ll KriyAnsh OS ll Forgiven ll Note Pg9 Mar17 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

hehehehe LOL... not u girl... i m talking about Kriya... i just phrased ur own line..

n yea.. we r not that lucky enough that Reyaansh will be with us *sighs*😆

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..

oh! You rephrased. Haha. My bad...

Lol! In our dream he can. But he never comes in mine. Other people do ☺️

LOL... keep dreaming... good night🥱

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..

Aha! You're on a role getting first comments in all three updates 😆 Thank you! Glad you found it sweet. As I said, I have trouble making people suffer in my works. So they always end on happy note.. at least till now it has 😛 I'll write.. like once in a blue moon 😛 Thanks again =D Yup! Waiting to see her reaction on this 😛

Originally posted by: KriaReyansh

Haha hat-trick 😉

and yea i know what u mean...i dont like making ppl suffer when writing after all its all fictional so why not have positive view!

luv it 100 times aww so sweet

aweee that was really very cute khushi...loved it very much

nice one!i loved d mom daughter relationship...at least we get to see a rational smriti here!n it was definitely a very sweet OS!

ha ha loved this track loved it totally n i wanna see how shirtless wonder impress smriti

Lovd it khushi...awsm1 as usual...smtyms i wondr life to be dis okay but future always hv sm odr plans..i wish creatives cud hv shown smthng lyk dis..bt u did a great work

Awesome...luvd it...d way u describd mother-daughter relationship ws jst amazng...plz cntinue writng os's...u r so gud at it too..