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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

dat was beautifull shiv
n swayam is a true frnd
love it soo much

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prrk86

@prrk86

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

wow how i wish his to happen in d3

atleast every one should know about kriya's sacrifice

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

nice! loved the friendship between swayam and kriya! loved the OS a lot! thank you for the OS and also the PM!

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: lovely7010
Shivs dat was freaking awesome!!!!
Luved it sooo much. n omg kriya's mum passed away n at last the gang got to the truth...keep witing more such OS

Thanks and yeah she passed away and I know at last they did and will try to keep writing

Originally posted by: aditi061
Shivu its amazing ... U r a brilliant writer... Its so gud ... Hope cvs learn sumthing readin the ffs os n ss in forums... Plz do post more os and don't u dare to even think of nt to pm me those...

Thanks and yeah hope they learn and will try to and yeah i was sending pm's half an hour or so later so that is why

Originally posted by: star_2012
owesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks

Originally posted by: aishasully
woow shiv nyc os but really short but nyc 1

Thanks and yeah I only had lunch time so it is short and thanks again

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha
Nice!!!

Thanks

Originally posted by: asmaju
res
unres

it was awesome one shivs.
u expressed all parts so well.
the friendship of kriya nd Swayam was mind blowing.
it was awesome one.
but touched were her mom had passed away.

continue writing.

I love u (this is my way of saying thanks)

and I love u more

and glad you liked it

and i love u even more than moer

and i know i was sad writing that

and will do for u

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sauravkathuria
read it ...it was gud one ...but i read tht para of kriya's mom passing abt 5 times just to confirm wat u meant

Thanks and lol yeah it meant that she is dead

Originally posted by: kriyansh24
loved itt...

short and sweet... loved it..

words were so emotional...

thanks

and thanks

Originally posted by: D3FAN
Aww dats really nyc

thanks

Originally posted by: anniemathias
it was awesome i loved it

thanks

Originally posted by: Kriyanshlover
Shiv i am in tears here. Plz wirte one more part of this plz

sorry for making you cry amy and no plz dont made me write more or i will cry LOLZ

Originally posted by: Shamsaaa.
Ahhh Amaaizngg<3 loved the Endingg 😍

and thanks

Originally posted by: PD_puja
Gr8 wrk...luvd it...awesome...!!!😃

thanks

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: achuAR
It was really good 👏👏
plzz keep writing abt kriyaansh 😊

thanks and will do

Originally posted by: crazysky
it was awesome

thanks

Originally posted by: surbhi_d3
nice one shivu!
y didn't u pm?

thanks n u in my new pm list na as i have a new pm account

Originally posted by: harshitagangwan
PERFECT OS ...WID A SUPERB ENDING...REALLY AMAZIN... SHIVANI..!!! LUVED IT..😃😊

thanks for the perfect comment and glad you liked it

Originally posted by: Arsha1994
it ws short...luvd swayam & kria's frndship...
it ws emotional...
thnx fr d pm...

I know it was short

and glad you did

and it was sorry for that

and you are welcome

Originally posted by: sujucoolstar
omg good one shiv keep up d hardwork love it last line was faddu

thnx for d pm

thanks and will do

and you are welcome

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: prrk86
wow how i wish his to happen in d3
atleast every one should know about kriya's sacrifice

thanks and i wish that too

and yeah they should

Originally posted by: yogini64
Sari tragedies kriya ke sath hi kyun hoti hai . . . 😭 . . . . Nyce attempt...

I dont know and thanks

Originally posted by: snehaacchu
oh...shivu awesome OS...keep on writin OS's if its possible

thansk adn will try to if i have any ideas

Originally posted by: tinatartari
its just fab!!
loved it
though the end ws pretty much in a haste.u cud hav elaborated it more bt still i liked it!!
hatss off 4 ur 1st OS!!

thanks and end was not that much haste as i did not have time plus no ideas so i thought i will end there sorry

and thanks

Originally posted by: namratajadhav
aww..!! nyc 1... liked it..

aww thanks

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha
dat was beautifull shiv
n swayam is a true frnd
love it soo much

thansk and he is a true friend i know

Originally posted by: arul01
nice! loved the friendship between swayam and kriya! loved the OS a lot! thank you for the OS and also the PM!

thansk and yeah glad you liked it and you r welcome

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AJS

@Ajscinesonadar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

awesum...

nthng mre to say gud concept luking frward nxt update...

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: asmaju

The best comment saved for the last and asma this is truly amazing and wrote this OS for you as you are always with me and help he if my rough times and so does Such so this is why I dedicated it to both of you's

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: joshyalbina
awesum...
nthng mre to say gud concept luking frward nxt update...

Thanks and no next update as this is an OS na so this was it and plz dont expect more as my 3 ff's are enough for me right now as they will take a lot of time to end so when they end I will start OS's and all but plz wait till they end now thanks

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