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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

awesome os rutu...so economics topper in trouble...want to copy...luvd it...swayum vicky prt ws entertainig...swayum and his philosophies...amezing wrk rutu...and the kiss litrally added more flavour to os...
do write more..!!

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Rutu lovely OS...

Swayam's class antics were really funny 😆 the vicky scene was hilarious.. 🤣 he was writing the wrong answer and swayam who was copying from him knew that it was wrong 🤣

awww... how swet.. he wanted to wish her the last 😳

Swayam loves a subject which i hate the most 😆

thnx 4 da pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

This was so cute Rutu! Swayam's EH antics were hilarious.

And Sharon's jealous of Amelia.😆

This was well written.

Thanks for the PM.

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kool kanz

@kool kanz

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

ur ff's cant be ignored rutu...awsum 1...sharon gettin angry n jeolous..i just love her wen she does dat...n poor swayam test ke liye pada nahi aur upar se birthday suprise bhi out😭😭😭plzzz update soon...thanks for d pm..😊😊😊

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Jum

@-Jum-RulzZ-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Res !!
Excited to read it!! Hold on... !

-UNRES-

Rutuuu 🤗
Hats OFF!!!!!
Now the concept was different, the story was different, the title was different! and OMG! everything seemed perfectly new to me, and i enjoyed every bit of it, ok! now seriously.. to tell the truth! I was stuck up studying this subject the whole night from yesterday till morning now!! after returning from college, And wanted to chill out over the AT and simply read some OS's or FF's.. when i popped in, and when i saw ur Pm, i went like "Yippeee rutu finally updated an OS!!!" now i was super super super super super Excited to read it! and when i came to know that they were all in the exam hall, and that too on the subject that i just Left! had suddenly popped in with SWARON!! den i was like HELL.. SWARON FOLLOWS ME!!!! and i was bored studying my subject, but now! after reading this.. and when i assumed the fact that the subject of the test is "ECONOMICS". i Started laughing hysterically, clutching my stomach and being unbearable to stop my laughter, That was because of the situation i was running through, It was the kinda the same, for me! haha.. i loved the part when sharon got jealous of swayam staring at Amelia! :P Lol lol lol.. ahem! somebody is furious!
and most of all..
I Loved the way you expressed each of their doings, swayam's part was way funny here! and sharon's hahaha.. stuck up in the jealous line! Oh darn!! hated the fact that swayam had to spill out the surprise, i still wanted to see sharon's expression in the ending, but it ended so fast :( ! awww! now dats super cute, Swayam going to wish her at 11:59!! ok! now till today i havent actually seen any romantic ways saying that i'll wish u at 11;59! most of them wud be the first one! but in this story.. everything is different and beautiful..
Now to frankly let out, i've read many Birthday os's they mostly depend on the surprises but in yours? i saw a WHOLE new "Birthday" story!!
i thought that it might be the same! but.. You changed my words gal.. !
you really did!
HATS OFF to u and ur works!!
👏
You deserve a ROUND OF APPLAUSE!
😳
im setting myself off to read all ur other works again!! as i tend to feel good after a One head stressed up night preparations!

Edited by -Jum-RulzZ- - 13 years ago

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tashu20

@tashu20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

awesome...loved it...!!!!😊

poor sharon, swayam didn't wish her on her b'day

do writemore...!!!

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pooja123456

@pooja123456

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

hey...do continue well written...
sharon getting jealous...
pls pm me if u update this!!!

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

edited my comment 😊

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64500037�

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Rutu that was an awsum piece of writing, I am still grinning at all the antics and the way he handled Sharon's queries about not wishing her yet...the quintessential Swayam philosophy of thinking differently was adeptly brought out...absolutely luvd the last bit and the humor with which their convo was carried out including her return gift...the romance, the comedy and the philosophy all made a mark...u r a gifted writer to say the least😊

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Hellaaa Rutu!!😉

great job girl👏 ,i really liked all the antics! liked the sentence- i wanted to be the last to wish you...oh!our philosophical swayam!!...thanks for the pm bud...

love tania;)

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