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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello...!



Here's my first OS..! 😃 The scene is now where Mihika and Chandragupt are sitting beside the river and Mihika is trying to console Chandragupt.
( Remember the scene of the last epi )

The characters and everything else are the same..I'll just be making a few changes..!



Mihika " Main jaanti hun Chandragupt , ki pehla prem bhulaana bahut mushkil hota hai ! "
She then puts her hand on Chandragupt's shoulder...
Mihika "Tumhe Rajkumari Ji ko bhulaana hoga Chandragupt ! Abhi unka vivaah Bhadrasaal se hone waala hai..! Main tumse ek cheez kahun Chandragupt ? "
Chandragupt looks at her.

Mihika " Main bus yeh kehna chahti hun ki main jaanti hun aur mujhe poora vishvaas hai ki tumhen ek aisi jeevan sathi milegi joh bilkul tumhari tarah hogi..! Woh bhi tumhare jaise veer hogi..!
Chandragupt, tum apne aas paas dekho, tumhein woh zaroor mil jaayegi..!"

Shashank then enters...
Shashank " Chandu ! Woh..woh...Durdhara !"
Chandragupt " Kya hua Durdhara ko ? "
Shashank " Khabar ayi hai ki Dhananand ne unhen maar dala...Kyunki usse pata chal gaya tha ki Durdhara tumse prem karti hai...!

Chandragupt is shocked hearing this and falls on the ground ! He is in tears...he shouts " DURDHARA..! " many times...Tears are rolling out of his eyes...He isn't able to stop his tears from rolling down...
Mihika feels very sad on hearing this. She thinks - Nahin ! 😭Rajkumari Ji ne aisa kyun kara ! Ab Chandragupt toh poori tarah se toot jaayega ! Phir Akhand Bharat ke sapne ka kya hoga ?

She then goes to Chandragupt and speaks to him in a very soft and sweet manner " Chandragupt , Rajkumar Ji ab nahin hain..! Aise rone se kuch nahin hoga ! Agar tum chahate ho ki unki aatma ko shanti mile toh phir aise mat ro ! "
Chandragupt is still in tears...She holds his hand and says " Chandragupt, agar tum aise toot jaaoge toh phir Akhand Bharat ke sapne ka kya hoga..?
Tumhen khudko sambhaal na hoga Chandragupt..! "
Chandragupt doesn't listen to her. He goes away...
Shashank " Chandu ! Kahaan jaa raha hai ! "

That night...
Chandragupt is sitting in the corner of a room and is lost in deep thought...
Mihika enters..
Mihika " Woh...Chandragupt..."
Chandragupt " Haan !"
Mihika " Woh..main..."
Chandragupt " Kya ? "
Mihika then goes and sits next to Chandragupt.
Mihika " Chandragupt, main jo bhi tumse bolne waali hun, usse dil se mat lena...Agar main tumhe yeh nahin bataaungi toh main chain se nahin jee paaungi ! "
Chandragupt " Bolo ! "
Mihika " Main...woh...Chandragupt..main tumse...prem..k..k...karti hun..! "
Chandragupt is quite for a while..he then shouts " ISS KAMRE SE BAHAAR NIKLO ! "
Mihika " Magar..."
Chandragupt " MAINE KAHA JAAO ! "
Mihika leaves...

For the next few days Chandragupt doesn't talk to Mihika...nor does he see her !

One day..
Shashank " Mihika...woh...mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha..! "
Mihika " Kya hua Shashank ? "
Shashank " Main...apse..pr..prem karta hun..!"
Mihika is shocked on hearing this and she runs away...
She thinks in her mind...
Shashank mujhse...nahin !Aisa nahin ho sakta !Yeh kya ho raha hai ! Shashank mujhe maaf kar do..magar mujhe yeh Chandragupt ke liye karna hi hoga...Mujhe Chandragupt se turant milna hai ! "

She goes to Chandragupt...
As soon as Chandragupt see's her, he turns to go away. But Mihika stops him.
Mihika " Chandragupt,please meri yeh ek aakhri baat sun lo...! "
Chandragupt stops.
Mihika " Chandragupt, jo bhi maine tumse kaha tha, woh apne dil se mat lo ! Aur..."
Chandragupt turns to go but Mihika says "Chandragupt ! Ruko ! "
But he still continues to go..
Mihika " Chandragupt ! Rajkumari Durdhara jeevit hain ! "
Chandragupt stops. He turns back and runs to Mihika and holds her shoulders...!
Chandragupt " Tumhe kaise pata ?"
Mihika " Jitna main Dhananand ko jaanti hun...Mujhe lagta hai ki jab Dhananand ko pata chala hoga ki Rajkumari Ji aapse prem karti hain toh usne Rajkumar Ji ko bandhi bana liya hoga ! Kintu usne Rajkumari Ji ko maara nahin hoga ! "
Chandragupt " Sach mein ? Main Durdhara ko mukt karaane jaa raha hun ! "
Mihika " Ruko Chandragupt ! "
Chandragupt stops...
Mihika " Main Rajkumari Ji ko bachaaungi ! "
Chandragupt " Tum ?? "
Mihika " Haan ! Main !
Maine tumse prem karne ki galti ki hai ! Uska upaay matr yahi hai ! Chandragupt, yeh shaayad humaari aakhri mulakaat hogi ! Jai Ho ! Jai Maa Bharti ! "
And Mihika goes away to save Durdhara..

After 2 days or so..
Chandragupt is shocked to see Durdhara !
Chandragupt " DURDHARA ! "
Durdhara " Chandragupt ! "
They both hug each other...But Durdhara is still crying...
Chandragupt " Durdhara, ab sab kuch theek hai ! Tum aise kyun ro rahi ho ? "
Durdhara in a sadly says " Woh..Chandragupt...Mihika ! Usne mujhe Pita Shri se bachaane ke liye...apne praan ka balidaan de diya ! 😭 "
Chandragupt " KYA ?? "
Chandragupt is in tears and goes to a nearby forest for a while...

Chandragupt " Mihika...Mihika ne itna bada balidaan diya ! Usne...😭 Bahut mahaan hai Mihika ! Woh jaanti thi ki main usse nahin, Durdhara se prem karta hun..Kintu tab bhi woh sab kuch sehti rahi...😭
Main Mihika ko kabhi nahin bhula paaunga...Kyunki shaayad...shaayad main bhi usse prem karta tha ! "


How's it ? Do comment !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved It ! I Didn't See Yesterday's Episode But Still I Feel I Could See Everything In Front Of My Eyes ! Even I Can Hear Them Speaking !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Loved It ! I Didn't See Yesterday's Episode But Still I Feel I Could See Everything In Front Of My Eyes ! Even I Can Hear Them Speaking !


Thanks a lot..! 😊 But this is nt based on the previous epi...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg!!!! it was really awsm...feeling very sad for mihi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashi.melodyfire

omg!!!! it was really awsm...feeling very sad for mihi...

Thanks a ton..! 😉
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really awsm riu, luvd it! i swear m in tears now... vry vry well written... jai ma bharti!! 😭 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Are wah wah!!! Kya update tha boss!!! Chalo, ek OS mein hi sahi, ye confession to hua!! Very nice haan!! Loved it a lot!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: frozen.devil

really awsm riu, luvd it! i swear m in tears now... vry vry well written... jai ma bharti!! 😭 👏


Thnks Bhoomi..! :)
Jai Maa Bharti..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: arushi02

Are wah wah!!! Kya update tha boss!!! Chalo, ek OS mein hi sahi, ye confession to hua!! Very nice haan!! Loved it a lot!

Thnx a ton Arushi..! 😃


Thanks a lot...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
ha what a twist. for a moment i thought this wud come in next episode as it felt very very real

great job eh

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