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maitri

@kriyansh.d3

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey guys how r u all

just thought of writtting it so started i'll write it in 2 parts

p;lz leave ur comments

kriyansh os:thank u shivam!!

gang except rey went to rehersal hall frm where a voice was coming.

as they entered d rehersal hall they were shocked to seee d person... blood was flowing through his right hand and his eyes were turned red even his nose!

ya it was rey!!!

nil:rey...rey ye kya haal bana k rakha he

sha:rey ye itna khoon kese... she was interputed by her eyes.. she saw d mirror in d RH was broken into pieces n she got how d blood was coming out frm reys hand

swayam ran to d medical room

vicky:kuch bol... tu tu ro rha he.?

rey wiping his tears

rey:no guys me ro nhi rha hu

simmi:rey tumhare eyes itne red ho gaye he n tum keh rhe ho k tum ro nhi rahe

swyam enetred n wound his hand by a bandage

swa:rey kya hua

rey:guys...aaj...aaj kriya...

vish:kriya wat?

rey:kriya...

amar:bol ley kliya kya

rey: guys aaj kriya ka b'day he!!!

sha:wat tum abhi bhi uske bare me soch rhe ho rey plz dnt do dis.it will give u pain only nthng else.

swa: vo nhi kar sakega sharon bcs jab pyaar hota he na tab kuch b ho jaye uska khyaal dil me se nhi jaata

vicky:ya swayam bt uss ke liye rey khud ko hurt kar rha he

taani entered

taani:kya hua guys... or rey ye kya hua aap k hath ko

rinni:kuch nhi use bas thodasa cut ho gaya

taani:kya bt ase kese

reykuch nhi taani u dnt bother

she saw a photo in his left hand

http://www.google.co.in/imgres?q=photos+of+shakti+mohan+and+kunwar+amar&start=161&hl=en&biw=1440&bih=809&tbm=isch&tbnid=fjHVQAWo42tMsM:&imgrefurl=http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp%3FTID%3D1929290&docid=Wxsl2azdTJmfhM&imgurl=http://www.khaleejtimes.com/images/dance_241011.jpg&w=420&h=367&ei=Yr6wT5P7JIi4rAedz-3xAw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=298&vpy=89&dur=47&hovh=210&hovw=240&tx=150&ty=145&sig=107019074973143554012&page=6&tbnh=147&tbnw=162&ndsp=34&ved=1t:429,r:28,s:161,i:215

taani:ye kiska photo he?

n she snatched dat pic frm his hand * bad manners!*

taani:oh she is beautifull bt who is she

shivam:she is kriya!!!!!!11

all:shivam

shiv:yup ab ye college mera b he to me kabhi b kahi b aa sakta hu

taani:ha bt wat did u said who is she?

shiv:she is kriya...maker of d weaklings team...best frnd of ur bro...enemy of sharon...AGS oops x-ags of dis college...n rey's girlfrnd who ditched him...

swa:just mind ur own busiiness ok?

shiv:yahi to merfa bussinenn he yaar

rey:u dnt have to look in mah personal life

shiv:ya rey i didn't have to bt kya he na k vp jyada better hota agar tum n tumhari vo kriya footloose me nhi hote

rey:kya matlab

shiv:kya he na rey k tumhe to pata hi he k kriya k mom ko uska dance karna pata nhi tha n pasand b nhi tha or nahi tumse baat karna n i hate it when any1 lies to his/her mom so i told her kya karu aadat se majboor

rey held his collar...his eyes were fuming wid fire...he was literally shivring wid amgryness...

rey:tumne kya kiya kriya k sath jaldi batao

boys tried to control rey bt he pushed every1 wid all his strenghth

rey:shivam... kriya k sath tumne kya kiya

shiv:chill dude chill meri collar chhod do varna me nhi bataunga fir bethana ase hi rote hue

rey left his collar

shiv:to guys r u ready to listen a story... just kiding yaar...

he sat down as every1 did.

rey:to batao kya hua tha

shiv:rey do u remember d day when u met her last time before elims?

rey:yup

shiv:dat day i called her mom as a shopkeeper of a cd shop n informed her mom dat she had requested to make a cd mix so dat her mom can know abt her dancing... so her mom got to know abt her dancing as well as d relation btwn u n kriya

swa:oh kriya ne hume bataya tha k usk mom ko dance k bare me pata chal gaya he

shiv:ha n elims k din uski mom ne usko 2 shart bataye k vo dance or rey ko chood degi humesha k liye

pointing towards weaklings team: gujys tum logo k liye usne apna dil apni dance n indirectly her dosti b kho di

rey's eyes were filled wid tears he just cant bare it he took one piece of glass n held it in his palm as hard as he cud n again it broke making his palm to bleed

vish:bt dude tumhe ye sab kese pata

shiv:guys me itna b bura nhi hu i did it just to make KR win bt when kriya was returning home after d elims i met her outside

*flashback*

shiv:kriya kriya ruko

kriya wiping her tears

kriy:ha bolo kya hua

shiv: kriya i m srry tumhari mom ko tumhare dance n rey k bare me pata chal gaya na

kri:ha bt tumhe...

shiv:mujhe kese pata?? actually mene hi tumhari mom ko bola tha

kriya was shocked n in dat situation she cudn't control herself n slapped him

kri:kyui kiya tumne ase shivam kya dushmani he tumhari mujhse

shiv:kuch dushmani nhi he bt tum mere college k oponent ho isliye tumne elims me harane k liye...

kri:par hume hara to nhi paye na tum n itna hi nhi tumne rey k tem ko b cheat kiya he na

shiv:ha n i succed in it

kri:shivam u r impossible tumane sharon ko b cheat kiya usne tumape itna trust kiya n tumane

shiv:i m srry kriya me tumse srry kehne hi aaya tha

kri:its k shivam vese b mere luck k samane koi kuch nhi kar sakta

shiv:still i m sry kriya

kri:agar tum sach me srry ho to meri 1 baat manoge

shic:ha bolo

kri:me to college chhod k ja rhi hu bt me chahati hu k tum mere frnds pe najar rkho n unhe koi pareshani na ho asa kuch karo

shiv:ok kriya

kri';bt tum ye karoge kese

shiv:me st.louise join karunga n ha dazzlers ko b srry bol dunga

kri:ok shivam hum dono contac me rahenge

shiv:ok kriya as u say

kri:ok bye

*flashback ends*

rey:shit hw can i do dis

swa:its k rey tumhare jaga koi or hota to vo b shayad yahi karta

rey:no...vo ase nhi karata...me kehta hu k me uss se pyaar karta hu bt me use trust nhi kar saka?...mer meri kriya ko samaj nhi saka

he started crying hard

shiv:i m srry rey n iss galati k liye mene kuch kiya he

all:wat

shiv:kal tum sab mere ghar pe aana me tu logo ko kriya se milvaunga

rey:kya kriya tumhare ghar pe he

shiv:ha actually mujhe bad me pata chala k uski mom expire ho gayi he n she is sister meri mom uske mom k sis he so vo ab mumbai me aayi he n humare sath reh rahi he n jald hi college b firse join kar lenge

all happily:thank u shivam

shiv:n srry dazzlers

dazz':its absolutely alright ab hume firse footloose me participate karne ko b mil rha he n kriya b

rey:kriya i m coming

guys hwz it?

hope u like it

its part 1 i'll update part 2 on page 5

PRECAP:KRIYANSH MEETING!!!!!!!

Edited by kriyansh.d3 - 13 years ago

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow dat was amazing one.

u made Shivam such a gud boy.

Lovely.

Do continue soon and thanks for pm.

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome part...loved it very much

its good to see shivam as positive character

waiting eagerly for next part

continue soon

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Maneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome...u made shivam good nice...eagerly waiting for the next part

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 13 years ago

😆 . . . It was quite filmy...

shivam sudhar jaye- to hume vishwas hi nhi hoga . . . .

but now everything is fine . . . She's back 😃

& kriya - shivam . . . Cousins 🤣

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jahnavi

@Jahnavi_KRAS

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Posted: 13 years ago

Soo nice...
first time i liked shivam...continue sooon

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Misha

@Born2Dance

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Posted: 13 years ago

U sud definitely continue...!!!
Shivam n sudharna...???
Rofl...!! 🤣
Please pm me vn u update nxt...!!!

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Tanishtha

@JugHo786

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

kya baat hain... shivam main itna change!!
gud ki at least yaha par shivam ke thru KUCH ACHCHA HONE JAA RAHA HAIN!
pl upd8 fast!

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

ya rey i didn't have to bt kya he na k vp jyada better hota agar tum n tumhari vo kriya footloose me nhi hote

vp zyada better hota matlab????????

plz explain...

os was good...

so finally truth out and kriya and shivam cousins...