jana hey or upar sey is halat main ... usse apna khyal rakhna chahiye ... agar kuj ho gya mujey bohat fikar hoti hey

nicole : ravi tum b na wo bachi nahi hey or vesey b karan b uske saath hey wo uska dyaan rakhega

rdx : karan us k saath hey to itni jada tension ho rhi hey kyu ki jab b wo dono ek saath hotey hey to bachey ban jatey hey ... main unhey call karta hoo vesey b flight ka time ho rha hey

nicole : tum bacho jesey behave kar rhey hoo phir b meri baat to mano gey nahi kar lo call

other side a girl fighting with a boy

girl : ankhey hey ya button.. dikhta nahi car thok di meri

boy : hello meri kya galti hey ... tumhari galti thi

girl : how dare u ek to car tor di upar sey bakwaas kar rhey nd she throw a stone on that boys car

boy : hey pagal ho kya ... mirror tor diya

girl : thank to god ki mirror tora tera sir nahi ...

at same time a boy laughing while seeing this ...suddenly his phone beep

boy2 : hello

voice : where r u karan

karan : m kuj nahi wo koi rasta bhool gya hey to kriya us ki help kar rhi hey

rdx : really mujey achey sey pta hey ki rasta kon bhool gya hey tum jantey ho na j sab uskey liye thik nahi hey wo b is halat main

karan : opps i know main bhool gya sorry

rdx : mujey pta tha usey abhi ley k aoo hame jana hey aaj wapis tumhey pata hey na tum kabhi b uska khyal nahi rakhtey

karan : tumsey jada khyaal rakhta hoo hum log a rhey hey ...

rdx : jaldi ...

karan : ok

karan go near girl ... kriya we have to go nd take it easy ha nd remember aaj hamey wapis jana hey

kriya : o crape i forgot sorry lets go

kriya to rendom boy tumhey to baad main dekh loogi

rdx : bola tha tum apna khyal rkho again gari thok di kuj ho jata to ha ... tumhey pta hey na mujey tumhari kitni tension rehti hey

kriya : i know lekin kuj hua to nahi na bhai

rdx : ha lekin agar kuj ho jata to

kriya : nicoel see na bhai

nicole : ravi bas kro kyu use dant rhey ho ha kuj hua to nahi na karan tha na uskey saath to usey kuj honey deta wo kya tum b na go kriya change kar loo hame airport k liye nikalna hey ... flight ka time ho rha hey ...

kariya " going nd thank u bhai ko chup karwaney k liye love u ...

rdx : kriya u...

in india

st louis. college

all in rh

sw : guys i have gud news

sharon : really swayam kya bohat dino baad gud news sunney mil rhi hey jaldi btao na kya hey wo news

swayam: ha wahi bta rha hoo new j hey guys

vish : jaldi bolo na

swayam : hmm hamarey new principal a rhey hey or wo koi or nahi rdx sir hey

rey : really lekin rdx sir kesey i mean j hua kesey

sw : jaha tak mujey pta chla hey hamarey jo pehley princi they unho ne janey sey pehley ... rdx sir ka name suggest kiya nd at last rdx sir ko hi selct kiya

neha : kya news hey swayam ...neha today bohat happy ...

sw : guys ek or news b hey ...

simmi : one more

sw : ha hamare new culutural head hey nicol mam nd karan sir

nil : nicole mam ... matlab once again sab thik ho rha hey

tanni : matlab ki ab sab thik ho jayega

sw ; ha ummed to jhi hey ab

rey : ha ab us vp ki nahi sunni paregi

bharat : ha kab sey us k atyachaar seh rhey they ab chutkara mil jayega

rinni : sab wapis a rhey hey to kriya b a jayegi ...

rey : rinni please chup

rinni : maney kya kiya

vish : kaash kriya b a jati

tanni : leave it vesey j sab a kab rhey hey bhai

sw : kal ...

all gather in group hug...

at mumbai airport

rdx : no again ab j dono kha gye kitni baar bola hey in dono ko samjtey kyu nahi hey

nicole : ravi not again tum b na kitni baar bolu ki wo dono bachey nahi hey nd karan uskey saath hey uska khyal rakhney k liye

rdx : karan uskey saath hey tabhi to tension ho rhi hey ... kriya to bachi hey lekin karan usey b jada bacha hey or wo dono jab b saath hotey hey koi na koi garbar kartey hey ...

nicole : ravi tumhara kuj nahi ho sakta ...atey hi hogey ...

rdx : atey hongey nahi a gye ... nd see kya kar rhey hey dono agar kriya ko kuj ho gya to ... karan ki to main

nicoleol look in that direction where rdx pointing ... when nikol saw them she start laughing ... kriya sitting in trolley (lugage wali...)...nd karan pulling it nd kriya singing nd two r busy in there masti ... with out caring about others ... nd peoples around them giggling nd clicking their pics ...

nicole : see kitney cute lag rhey hey ...

rdx : karan pagal hey kya ha bacho jesey behave karta hey har waqt ...

karna : ha to abhi m only 28 teri tarha budha nahi ho gya ...

rdx : main budha nahi hoo m only ... 29 ok

karan: acha to behave to senior citizen ki rha kar rha hey ...

rdx : maney kya kiya ...

nicole : shut up guys . tum logo ka ho gya ho to chaley or nahi hua to ghar j k continue karenge ok... abhi chalna chahiye kriya thak gyi hey ...

karan : ha jaroor i know my angel is tired now nd rdx kriya ko chalna nahi tha is liye main use trolley pey bithaya ... vesey nicole tujey or koi nahi mila tha iskey siva ...

rdx : karna teri toh ...and continued their cute nok-jhoks nd fun

finally they reached their house

Nicole,rdx and karan took kriya in her room and made her comfortable

next morning in st louis ...

louisans are waiting for rdx, nicole nd karan...

rey : abhi tak aye kyun nahi hey ...

sw : atey hi hongey ...

nil : haye kab ayegi nicol mam ...

simmi : nilesh sharam kro ... ab wo married hey ...

nil : to maney kya bola ...

vish : dude i think wo a gye ...

simmi : mujey sab pta hey ...

sh : guys please chup batho ...

and then a car arrive in college campus ...

nicole ,. rdx step out from the car

all louisans gather around them ...

sw : welcome back sir ...

rey : we missd u alot sir

rdx nd nicole : hello guys

nil : hello n i c o l e ... after little pause mam

simmi fed up now she intruptd karan sir kaha hey wo nahi aye

now girls start asking ques about karan ...

nicole : girls girls girls take it easy ... he is coming after some time kuj important work tha issliye thora late aa raha hey ...

ok then rdx nd nicole walk into the college

after 30 mins karan also arrives

rdx : kaha tha tu karan???

nicole : sab to itney ques poosh rhey they yaha

karan : u know na angel ko kuj music cd's chahiye thi nd ice cream to bas wahi lene gaya tha to time lag gaya...

nicole : thik hey vesey usey akele chorney ka mood nahi tha

rdx : ha but usey rest ki jaroorat hey or yaha college main bohat kuj settle karna hey hamey abhi

nicole : right

karan : or sab sey pehle humei louisans se baat karni hogi unsey pataa karna hoga ki college main chal kya rha hey ...

rdx : u r right isis liye sab ko RH main bulaya hey

karan : thats great toh chalte hai ...

nicole : chalo nd rdx main soch rahi thi ki humei ab avp ki koi jaroorat nahi hai toh

rdx: ha main bhi wohi soch raha tha lekin pehle louisans se mil le

now trio leave for RH

in RH rdx : hello guys long time right ...

all : hello sir

karan : hello boys nd girls ...

girls : hello karan sir!!!!!

we missd u a lottt

karan : I also missd u guys so kaisi chal rahi hey aap logo ki life ...

sw :app logo k janey k baad bohat kuj badal chuka hey sir ... ab woh pehli si baat nahi rhi

nicole : i know iss liye to hum log wapis aye hey ...

sh : and mam app nahi janti ki hum kitney khush hey ao logo ko wapis dekhkar nd they start talking about everyting suddenly karan's phone ring now everyone becomes silent

karan : hello angel kya baat hai ????kch chahiye kya??? Are u ok??

voice :...

karan : abhi lekin kesey ...????

voice :...

karan : but suno toh ...

phone cut

rdx nicole jaana padega warna angel bhadak jayegi

rdx : but hua kya ..????

karan : kuch nahi bas wohi ...

nicole : main samaj gyi tum jao

karan leaves fr there

sh : mam karan sir ki gf hey kya???

nicole : nahi toh aisi baat nahi hey ...

vish : to who aise chale kyu gaye ...???

rdx : guys aisa kuch nahi hey okk'. tum logo k according ab mujey unke against vo k action to lena hi padega ...

ok then just wait nd watch ...

nd at the end of the day rdx fire both vp nd avp

now its almost one month now eveything fine everyone happy

one day louisans nd nicole in RH hall

nd karan rdx also there they all r doing masti when some one enters

and all louisans were hell shockd to see that person

they don't know how to respond

means they all r standing like statues...

a girl 8 months pregnant enter in RH

karan : angel tum jha tumhey mana kiya tha na maine agar kuj ho jata to???

nicole : ha kriya agar kuj ho jata to ...??

kriya : huh main kya karti main bore ho gyi ghar pey bathey bathey from last one month to mera dil kiya to main a gyi j kya baat hui tum log mujpey chila rhey ho... nd she starts crying

karan : angel mera matlab wo nahi tha main to bas u know na we love u toh tension ho jaati hai na

but kriya being kriya continues crying nd dat too loudly now.

nicole : please kriya chup ho jao na

rdx : please shorry kan pakar k

but no use she is just crying very badely

louisans were just lookin at them kyun ki unhey kuj samaj nahi aa rha

now karan , rdx nd nicole r very tensed

karan : please angel bolo kya karen hum log?? But tum ro mat ...

but kriya is crying nd crying

nicole take karan nd rdx in a corner and says

Nicole: i know woh ab chup nahi hogi mood swing a rahe hey pregnancy main aksar esa hota hey baas usse khud nahi pata hoga ki wo kyu ro rhi hey . ab to yeh roz hoga wo kabhi b kuj b kargi ...to hame shanti sey kaam lena hoga

karan : lekin hum log karenge kya ???

nicoel : dance hi ek tareeka hai ab usse chup karwane ka

karan: i think u r right ...

karan ask lou. to dance nd they agree

nd louisans start dancing .nd karan continuously looking at kriya with tensed face . but after 5 min she start smiling ... but suddenly she speak ki usse rey nd swayam ka dance dekhna hai so karan again ask them ... at last rey nd swayam dance ... now kriya is really very happy after 15 min she drifts off to sleep .

karan : thank god so gyi ... Nicole I think hamey ghar chalna chahiye kriya ko le k she needs rest ...

rdx nd nicole agree ... so karan picks up kriya nd they leave frm there leaving louisans confuse behind

now girls in locker room nd boys in boys locker room ...

in girls locker room ...

vish : dude main sapna dekh rahi hun kya some body pinch me ...

neha : nahi jahi sach hai'

sh : mujey yakeen nahi ho raha hai kriya pregnant hai.. but usney shaadi kar li ... kis sey???

simmi : of course karan sir se ...I mean lagta to yahi hey jesey wo care kar rhey they uski

rimmi : ha mujey b jahi lagta hey

taani : ha or wo kitney khush the..

vish (st)- isey to lgey gey hi huh...

in boys locker room

sw : mujey yakeen nahi ho rha ki kriya wapis a chuki hey ...

nil : ha or usne shaadi bhi kar li ...

bharat : wo b karan sir se

amar : pal kyun???

vicky : ha or ab to wo unke ... mujey yakeen nahi ho rha ...sachi

but rey is silent nd he leaves frm there

vicky : main samaj sakta hoo rey ki halat wo aaj b kriya ko kahi na kahi pyaar karta hai ...

rey walking on a silent road

rey's pvo

main to samaj rha tha ki main kriya ko bhool chuka ho lekin aaj use itne saalon baad dekhne k baad dil main phir sey wahi halchal mere cherey pey khud hi smile aa gyi use dekh kar lekin wo ab kisi or ki hey ... or usney shaadi b kar li kya usney sach main kabhi muj sey pyaar nahi kiya ... rey kyu khud sey jooth bol rha hey usney kabhi tuj sey pyaar nahi kiya agar kiya hota to wo kisi or k saath kyu hoti or ab to sabke saamne hey or kya proof chahiye tujhe bhool ja ab usey ... ab wo kisi or ki hey ...

next day louisans to ready with rapid fire round for karan sir nd karan knew this wuld hppn

as soon as he entered the class all gathered around him and started asking him lots of questions.

sw : sir apney shaddi kar li ???????

sh : wo b kriya sey ?????

viky : or hamey btaya bhi nahi

neha : or ab to app dad baney waley ho.

bharat : apne shaadi ki kab ???????

vish : or kriya sey kesey ??????????

karan : guys aisa kuj nahi hey tum log meri baat to suno ...

rey : sir sab kuj to saamne hai ... phir b app bol rhey ho ki esa kuj nahi hey ... vese congrats sir ...

after this rey leave from there

rey in RH, he start dancing to relieve himself frm the pain nd stress he's going through

sau dard hain,sau rahatein

sab mila dilnashin

ek tuhi nahieee

rey start dancing nd does a split nd look in mirror nd find kriya so he run towards her but she was not there,he continues dancing

rukhi rukhi si yeh hawa

aur sukhe patte ki tarah

shehar ki,sadko pe main

lawaris, udta hua

sau raste

par teri rah nahi.eee

then again he felt bad nd tears making their way from his cheek ... rey again start dancing nd this time he saw kriya laughing at him ...

rey again run towards her nd hit his hand very hard on then nearby pillar nd it starts bleeding ...

sau dard hain,sau rahatein

sab mila dilnashin

ek tuhi nahieee

behta hain paani, behne de

waqt ko yuhi, rehne de

dariya ne karwat li hai toh

saahilon ko sehne de

sau hasratein

par tera ghum nahi.eee

sau dard hain,sau rahatein

sab mila dilnashin

ek tuhi nahieee

rey jump in air nd fell on ground nd he continues to hurt himself ... then rey imagines kriya dancing with him nd this makes rey smile but after some time he sees kriya vanishing in the dark nd laughing at him ... nd then rey fell on floor nd starts crying very bitterly (after kriyansh break- up rey in BB nd the way he was crying exactly same here)

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continued on pg.2 zyada hi lamba ho gaya issliye pg 2 par post kiya hai 😳

Edited by cookie_arsha - 13 years ago

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 13 years ago

mujey dar lag rha hey tum log marogey mujey

jahi scoh rhey ho ki phir a gyi

but chill is bar to is os k bhaney btaney ayi ho ki guys now its my last work ...

kyu ki m leaving from IF for 7 months kan hey na

i know

means break hi samaj lo

but guys m going kyu ki my board exam

nd i need to focus on my studies

but ja tab tak k liye m discon. my all works

iska j matlab nahi ki main wapis nahi augi

i wiil b back in april

with band

after all m devil

from devil rockerzzz...

but gonna miss u all nd this made me cry

i know its to long

but as i said i need to focus

so this is sweet gift for u

hope u all like

or mujey nahi lagta ki merey jatey waqt b jootey paregey

but agar marna chaho to as u wish

but love u guys

ng i hope ki jab main wapis au

hame hamarea kriyaansh mil chuka ho

kyu ki main to tv b nahi dekhti meand jab tak exam nahi ho jatey no tv , no pc , no lappy nd no cell means total link toot jayega world sey

but i want ki jab wapi hau to gud news iley

loveu all

wanna sey

megical

u guys roke

kya baat kya baat kyaa baat

take care all

nd in 7 month main jis ka b bday ho usey meri taraf sey happr b;day in advance

sarey festival k liye shub kamnaye

april main mera baday bhoolna mat wana bohat pito gi samjey

kyu ki main apney b'dat pey wapis augi to

i want big surprise sab sey

nahi to maar daloo gi samje u all

nd my devils

once again love u

nd wish me luck

i neet this

devil rockerzzz

Edited by aromakriyaansh - 13 years ago

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Krati Choudhary

@kittu_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

Haha..Aru...Pagluu !

we'll Miss You Too :)

jaldi jaldi vapas aana !

n all the very best fr ur Exams..Mujhe bhi bol :P

n birthday surprise..hmm..sochenge ..JK :P
obvious h re pagli :)

tc..

love you loads..

Hugs :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey... All d vry best fr ur xams..
N do pm me whn u update ur os:)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hey aru...

will miss u yaar...

all the best for ur exams...

mujhe toh all the best bola nhi...

mere bhi 12th k boards exam hai

waise main oct k baad activate nhi karungi...

hey tu mera b'day miss kardegi...:(

mera b'day 31 jan ko hai...

aru fir se bol rhi hoon...sirf oct oct ol aaja...fir hum dono saath main inactivate honge...aur fir april main activate honge...

plz yaar maanja...

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@Black_Stone

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Posted: 13 years ago

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karan sir was passing from corridor, he found rey crying nd his hand is bleeding very badely so karan enter in RH ...

other hand louisans r also searching fr rey , they find rey nd karan in RH they all about to enter in RH, when swayam stops them

now louisans r watching them from outside

karan sir goes near him...he keeps his hand on rey's shoulder but as soon as rey sees it's karan he shrugs his hand off and karan asks him

karan: kya hua rey...???

rey (shouts):aapko kya...aap toh kush hona...life toh maine apni khoyi hai maine apni kriya ko khoya hai aur kria usne bhi mujhe use kiya aur mujhe hurt kiya ,jisse maine pyaar kiya usne mere saath aisa kiya aur aapse shaadi kar li n aap toh humei milwana chahte the na toh kaise appne...haan kriya usi ki wajah se ki hogi na aapne yeh shaadi ek aur tissue paper mil gaya use.

that was it karan fr karan sir, he shouts to peak and vomits all the truth out leaving rey much guilty and unable to even face himself...

karan : tum jaante hi kya ho ha tum log kabhi usey samaj hi nahi paye wo hamesha doosro k liye jeeti hey usney sirf tum logo k liye sab kuj chod diya apni dreams, dosti, pyaar sab kuj par tum log kabhi b usey samaj nahi paye tum log to usse deserve hi nahi karte ho and rey tum toh hamesha boltey the na ki u love her haa bt u noe wat tum to uske pyaar k layak bhi nahi ho ...

mujey to afsoos hota hey ki wo tum logo ko apna dost manti hey or tumsey rey itna pyaar karti hey agar tum us se itna hi pyaar kartey they to ek baar sirf ek baar janey ki koshish kyu nahi ki ke woh kaha hey kis haal main hey jinda b hey ja nahi ... tum to apni life main agey bar gye per wo wahi ki wahi now louisans also enter in the RH

sw : app kehne kya chahytey ho sir

then karan narrate whole story to them now all r in tears

sw : but kriya nd woh bacha???

now rdx nd Nicole enter the RH

nicole : wo main btati hoo

now everyone watching nicole

nicole crying nd rdx consoling her

nicole : guys woh bacha mera or rdx ka hai

louisans : what.?????

nicole : ha woh 3 years back I met with an accident actually I was pregnant so mujhe check up k liye jaana tha bt rdx apne ek imp mein the nd I didn't wanted to disturb him, so main check-up k liye khud hi chali gayi thi, bt unfortunately while driving I lost my balance nd hit the car nd usme mera miscarriage ho gaya nd I lost my 5 months baby, uske baad doctor said ki main maa nahi ban sakti humne kitne doctors ko consult kiya but no use humne toh umeed hi chor di thi, tabhi hum dehradun gaye waha humei pata chala ki kriya ki mom ko cancer hey to hum unsey milney gye ... kriya ki mom ney hamey sab kuj bataya us waqt ravi or hum ney kriya ko apney sath rakhney ka faisla liya kyu ki samriti k paas bohat kam waqt tha ... or us din ravi ne kriya ko apni behan bana liya ... or kuj dino baad kriya ki mom ki death ho gyi hum log kriya ko wapis NY ley gye waha again hum log ek doctor ko miley or unhone humei surrogacy k process k bare mein suggest kiya humei kuj samaj nahi aa rhi thi us waqt ki hum kya Karen...bt kriya ne kaha k who surrogate mother banne k liye ready hai... wo kabhi apney barey main nahi scohti..

(for those who donno about surrogacy- surrogacy is a process in which a lady lends her womb or becomes pregnant in place of the lady who cannot concieve, its a medical process, where the sperm of the wanted male is transferred through medical process into the body of the surrogate mother )

nd then she break into tears ...

rdx take her in tight hug now rey feel very bad nd guilty rey hit his hand again very badely

karan stops him nd consoles him

after that at night louisans decide to visit kriya ...

door bell ring

*ting tong*

nicole opens the door ...

nicol : guys tum log yaha...

: sw : ha hum log kriya sey milna chahte hai

nicole : come in but tum logo ko wait karna hoga ...

rey : kyun mam???

nicole : wo kriya ko ice cream khani thi na issliye wo ravi or karan ke saath gayi hai

sh : but mam is halat main ghar pe kha leti ...

nicole : ha but usey abhi khani thi or wo b bahar jaakaror wasey b its mood swings ek baar jo bol diya so bol diya

vish : aap nahi gyi??

nicole : kyu ki usse wapis aakar mere haathon ka choclate cake khana tha to main kaise jati?

now they start talking but rey was constantly looking at door, u know he was waitn for his love kriya ...

finally at 12.30 door bell ring

nicole : i think aa gye

nicole opens the door

kriya was having an ice cream in her hand she was eating like a small kid with out caring about what the world will think

she was looking so cute, while karan nd rdx continued speaking to kriya "angel dhyaan sey" but kriya to mast hey ... she came nd sit near rey but she didnt know about this...

louisans were smiling looking at kriya

ice cream was melting nd it cover kriya's hand but she did'nt care about this, she was bust eating her ice-cream

nd rey without wasting time click kriya's pics after finshing her ice cream she notice louisans

this made her more happy kriya hug all one by one, now nly rey was left rey thinkin wo mujey hug nahi karegi ... but he shocked kriya hug him nd kiss him him on the cheek ... all were shocked by hers action especially rey at that tym Nicole enters with cake

nicole : here's ur cake angel

kriya : but maney kab bola mujhe cake chahiye???( like a child)

nicole : tumney hi to jatey waqt bola tha

nicole : tumne bola tha...

everybody together : mood swings!!!!!!

nd all laugh all are eating cake except rey, he takes his plate nd keep in fridge ...

at 3 am ...

kriya wake up nd go into kitchen finding some thing

rey : cake khana hey

kriya turn nd was about to fell when rey caught her

rey (shouts) : r u made pta hey na ur pregnant to dyaan nahi rakh sakti kya agar gir jati aur kuj ho jata to ...

kriya : m soory per mujey cake khana hey or ice cream b

rey : lekin thori der pehley hi to khai

kriya : lekin mujey waapas khani hey abhi .,...

kriya about to cry.

rey : ok ok wait nd lift kriya nd help her to sit on platform ...

rey gave her cake

rey : main khilau

kriya nodded yes like a child rey happily fed her

kriya then ate ice cream nd offers rey also some ...bt rey ate only one bite after finishing ice cream

kriya : mujey dance karna hey ...

rey : ur wish my command

rey help kriya to stand hey on his feet ...

rey : kriya tum bhari ho gyi ho

kriya open her mouth in O shape ... rey laugh on this ... then they dance slowly...

after dance they sit in kriya's room,they start talking when kriya criess in pain

rey : kriya kriya kya hua ...????

kriya : rey bahut pain ho raha...ahh hospital jana padega...aahh

rey : ha ha wait

rey shout for all everybody comes rushing to kriya's room they all take kriya to the hospital

now all in hospital

they about to take kriya in labour room

when rey stop them ...

rey : wait!!!!!!

All- WHATTT???

Rey gives a sheepish smile nd turn towards kriya

rey-kriya mujey kuj kehna hey

kriya was shouting in pain..

kriya- aaahh wat jaldi bolo aahhh

rey- kriya uumm,..

swayum(caught him by collars)- abbey rey jaldi bolnaaa..

rey- kriya i...i...i...

kriya was shouting she caught him by his collars nd was shouting

kriya- I wattt reyyy. Jaldi bolo...ahhh

All- REY!!!!!!!!!

rey : i love u will u marry me i know this is very stupid way but please

all r waiting for kriya's ans ...

doctor- please jaldi kijiyey

kriya(while crying in pain) : abhi b ans chahiye...ok yes yes yes

rey slips ring in her finger

all clapping for them nd doctor take kriya in the labour room

all are tensed especially rey, kriya shouting in pain nd he cnt bear it

after 30 min they hear baby crying nurse come out and says

nurse: congratulaions twins hue hai a baby girl and a baby boy

all congratulate rdx nd nicol

rey rushed in room saw kriya nd smiling at him, he came near kissd her forehead nd sat beside her and was looking at her

k : hmmm

rey : inki to life ho gyi poori hamarey barey main kya khayal hai

kriya : khyal to bohat hey jha sey nikalne do phir batati hoo

rey : m waiting love

and agn kissd her cheek

All- ahem ahem

rdx nd nicole : guys wait itni b kya jaldi hey pehley name to sun lo bacho k

all : kya??

rdx : girl ka name kriya and boy ka name reyaansh

all hooted for them

now its time for kriyansh

...the end ...

*phew finally posted*

now hit the like button nd give comments fr these extar long OS okies

aroma ne bahut mehnat ki hai

Edited by cookie_arsha - 13 years ago

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Beautiful_King

@Beautiful_King

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

res

unres

kamini aro jaa rhi hai na tu mujhe chod ke chali ja maine nhi karna comment...

ek do din ke liye nhi jaa rhi hai blki poore 7 mnths ke liye...

main nhi karti comment...

tujhe jana hai na toh ja mujhse baat bhi mat kariyo ab...

ab kya hai ro kyun rhi hai????????

comment chahiye?????

accha theek hai sochti hoon ruk...

kya hai bola na sochti hoon...sochne ka time toh de...

ummm...

aaa...

maine soch liya...guess guess...

kuch nhi hota tujhse main hi bata deti hoon...

huh...srry...

are woh maine tujhe itna bura bola iske liye...

haan haan tu padyi kar xamz are more important i'll be waiting for u yahan pe hi...

jaldi aana...

aur accha accha score leke top karke ayiyo warna...

accha chal ab hogaya me going bye...

are srry again update pe comment karna toh bhool hi gayi...

ausum update bahut cute...

senti

lovable...OS tha...

ab aur kya kahoon bahut accha tha...bas

aur kuch nhi aa raha hai dimaag main...

ab me sachme going bye...

tu jaldi aana...

n haan kiddo yaad rakhna mujhe ye inactive wala game nhi khelna agr dono time pe waapas nhi

aaye na toh yaad rakhna main aur mere saath mere ffs aur sab kuch gaya hai...

chalo ab bye bhi...bahut lamba ho gaya comment...

Edited by sachiarsha - 13 years ago

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Res
unres

amazing os...loved it..
Both the parts were awesomeee
kriya is so gr8...stil thinks abt evry1 else b4 her...
Awesome end...aww twins...how cute

Sorry 4 d short comment
exams hai
Thanx 4 d pm

Edited by --Kinjal-- - 12 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#10

well main aaj nahi unres kar sakti kya hai na abhi 16pms ke reply diye hain... aur ek... nahi hoga yaar mujhse... but anyways agar bhul jau toh yaad dila dena 😳

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