Hi kriyansh fans''''
terace me morning walk kr rahi thi tab 1 khayal aya ki kyu n khud hi apne satisfaction k liye kria k charcter ko 1 happy ending de dun. Waise toh ye cv's se xpect kiya tha n IF me reqst bhi ki thi par ab unhone to nahi di aur na hi kria k truth reveal kiya. chalo me hi hapy ending dene ki koshish karti hu. I havnt seen 15th march episode jst writin aftr 14th march episode. Dis is my 1st FF guys I hav zero xperienc of writing any FF or SS. 1st tym trying hope u all lyk it.
Lts start...
All d characters n situation same as in D3 nw.
Nxt day aftr Louins party. weaklings trying 2 b normal aftr kria's exit.
Scene 1:
Neha n Vishakha entr d colg. Luk at each othr n trying to give a smile, squeeze each othrs arms n finaly smile.š Sudnly sum strangr entrs d colg n asks sum of d studnts (d studnts were sum weaklings )
Str: kya Miss.Kria ghai isi colg me padhti thi.
Stu: Haan
Str:Kya aap me se unka koi frnd h?
Stu:Hm nahi bt dey r kria's frnd(Saying dis dey point 2 Neha n Vishakha)
Strangr goes 2 dem n says kya aap log kria k frnds h.
N: yes.. But who u?
Str: Hello I m Mr.Jeet Ahuja I m nw in Mumbai n I have jst shifted in d flat where kria Ghai livd.
V:So wat?
Str:Actualy she has left hr dis bag in d house b4 leaving(guys d same bag which kria brought colg evry day yaad hai na) I think she 4got it.
(Ab kya kre itni dukhi thi hmari kria ke kuch yaad hi nai raha job hi mom ne pack kiya usiki sath chali gayi)
V:ha ye toh kria k bag h.
Str:Seeing hr ID card I found she was in dis clg.I knw nothing abt hr so can u plz jst give hr wenevr u meet.
Neha n vishakha thot ab toh kria se kbhi nai mil payenge fir b rakh lete h as hr memories.
He hands dem d bag n exits.
N n V carrying d bag entrd Girls lokr room.Dey thot 2 opn it bt den due 2 disapointment dropd d idea .Sudnly vishakha stud n d bag fel dwn n a diary came out of it partially(d same diary guys which kria wrote in hr home during 9ts remember?????)
Neha pikd it up saw V's face.
N: wat doing ??opning kria's diary or not
V:well dats not good 2 c sum1's prsnl diary dude...
N:Bt if kria writing here y she leaving us den.
V:yaa...
Aftr lots of hesitation dey finaly opnd it n read.
Both of dem read d entir jrney of kria in St.Louis n evn hr real reason 4 exit 2.
They brst into tears aftr knwing kria's truth hugd each odr n cried.
Scene 2:
All d Louins(xcept Neha n Vishakha) r in rehrsal hall planning 4 foot loose finals.Dazzlrs also supporting dem . dey took a break 4m practice Vicky thinking abt hr kaku being sad
In upset mind tied one of his shoes lace wid Neel's 1 of d shoe lace. Both were standing vry close so dey didn't fall. All strtd taking talking abt krai's exit.
Listning dis rey went a side n sat on the floor.
Bh:Amar kria toh chali gayi par samajh me nai ata wo achanak itni selfish kaise ho gayi
Am:kya pata yaal maine klia se kabhi ye umeed nhi kit hi.
Suddnly Neha n Vishakha entrd.
V: (In high voice)š” jst stop it dude.Hw can u evn call kria selfish.
N: (wid a panic voice):Kria sacrificing everything 4 us n u caling hr selfish.
Bh:Yeh tu kya bol rahi h wo hme chod kr chali gyi kya ye uska balidaan h.
N:yes balidaan only.
Neha kept kria's diary on d floor.
Sw:Tum log ye kya bol rahe ho guys
V: Sach'. Yaa swyam hme kria k jane k actual reason pata chal gaya h.
Sh: Actual reason wat do u mean?????????
V:Do u rmembr guys elims k din kria late ayi thi .
Bh:wo to hmesha late hi ati thi
N: Will u keeping quit bharat?
V: Kria's mon nevr want hr 2 danc n elims ki 1 rat pehle unhe uske danc k bare mein pata chala aur...
Sw:Aur kya...
V:Aur unhe uske pyar k bare mein b pata chala.
Evrybody surprisdš² n said kya pyaar k bare mein.
Ni: u mean kria was in luv wid sum1.
Viky: (stepping frwd said) who was d luky'(b4 he cud complete he fell dwn as Nicky's shoe laces were tied 2gethr. Neel also fell wid him)(kya kre yaar kitni bhi seriousness ho par hamare Nicky hamesha hi comedy kings bane rahte hš)Nw in laying dwn position Vky completd his half sentence
Vi: I mean... ab toh unluky guy?
(Nilesh shoutd on viky. amar,bhart n swayam stood dem up . both of dem sat on d floor separating deir shoe laces.)
Meanwhile Neha continued
N: Neha wanting dat he only teling who was he?
V: Ya.. jisne apne pyaar par trust n krke sirf uskre words kiya kam se kam aaj toh sabke samne accept karle''.
Ne,Vs n Sw strtd stairing rey.
Sh: Tunm log rey ko q dek rahe ho????
Rey :(our hero finaly broke his maun wrat): qki guys mein hi hu kria k pyar (taking a deap breath)I mean aisa mujhe lagta tha'..
All dazlrs(wid a big qsn mark on deir face) Wat ?????????
V:Ha''..Rey sirf tumhe lagta nahi tha wo such mein tumse pyaar krti thi.
R:par usne toh mujse khud kaha.. ki.
V: ki ,he used u ... jst tel dude hw did kria use u .use toh tab hota na jab usne shivam ki tarah tumhare routines copy kiye hote.
N: tru teling vishakha kria ne sab kuch apni mehnat se kia ,hmari team banyi, use footloose competition tak le gayi aur jitaya b .
V: Aur raha tumhare rep aur position k sawal to agar tum dazlrs k leadr the toh kria hm weaklings ki. If u were GS den Kria AGS. She was also popular in d clg.Wo tumhe q use karti.
Sw: toh akhir sach kya h??????
(4 d 1st tym vishakha needed 2 gather courage to speak..warna aap to jante ho hmari vish ko weaklings me sabse bold toh wahi h)
V:here 's d truth. 1 day b4 elims kria's mom lockd hr in hr room n disalowd hr 4m participating in elims.
Am: Acha isliye elims din aunty ne hme klia se milne nai diya aul wo food poisionig 1 bahana tha.
N: Ha bharat rit thinking u
V:Finaly hmare jane k baad aunty ne use elims k liye alow toh kiya pr 1 aisi condition k sath jisne(taks a deap breath) jisne hmse hmari kria ko hamesha k liye door kr diya.
Si:Aisi v kya condition thi.
V: Condition ye thi ki kria ko apne dance k sapne aur apne luv- rey se hamesha k liye apna rishta todna hoga.
R: kya...
N:Ha rey. Kria, 1 side having hr pyar n dance n oder sid dreams n hops of hr frnds
V:in b/n dil,dance n dosti she chosed dosti...
Sw: Kria ne hmare liye apna sab kuch sacrifice kr diya akhir uski zindagi dance aur rey hi toh the..
Bh:Aur hm yaha ye soch rhe h ki kria hme chodkar chali gyi ,hm sirf apne performance aur apne sapno k bare mei soch rhe hai jo kria ne hme dikhaye the.
Am:Selfish klia nai hm log hai guys...
V: Yeh dude.. ab toh lagta h ki na m kria ki friendship deserv krte h aur n rey rey kria k pyaar ...
Sw:par Vishakha isme Rey ki kya galti h kria ne khud usse kha ki wo rey se pyaar nai krti.
N: (weeping n said )kria teling n rey beliving hr. y he only listning hr words y he not seeing hr dukhi eyes n dukhi heart...
Rey: (taking a sad deap breath)par kria ne mujhse aisa q kaha I mean''. wo mujhe sach bhi toh bata skti thi na...
Vishakha piks up d diary which neha has initially placd on floor. Yeh lo khud apna kyun k answr dhondlo.She opens d 2nd last page of diary n hands it ovr 2 rey.
Rey gathrs up courage n finaly holds the diary.
He was cud not gathr courag to read it. Swayam keeps his hands ovr rey's sholdrs n motivates him 2 read. Rey starts reading in low whispers.But deir was so much silnce prevailing dat evry1 cud hear it.
Rey reding lettr: Sor...Sorry rey mai agar ye apse 1000 tyms b kahu toh kam hai. Maine apne doston ko chuna kya krti unhe dance k sapna maine dikhaya tha aur unhi sapno ko khud tid deti apne pyaar k liye nahi mai itni selfish nahi hu. Dukh bas 1 baat k hi ki meri galti saja apko bhi milegi... kyu rey kyu apne mujhe pyaar krna sikhya..Rey mai apko kabhi bhi hurt nahi karna chahti thi par kya krti meri paas apko khudse door krne k aur koi option b nahi tha. Agar apko sach batati toh aap mujhe bhul kr apni Zindagi mein age kabhi nahi badh pate aur meri tarah dukh aur dard se ghire rhte.
Sorry toh mujhe swayam ko bhi kehna h apko khud se door krne k liye maine use beech me laya. I wish ki mai aap dono ko sorry keh pati.apko khud se door karne k liye apke mere liye pyaar ko nafrat me badlna zaruri tha
Rey apki baatcuttr (in b/n Riny says yeh toh kria ne likha he fir ye baatcutr kaun h .Swayam replys hr wid a disgst :Rey krai ko pyaar se baatcttr bulata tha ok Rinny)Rey continues after turning the page ,Rey reading :apki baatcuttr apki nafrat seh sakti h par apko dukhi kbhi nhi dek skti...
Apko nai pata par apko hurt krke mai kitni hurt hui hu.Bahut difficult tha par apke khusiyun k liye yehi sahi tha...Ab ap mujhse nafrat krte hoge kyunki ab apko vishwaas ho gaya hoga ki maine apko use... (Rey notices sum fading of ink he understands ki yaha kria k tears drop hue honge )He continues wid a tear faling 4m his eyes 2. Universeji aap rey ko shakti dena ki wo mere bina age badh paye. Wo mujse bahut nafrat kre.Akhir ye nafrat hi unhe age badhne mein help karegi .Unki age ki Zindagi bahut sari khushiyu se bhar dena itni khushiya jaha kria ki koi yaad bhi n ho. Waise v swayam kehta h n sacha pyaar apne pyaar ko khush dekne me h.Maein aur rey kabhi oficialy "hum" nahi ho paye toh kya meri dil me hum hamesha 1 rehenge. Apki jagah meri life me koi nai le sakta rey par mai chahti hu ki jald hi meri jagah apki life me koi lele. Apki life me koi aisi ladki aye jo apse bahut pyaar kre shayad mujse bhi... Ja...da ...pyaar (again a drop of tear on the page n also on rey's eyes.) I jst want u 2 move ahead in ur life widout ur ...baatcutr. Plzz universe ji rey ko khush rakna...
Diary drops dwn 4m rey's hand n rey fals on his knees. Continuous tearsš 4m his eyez.He luks up n shouts aloud in panic n pain KRIYAAA...
(BG- Kuch kam hai ...)
He searchs 4 diary on floor picks it up, sticks it near his heart n continues weeping.š
Vicky n Nilesh try 2 go near rey bt swayam stops dem he says rey ko akele rehne do he needs 2 b alone nw . All of dem leve leaving rey behind in d rehersal hall.
Rey: kyun baatcuttr q mujhse itna pyaar krti ho...
U guys mst b thinking rey is cryingš so hw can d end b happy. But jst wait 4 d nxt update. Rey ko rota sonch mujhe bhi rona a rha h par. Ending hapy hi hogi as I said b4. N intrsting thing is ki ending aisi hogi ki 1 link bhi bachega dat if shakti rtrns kria can also rturn' plzzz do coment xams ke beech likh rahi hoon kya kru pagal hoon na kriyansh ke piche. Plz give ur coments bade aur lambe-2, ha aur Nicky k scene kaisa laga us par bhi coment karna. nxt update 2day 9t hi kar dungi qki fir kal se pandha bhi toh h xams hai na so I'll writ 2day itself .
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