Arsha Week OS : I will make everything right

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Amy this was a wonderful os.

Lovedc it.

It was so cute.

U showed the Arsha factor so much.

Loved the way he had did so much to make her feel secure.

The way he made her cheer up the outings that he planned and made her smile back.

the mails were gud part to show ofv our feelings.

Loved the way he confessed the feelings to her and her reaction to it.

Wonderful Os.

wow Arsha week is going on in roll.

Thanks for the pm.

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Totaly outstanding work amy...
U projected their feeling fabulously...
Thanx 4 d pm

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Again a masterpiece! 👏
u'll kill me someday wid ur amazingly beautiful & fantabulous writings . . . . . 😛
the way shakti behaved wid amar seemed so rude . . . . I felt so bad 4 him 😭
still,,, he behaved so sweetly . . . . & take her taunts as jokes 🤗
& they open up finally . . . . Enjoying sight seeing,,, roaming around carefree,,, eating stuffs,,,, enjoying life . . . . 😃
making her feel free,, special,, happiness . . . . Enjoy life
I too want to do bungee jumping . . . . 😆
I too felt suspicious . . As in where he gets disappeared . . . . May be he's doing something really special for her . . . . . . . .
But he's quite mature . . . . Bahot door ki planning hai . . . Impressive 👍🏼
& those flashbacks- they were fab 🥳
that singing scene . . . . The emotions were priceless,,,,, u r the 1st who included dat in ur OS . . . . I appreciate dat . . . 👏
& that night . . . . U're seriously unpredictable yar . . . . . . . . I thought kunwar would have taken some move . . . . . But here the bold shakti initiated . . 😛
& when he did'nt react . . . . She assumed it otherwise... 😭
but kunwar made it allright . . . .
All's well . . When end's well 🥳
hey . . . . Thanks 4 a hearttouching piece of writing . . . . . . . Still I'm nt gonna spare u . . . 😆
jaldi se update ur ff,,,, pure 6 days ho gaye 😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭...
hope u understand me now 😛

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Oh I am just crazy about your writing dear.

I am already an addict of your FF and this ArSha OS of yours has just took my heart away. I felt so contended and happy after reading this.

The first part was awesome with Amar coming till NY to visit Shakti. I really enjoyed Shaks reaction where she felt both annoyed and confused after he came.

Then the fun they had while doing the sight seeing. N that bunjee jump.Super fun That should be an amazing feeling i guess.

N what to say about the last part where all emotions just burst out. Zats passionate kiss they had. Gosh got goosebumps while reading that. I liked this line a lot

' "Shaks , always believe in your feelings ..trust them '"'

That was really an amazing OS to read. I am so mad about ArSha. I would give anything to see ArSha back together again. I know all this is pure fiction but got some really positve vibes while reading this os.

Please keep on with ur writing n yeah a big BRAVO for this OS

Oh god I am gonna read it one more time now. LOL

Edited by Jiya_ArSha4Ever - 13 years ago