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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 2: The External Affairs

"You okay?"

The train is running fast. It's not a passenger train, its a wagon car. The trains in Orlov's era has it's speed. No one can recall such speed in previous days. But that's not the good part which can prove an evil like Orlov is a good man.

His regime has killed many, took many homes from families. His People's United Party (PUP) is actually carrying the name of People but it doesn't do any good for people. Ruthless Gregory Orlov just likes to see the country burn. He is an example of evil and devil combined into one!

India is now nothing but a wreckage. It has the structure but no soul. It has the name but no identity.

The train is running towards Nepal. A man from the dark wagon interior opens a door. The sound of the train running increased. Winds started flowing into the wagon. As light comes in, a girl sitting right at the corner of the wagon hides her face from the sudden light.

"You okay?" the man asks again.

The girl slowly lifts her head. She looks weary and tired. Her eyes are looking sore, she might be crying for a long time.

"Do you think I can be okay?" the girl breaks her silence.

The man, in his fall 20s looks outside of the cabin. The trees and green fields are passing by too fast. He sits near the door. He then looks back to the girl.

"Look, I know it's tough to do but, you have to be strong." the man concluded.

The girl breaks into tears. She again keeps her head between her knees and starts weeping. The man, somehow frustrated, turns his head again to the outside of the wagon.



Continued in next post...(sorry for the short update, updating from office 😛)
Edited by bengalscott - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
nice and awesome update dear. continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continued from last post...

The girl somehow stopped her crying and looked to the man. She wonders why all of a sudden this man is helping her. Although the term 'man' is bit harsh. He's young enough. She hesitated to ask him any question. He helped her a lot.

She remembers her past, her family. A beautiful family settled in a small town in Himachal. Her father was one of the most prolific businessman with a huge client base. She still doesn't know properly about her father's business. Actually she never needed to know. She is the wealthiest familly girl of that town and apart from that girls from that town never interferes in a man's work. Male dominated society as we may assume. But everything went upside down, when the military colony was set near their town. Killing, rape, extortion increased as the military group under the leadership of PUP's Orlov forced them to make a deal with them in exchange for peace.

But peace never came. It was not meant for coming back. Orlov had other plans. His military team just burned the whole town. Her father along with town people protested against them. The result - Her father was killed and her whole family was burned alive. Her elder brothers, uncle, cousins, her mother everyone was killed. She somehow managed to escape, thanks to that 'man'. Out of nowhere he came into her room and took her out of the room before the place was attacked by the military.

They ran away towards the station. Somehow the military patrol noticed them escaping. They fired, chased. The only sentence she heard from him is 'Believe me!" at that time. He took her to a hidden shelter in the woods which is just adjacent of the station. The station was full of guards. With some excellent skill, he took down some of those guards. Then he came back to her.

'Listen, we have only chance to escape the place is that wagon train coming right at.." he looks at his watch, "...5 mins from now. Be ready!"

Somehow they were able to to board on that train. The whole night she cried. The man although remained silent. He never did speak with her a word. Finally the night ends and the morning comes.

Continued in next post...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fabuolous update scott bro😊.sorry mujhe as usual same line firse bolni hogi😆.continue soon😆
Edited by machinegun - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plsss forgive me as am busy cnt cme if
wish u all d best 4 the ff




Edited by radhikarani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Lovely Update Scott Bhaiya...While Reading Ur Story I Feel As I Can See The Happenings !! Awesome Update !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unable to update due to my net modem was down...updates coming shortly.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continued from last post...

The girl somehow manages herself out of her tears and looks back to the guy. He's still seating at the edge of the wagon door, looking outside. She slowly gets up and goes near to the guy, finally sits beside him.

"Why did you save me?" asks the girl. The train is in it's full prime of speed. The winds are just pinching on faces. The guy, crooked eyes due to the wind, looks back.

"Do you have any other question?" the guy speaks out.

"Why? Is this question is hard to answer?" the girl exclaims.

Guy: "I'm not allowed to answer this question?"

Girl: "By whom?"

The guy looks outside, "You will soon know. Ask any question other than these."

The girl is now confused what to ask. But suddenly a question struck her mind.

"What's your name?"

The guy looks back, "Chandu." and then another silence from his side as the train sound speaks louder.

The girl continues, "My name is..."

Chandu suddenly looks at her and interrupts her, "I am not interested in your name. My job was to protect you, that's it. Now my final destination is just to deliver you where it matters." He gets up from the edge and goes back to the wagon.

The girl is somewhat more confused. She can't understand the whole thing. She now waits for the answers.

Continues in next chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Wow !! Please Update Soon !! Loved This Update !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update Scott!! Continue soon its very interesting.

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