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hellooo ppl...🤗
yeah me(swaronforever) n nish(nish22) r back wid new SS...as dis weekend seems sooo longgg after watching promo...
super liked d new promo...
sooo v wrote wat v wanna c in d cuming week...
v started frm d end of d thrusday epiosde...

hope u guys like...


P.S. u want long 3 updates of whole SS in 3 days???or u guys want 6 updates...2 updates daily...

as soon as i receive ur response regarding d no. of updates u want...i will edit d post...!!😊


thank u guys...!😊


chap-1 page 1 first post..😊
chap-2 page 4
chap 3-page 8
chap 4-page 10
chap 5-page 14
chap 6-page 16
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CHAPTER 1:



Sharon Stood Shocked when they said that now Kria will know.. She was confused cause she knew Kria had never meant anything like that.. She looked at Neha and Vishaka Glaring at her and then looked at Simmi and rinni who looked Expectantly at her... She knew She had to do it!
Sh: Guys! Stop all this non-sense.. Kria never meant anything like that and the Weaklings team are really awesome.. And We are all Louisans so please don't say things like that again..
Everyone is dumbstruck and Rinni, simmi Hug Sharon!! She knew she had done the right thing.. The thing her heart told just like how swayam always asked her to do.. Neha and Vishaka also Join then and Group hug..
Meanwhile,
Peon: Reyaansh and Swayam, RDX sir is calling you!
Sw: Kya hua hoga?
Re: Pata nahi chalkar dekhte hain...
sw n rey enters d rdx sir ki office...
Rdx sir: sooo guys maine tum logo ko yahan ek imp baat batane k liye bulaya hai
Sw n rey looking at each other...
Rdx sir:swayam tumhe weakling team k liye ek aur dancer dhundni padegi...
Sw n rey confused
Rdx sir: n rey tumhe new AGS...
Still both give confused look
Rdx sir: cox kriya ne clg chod diya hai...
Sw n rey together:wat??.she left d clg...
Swayam looked towards rey is already shattered...
Swayam bt kyn sir???
Rdx sir she didnt gave ny reasn..
Rey:bt sir apne usse jaane kaise diya...????
RDX: Main Kuch nahi kar saka.. Uske Maa ne kuch nahi bola..
Re: Oh..
Sw: *Looking at rey worried* Okay Sir we will go and tell everyone!
Re: Yes sir
RDX: Thank you guys!
Sw and Re: Thank u sir!
They both go outside..
They both go outside..
Sw: Tu theek hai na?
Re: Nahi.. Mujhe Akele main rehna hai..
Sw: Atleast tell me where your going so that I can find you..
Re: Fire Exit.
Rey leaves and Swayam decides to go tell the others.. Before that he calls Kria and it goes into Voice mail..
Sw: Kria Its Swayam.. Call Me ASAP I need to talk to you.. Bye!
Swayam goes to the canteen where everyone are..
Sw: Guys I have a bad news!
Sh: Kya hua?
Everyone: Kya hua?
sw:guys kriya quits d clg..
Every1 together:wat????
Ne:naiii kriya nai jaa skti mujhe chod kr yun...she forgeting dat i m her bst frnd wo mujhe batye bina nai jaa skti...
Vi:dude bt yeh hua kyn???she left widout telling ny1..
Every1 bombarding swayam wid ques..
Sh:guys chill let him speak...
Sw n sh look look hawa hawa...
Ni n vic:haan bol ns dude kya hua tujhe kaise pata chala ye???
Sw:rdx sir ne abhi bataya...i called her bt call gone om voice mail..
Ne n vi n amar tum usk ghar jaa kr dekho...baki mai yahan dekhtu hun...
N left d canteen...walking towards fire exit..
Amar neha n vi left for kriya place...

Edited by SwaRonforever - 13 years ago
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CHAPTER 6
Sw: KRIA!!
Kr: Swayaam'
Re: KRIA?!
Sw: *mouths* Ek min? Bolo Kria.. Kahaan ho tum?!
Kr: M very sorry Main aise chali gayi.. Par' Par..
Sw: Don't cry.. Please'
Everyone alarmed!!
Sh: Put it on speaker!
Sw: *Nods and puts on speaker* Kya hua?
Kr: Mujhe jaana pada.. Maa ne sab find out kar liya.. She made me promise that If I participated in Elims ill never dance againa and rey'
Sw: Rey?
Kr: I should stay away from rey! I never wanted to hurt him..
Sw: I know I know..
Kr:Par par uss din I told him so many lies and stuf' *Cries*
rey shocked he wanted to talk to her bt every1 stops him..
Sw:bt kriya tumne usse jhoot bol kr usse aur hurt kiya hai...
Kr:swaym mai jaanti hun mujhse unse sorrh bolna hai bt mai nai bol skti...
Gals r highly confused except sharon ki on wat topic dey r talking about...
Kr:i need to go nw swayam maa aati hi hogi...
Sw:take care kriya...n v r wid rey tum apn khayal rakhna...
Rey finally smile dey decided to go back home...

ne: babu ye kya chal raha tha???
Vi:khagu mai kal clg me batata hun...
Sooo guys lets gooo...
Vi mai neha ko drop kr deta hun...
Nil goes wid rey..
Rinni vish simmi...
bharat n amar...
Every1 leave sirf swayam n sharon der...

DIS IS HIGHLY IMAGINATIVE SWARON CONVO FOR ALL MY CRAZY SWARONIANS...😍

Sw:lemme drop u home..
Sh*smiles* n said yess...
Swayam opens d car door for sharon n den he get back for driving car..
Pin drop silence between 2 of dem...
Finally sharon break d ice n said-thank u swayam...jo b tumne mere liye kiya goa me...mera confidence laane k liye...
Sw*smiling*wahi cute si smile

Sharon iski koi zarurat nai hai..i m always der for u wenever u need me...uss waqt tumhara confidence wapas laana tha wo sbse imp tha sooo maine wahi kiya jo mujhe thik laga...
Sh:thank u swayam...i performed in d stage only coz u wer standing in frnt of me...

Sw:*smiling*sharon dont b soo thanks...chalo tumhara ghar aa gaya hai...
Sh: Hmmm.. Theek hai..
Sw: Ab Chalo.. Byee.. Good night..
Swayam get out of the car and like a gentleman opens the door for her..
Sh: Bye..
Sw: Bye.. *goes towards the car*
Sh: Swayam..
Sw: Haan Sharon bolo..
Shaaron goes and hugs swayam.. He is shell shocked but then hesitantly hugs her back..
Sh: Thanks for being my confidence..
Sw: Always there for u!
finally here is d end of SS...
i knw my felloew SwaRonians r angry wid me due to less of SwaRon scenes...bt i think jitne b SwaRon scenes they r super cute...moreover dey r more den simple look look hawa hawa...LOL
bt i promise nxt SS will b full SwaRon SS on HOLI episode...yeahhh
tilll den wait guys...will b back soon...
n thank u guys for liking d SS sooo much...ur comments means alot to us...i didnt rply to every1 individually due to lack of tym...bt i m actually thankful...😊
Edited by SwaRonforever - 13 years ago
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CHAPTER 5

sw:*smile*
n every1 ek saath gave d bg swayam ooo iski toh ek hi hai kal aaj aur kal...
Isk phele ki dey take name
Swayam interupt...*blushing*kya guys tum log be...
Sh*smile* watching swayam blushing...
Si:y u smiling sharon..
Sh:wo kuch nai...aaise hi...
Rey devdad mode me baitha tha...
Ni:chalo yaar dance krte hai...
Vi:acha idea hai...
Sw:u guys also join us...hum yahan ek ache kaam k liye aaye hai n he walks...
Gals thinking nek kaam??
Bt den hi music starts n dey started dancing...
All of them are full on Talli dancing and the girls also become very excited.. Rey is still sitting sadly and everyone makes him dance too.. Finally he dances and when the song is about to end by mistake Swayam and Sharon are alone..
Sw: Maine aapko kahin dekha hai..
Sh: Shayad *lost in his eyes*
Sw: Kahaan?
Sh: Pehle batao bhi ki tumhare kal aaj aur kal kaun hai?
Sw: Meri Sharon..
Sharon was overwhelmed and felt butterflies in her tummy.. She needed to hear this.. She had to know even after all these months he still loved her.. She slowly started taking off her turban leaving swayam shocked as a statue..
Sw: Shar… Sharon tum!!*stunned by her beauty...cnt take his eyes off frm her...she looking absolute angel*...
Sh: Haan..
Sw: Kaise?
Sh: I knew u were lying and I had to find out..
Sw: You did this for me?
Sh: Haan.. Ab batao Rey ko kya hua?!
sw:wo mai...
Sh:sw batao na i m worried for rey...
Sw:please tum phele puri baat shanti sunna...
Sh:*nodded her head*
Sw:wo rey n n kriya wer in relatn bt nw dey broke up...
Sh:*jaws open full shocked*ye tum kya bol rhe ho...
Sw: haan sharon yehi sach hai...
Sh:is pissed off at rey n she start walking...
Swayam stops her n pull her toward him...
Look look hawa hawa..
Sw:sharon tum usko abhi kuch mt bolna...
Sh:swayam pr wo mera best frnd n usne mujhse ye chupaya..
Sw:sharon for ne dot say nything...he needs us...
Sh agree wid swayam n dey decided to join d gang...
Meanwhile, During the dance on Bhootni ke the girl's get ups start to slip and the boys fine out about the girls…
Vi : Kaagu yeh tum ho?
Ne: Nahi tumhari behen!!
Vi: Kaagu!! Tum yahaan?
Ne: Haan Neha seeing what babu doing behing neha!
Ni: Arey yeh sab toh lakiyaan hai!
Si: Eureka Einstein!
They all don't mind the girls being there and Swayam also sees this..
Everyone were finally settled down and talking.. Swayam and Sharon joined them as if nothing happened.. Sharon was shooting worried glances at Rey..
Suddenly Swayam's Phone rings.. Unknown number!
Sw: Hello..
UN: Swayam?
Sw: Haan aap kaun hai?
UN: *starts crying*


sooo cute SwaRon convo for my crazy SwaRon fans...
one more update n den one super dreamy SwaRon convo on his way...LOL
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CHAPTER 3

Sw: Listen guys! Kria and rey were together and after elims She dumped him!
Vi: What the fiish!!?
Ni: Tu Kya Bakwaas kar raha hai!
Sw: Kuch Bakwaas nahi.. That's what he was talking about in the basketball court that day u saw him..
Bh: Poore tarah se bata!
Swayam Tells them everything from the start!
nil n vicky:rey ne ye baat humse chupai..
Sw:guys dekho iss baat k liye usko kuch bolna mt ab..wo phele le shattered hai...
Vic n nil nodded der head:haan swayam u cn trust us hum kuch nsi bolenge...
Sw:smile at dem
Bh:toh ab kya kare yaar...
Amar:kuch toh krna padega...
Nil n vicky thinking..swayam also thinking...
Vic:rey k liye nai ladki dhundte hai...every1 stares at him
Bh:abe tu pagal hai kya???abhi toh wo dhuki hai nai ladki ghaiyas optn hai...
Nil:idea
Every1 stares at him...
Sw:kya idea hai..
Nil:party...
Sw:party???abe tu pagal ho gaya hai kya???aaise waqt me party...
Nil:guys normal party nai...hatke party...
Every1 nodded head at each other n smile*evil smile*
Dey hug each other...
Nil:mission rey ko cheer karo starts...
Swayam knew Sharon was suspecting something but he didn't know how she would take the truth so he decided to lie to her.. He went to the Canteen where all the girls were and he saw Neha sobbing and Sharon consoling her and he couldn't help but smile..
Sw: Sharon? Can I talk to you?
Sh: bolo.. Kya hua?
Sw: I want you to do me a favour.. Take care of all the girls.. We guys are gonna go and find someway to get kria back
Sh: Where are you going?
Sw: hmmm…umm.. Decide nahi kiya.. They are discussing now..
Sh: Swayam? *Frowning*
Sw: Kya?
Sh: Tum jhoot bol rahe ho!
Sw: Nahi toh.. Kyun aisa bhol rahe ho?
Sh: I know you.. I can see it in ur eyes…
Sw: KYA? 😲
Sh: Kuch nahi.. Chalo I will take care…
Sw: Thanks!
Sh: If you need anything call me..
Sw: Sure bye! *Smiling widely*
Sharon went back to the girls
Si: Kya kaha usne?
Sh: Kuch gadbad ha


P.S. SWARON FANS K LIYE UPDATE...
SHARON NE SWAYAM KI AANKHO KO PADHA N BOL BI DIYA...AB I HOPE TUM SB KHUSH HO AFTER DIS SWARON CONVO..!
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CHAPTER 2

Rey was shattered hearing the news! First he decided to change and become a new Rey for his friends.. When he is talking swayam opens the door and sits next to him..
Sw: Don't be sad.. Something is very wrong though!
Re: She Just wanted to leave cuz she hates me!
Sw: Rey she is not that stupid.. and besides usne bola tha ki tumhe matlab ke liye use kiya.. Agar who case hai toh kyun jayegi.. She will be here boasting her victory na?
Re: Tu sahi keh raha hai.. Par kya hua hoga?
Sw: Who hum pata lagathe hai... Ab Chalo we'll try to find where she is!
Re: She is in Dehradun for sure!
Sw: Tumhe Kaise pata chala?
Re: Aisa hi!
sw lets wait for ne vi n amar wo log gaye hai usk ghar..
Rey had tears in his eyes..
Swayam handling him m thinking aaisa kya ho skta hai jissi kriya ne yeah sb kiya...
Swayam cell ring vish on d call
Haan vish bolo
Vi:dudu door pr lock laga hai..
Sw:wat???tum log wapas clg aao...
Rey kya hua swayam..
Sw usk ghar pr lock laga hai...
Rey started crying again..
Sw chal yahan se sb already pareshan hai n tujhe n mujhe nai dekhenge toh aur shor karenge...
Rey bt i dont wanna go..
Sw chal na yaar me nt leaving u here alone...
Both goes to d canteen..
Bh:yaar kuch pata chala kya??
Every1 looking at swayam...
Sw:Guys usk ghar pr lock laga hai...
Every1 got sad n worried...
At d same tym neha vish n amar entered d canteen...
Sw:guys wahan kuch letter ya kuch tha???have u asked neighbours???
Vish yaa dude bt kisi ko koi idea nai tha ki wo kahan gaye...
Rey left d canteen...
Vicky and Nilesh worriedly Follow Rey.. The others are puzzled…
Sh: Swayam.. Kya ho raha hai?
Sw: Kuch..Kuch Nahi Sharon..
Sh: Sach main..
Sw: Haan! Main Dekhkar aata hoon.. Amar Bharat Chalo mere saat..
All The boys are in the Locker room and Rey looks Awful and almost in tears..
Vi: Kya hua rey?!
Nil: batao na please!
Re: Kuch nahi guys leave me alone!
Sw: Usse Chod do guys.. Rey tu chal yahaan se!
Rey leaves nodding at swayam
Ni: Tu pagal ho gaya kya swayam? Cant u see how horrible he looks!
Sw: That's why I asked him to go!
Bh: Kya chal raha hai?
Am: Main bhi kuch samjha nahi..
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CHAPTER 4


ne:kya gadbad hai????
Vis:yaa dude kya gadbad ho skti hai???might b dey actually going to find her...
Sh:nooo i knw sumthing is wrong...
Ri:toh ab kya kare sharon hum???
Sharon thinking n said v need to follow dem..
Si:u mean v spy dem???
Sh:nt excatly spying bt i knw sumthing is wrong n v need to find out dat...
Every1 agreed wid sharon...
Si:bt...
Sh:kya hua simmi??
Si:sharon v cnt follow dem like dis...
ri:*confused* wat u wanna say???
Vis:sharon she means to say ki hum agr aaise guys ko follow karenge toh dey cn caught us...
Sh:correct simmi...u r rite...
Ne:mere pass ek idea hai...
Ri: guys pehle we need to find where they are going!
Vis: Wow ur becoming brainy!! 😉
Sh: Haan we'll Find out.. Neha try to find from Vicky, Vish from bharat, simmi nilesh, rinni amar and main…
Si: Swayam!
Sh: *Blushing* Theek hai..
They girls split and try finding from the guys but they are all running away from the girls.. Sharon had gone to the boys locker room to find something and just then the guys come in.. She runs and hides in the bathroom!
Vi: Neha ko shaq ho gaya!
Ni: Simmi mere peecha nahi chod rahi hai!!
Sw: Guys! Ab conc. Karo! Koi bhi yahaan nahi hogi.. Toh where should we take rey? And what should we do?
Vi: Who Daaru bina devdas accha nahi lagtha.. Toh Daaru pilate hain!
Am: Haan! Theek kaha!
Sw: Awesome Idea..
Sharon is shocked.. Swayam Peetha hai!! 😲😲
Bh: Par usko kaise vahaan laaye?
Sw: Who mujhe par chod do!
Ni: Toh aaj Shaam 7 pm we will meet in the club!!
All the guys!! PPPAARRRTTYYY!!!
gals waiting for sharon in d locker room...
Sharon enters d locker room..
Si:kuch pata chala??nil ne kuch nai bataya mujhe..
Ne:babu ne b nai bataya...
Sh:yaaa guys mujhe pata chal gaya...bt ye nau samjh aaya ki ye log jaa kyn rahe hai wahan..
Every1 kahan??
Sharon:wo log club jaa rahe hai...
Ne:kya babu club going wo b kagu ko bina bataying...
Vish:club bt kyn???n tumhe ye pata kaise chala...
Sh:tells dem d whole convo she heard i locker room...
Ri:ye log rey ko kyn ke kr jaa rahe hai...usse kya hua hai???
Si:gals i agree wid sharon kuch toh gadbad hai...
Sh:haan neha tum apna plan batao...
Ne:toh i telling u dat ki hum costumes wear kr k jaate hai...
Vish:nice idead dude...
Si:bt kaise costumes...
Sh*smiling* mil gaya costume...
At d same tym swayam finds rey...
Sw: Rey Tume mere saath chalna hai...
Re: Mujhe kahin nahi jaana..
Sw: Tujhe mere kasam.. Ab chalo!
Re: Swayam please.. Main already bahut confused hoon..
Sw: Isiliye bhol rahi hoon.. Cha lab!
Re: Kahaan?
Sw: You will see!
Later at 7 pm all the boys except swayam and rey are waiting outside the Club and finally rey and swayam arrive
Re: Hum yahaan kya kar rahe hai?
Vi: We know!
Nil: Haan.. 😊
Re: Swayam!! Tumne?!
Sw: Haan maine hi bola.. We all thought u need a boys night!
Bh: Hum sab hai tumhare saath..
Re: You guys are the best!
All the boys hug!!
Am: Ab andhar Chale..
After they go in a suspicious car come and out of it emerge 5 Sardars!
dey turns n dey r none other den st louis ki kudiyan in ekdum dassu wala sardar avtar...
Every1 looking cute bt sharon looking super duper uber cute...
Sh guys ab v need to keep eyes on d guys...
Every1 agree n dey enters d club..dey sit adjecent to guys table...
Guys trying to cheer rey...
Dey ordered drinks...
Sw:rey le na yaar kya tu b ab..
rey: mera mood nai hai abhi...
Gals table...
Si:ye log kar kya rahe hai???
Vish:rey k saath zabardasti...
Guys table..
Finallu dey holds d glasses in hands n cheers...n njoying der drinks...
Gals table...
Dey all r fuming wid anger by seeing guys njoying d drinks...
Sh looking at swayam...
Swayam is drinking...der is sumthing serious warna swayam never drinks...
Ne:me going babu k pass...mai nai dekh skti ye sb..
She stood up
Vish try to get hold on her bt she couldnt...
Ne: Babu..
Vi: *Drunk* mujhe Kagu ki awaaz sunai de rahi hai..
Am: *at Neha* Aap Kaun hai?
Ne: *Changing voice* Humara naam... Nehal Singh hai ji.. Humare doston ne aap sabko dekha.. Bahut maze kar rahe ho.. Kya hum bhi joining?
NI: Aajo bhai!!
Neha goes and asks the girls to join them... All the girls also join.. The guys are full on Drunk.. And aer blabbering something..
Ni: Yeh ladkiyaan hi aisa hai.. Humesha Apne bhaliyi hi chate hai!
Bh: Haan.. Isliye… No Pyaar vaar…
Si: *Shocked* Yahaan kisko pyaar hai?
Vi: Mujhe Apni Kagu se bahooot pyaar hai..
Ne: Mujhe bhi..
Vi: Kya?!?! Tum mere kaagu ko jaanthe ho?!?
Ne: Nahi maine bhola ki mujhe bhi pyaar hai ek ladke se..
Ni: LADKE SE?!?
Sh: Hits neha on the head.. Aur kisko pyaar hai? *eyeing Swayam*
Ni: Mujhe apni pyaari Nicole se hai!!
Si: Kicks him.. Oye Sorry by mistake ho gaya!
😆
Sh: Aur Tumko? *At Swayam*
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aparna kush hua...muhahahahahah!!!!...waise second part jaldi update karna yaar...and bas inti choti si convo se satisfied nahi hoge...we need something more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awesome plz 3 long updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oyye.ACS nai AGS... ACS toh swayam hai... BTW nice start...

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