OS: kya milenge inke dill.. not related to D3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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THIS IS A CUTE FFJ WRITTEN BY ME…….THIS DOES NOT BELONG TO ANY SERIAL OR ANYTHING….IT'S JUST A NORMAL STORY WRITTEN BY ME….

CHARATERS

AISHWARYA DESHMUKH-MAIN LEAD

SHANTANU DESHPANDE- MAIN LEAD

NIMRIT THAKUR-PARALLEL MAIN LEAD

RAGHAV KAPOOR- PARALLEL MAIN LEAD

SHILPA KAPOOR

KARAN MAHESHWARI

MEENU DESHMUKH – AISHWARYA'S MOM

NARAYAN DESHMUKH – AISHWARYA'S FATHER

OMI DESHPANDE- SHANTANU'S SMALL BROTHER

SANJANA DESHMUKH- AISHWARYA'S SMALL SIS

ARJUN SINGH

MEGHA PRAKASH

I REALLY HOPE U WILL ENJOY…….







Aishwarya deshmuk purely known as aashi is the "laadli" of her family…..she is the first daughter of her family after many years and is said that she is very lucky for anyone….she has a small sister named sanjana who is dumb…..but also best budies like nimrit and shilpa…..
Shantanu deshpande a known guy came from dehradoun with soo many confusions…..he knows aashi very well….but how???????????/ for that u have to read the story…he knows aashi very well but pretends not to be lnowing her…





The story begins with…..

Aishwarya gets up its morning…

Aashi: oh god itni jaldi kyun 5 baj jate hai???? Aap aisa nahi kar sakte k eek hi din main 48 hrs ho…. Taki 12 ghante din ke aur 12 ghnate raat ke phir main aaram se soo sakti hoon..

She get's freshen up and leaves the house…..

Nimrit is standing their

Nimrit: as usual tu time par aa gayye na ek mainute jayada na ek minute kam…

Aashi: yu kabse yeh count karne lag gayye???

Nimrit: jabse tu itni time par aa gayee!!!! Hahaahahah

Aashi: very funny…..

They go to the mandir and while coming back….

Aashi: u known what??? Main bhagwan ko pray kar rahi thi ki 12 ghante subah ke hoo aur 12 ghante raat ke….phir hum sab aache se soo sakte hai…

Nimrit: pagal hai kya????? Phir science teacher bhi 3ghante sar par nachengi….oh god muhse toh 45 min bhi nahi sambhaltha ….3 ghante toh doer ki baat hai….

Aashi goes home there she sees shilpa is sitting there….

Aashi: tu itni subah…..wah kya bat hai

Shilpa: haha….joke nahi hai yeh….guess what??? Main nayye students ki list leke aaye hoon…..jo hamare college main iss saal padhenge….

Aashi: what??? Oh god….dikha toh mujhe bhi dekhna hai…

They sit on he sofa

Aashi: shalini,namrata and shantanu….bas 3 hi naam…..

Shilpa: kyun tujhe ladje chahiya the kya????

Aashi: very fuuny….lagtha hai Natasha ke saath bethkar tub hi ladko ke bare mai soochne lagi hai….

Suddenly sanjana comes….she sees they are luking the list…..

Sanjana: yepiii..list aagyaiii….ab hum naya pranks kehlenge…….naye students aayenge naya pranks oh god kitna kaam hai……sochna padehga

She starts jumping……. Suddenly her dad narayan deshmukh enters

Narayan: sanjana yeh kya chal raha hai???

Sanjana: who dad nahi papa….main main woh exercise…ha exercise kar rahi thi…..aacha hota hai na sheet ke liye…..

Shilpa and aashi starts laughing….

Narayan: par idhar ghar pe…exercise bhar kiya kiya jata hai….khuli hawa main…

Sanjana: ha papa bilkul sahi….par kya hai na….mujhe laga ki…hamara hi ghar hai na….toh isliye

Narayan: aacha toh phir theek hai….hum saath main karenge…..

Shilpa and aashi shocked

How was it….

I serouslly need ur reviews..i'am writing for the first time!!!!

Precap: shantanu enters the college……all girls flattered and aashi says that she has see him somewhere…….

Aashi: maine isse kahi dekha hai

Nimrit: ha dekha hoga sapne main……kitna cute hai



pls guys...give ur reviews and u can join on fb tooo...where u'll get daily updates



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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is a ff dear not an OS and yeah i would like to read it plz can u pm me when u continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update. plz pm wen u update.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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plzz pm me... would love to read it...

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