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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#341

Amazing . . . . . U intensified their cute love so beautifully . . . . . U knw I was expecting both of them in shower in this update . . . . . . 😍 & u fulfilled my wish.. 😉
but ye nhi pata tha ki kriya ko double bath lena padega & rey ko nehlana padega . . . 🤣
omg . . . . Rey ke dialouges . . . Getting naughty every moment ☺️
indeed . . Kriya luks beautiful in frocks . . . . . 😛 . . . . . I MISS HER 😭

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Shravni

@Shrvz_PoPpY

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#342

Aweee such a cute nd awesome update deetha ab kelie res karke rakha hai i ll unres it nd SURPRISE kya hai i m really dying now deetha plz batao na plzzz...

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#343

justtt magnificent !!!!!👏

outstanding...👏

pretty Fab nd amazinnn update...⭐️

great part dear...👍🏼

the way they get drenched in water...

hayeee...😍

how come u get these ideas deetha !?😆

hehehe...well...u are an amazing writer dear...no doubt in that !!!😳

so do continue sooon nd PM me for sure !!!!

mwaaahhh !🤗

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Meshna

@MeshLovesKunwar

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#344

oufff maar dala!!

it was so freaking awesome!!!

i loved the cute moment when each realised they r now married...

and the hawtness of the shower scene...hayyyeee...am dead...

i was so sad when i saw the new d3 promo but after reading this update am all smiles...

thank you Deetha :) you are awesome!!

cant wait for next part :)

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Preeti ArsHa

@preeti_kreya

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#345

Awww its hot n happning update.. Loved it. Kria- univers g pati manga tha apne bacha de dia🤣 Rey- univers g ne pati dia hai. And bacha vo mujhe par chod do. Univers g cnt do enythng. 🤣 naught rey.. Supeb update deetha... And wats a surprise m waiting. And update nxt part fast.

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mindumplingss

@mindumplingss

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#346

Wow.. Awesome Update

Loved Their Morning After First Night...

Bathroom Scene Was Really Hot...

k: hey universe ji ...pati maangi toh ek bacha dedi...mai kya karoon...

r: arey nahi toh ...universe ji ne tumhe pati hi diya...aur bache ki baat...wo mujh pe chodo...u know isme universe ji cnt do anything...its totally my effort...

Liked This Part Very Much... I Laughed Hard When I Was Reading This Part🤣

Amazing Part..... I EnjoYed The Whole UpDate While Reading..

ToTally Perfect UpDate

Waiting For Your Surprise

UpDate Fast...

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Sheetal Rajput

@sheetal_arsha

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#347

Awesome..as usual you are a star...please update soon..I am in love with this naughty rey and the washroom scene was Hawtt..! please update asap..

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#348

awww dat was tooo awsomee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
n u knw i was xpecting dis type of mrng of our newly married couple or i would say loves birds...har tym romance chalu rhta h inka...hehehe
n i love dere romance...n wahroom scene omg dat was tooo hawttt

n where is surprise?????????? although i thnk mjhe thoda sa idea h surprise ka bf fir b jaldi bta wait ni hota ab

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#349

Hope u r feeling better now dear

I always feel great while reading ur update.
Ur FF 'Baatcutter' is one of my favourites.

What a pleasant good morning for Kriyansh. They woke up into each other's arms. Hayeee

I like when Rey was playing naughty naughty with Kria. Bechari ko phir se bheegdiya.

I like these lines.

k: hey universe ji ...pati maangi toh ek bacha dedi...mai kya karoon...

r: arey nahi toh ...universe ji ne tumhe pati hi diya...aur bache ki baat...wo mujh pe chodo...u know isme universe ji cnt do anything...its totally my effort...

Zats was so hilarious.

It was really cute when he was feeding her infront of the gang.
I luved when Kria keeps on blushing. Super cute

Thanks u for giving us this superb update.

Btw Your previous update was out of this world. Freaking HAWT

I wonder what suprise u were talking about at the start.